HP: the Years When We Were Rivals with Blake

I particularly like this book. I think the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very well written and delicate! All in all, the plot is still very light and enjoyable so far. There are some minor spoilers below, which can also be regarded as some records of my own reading (?): The deepest impression is that Sirius suddenly lay on the sister's lap. The bad and provocative meaning is very obvious and heart-warming 💓 There is also the Hogwarts tabloid. The CP of the Black Brothers is really funny. How did you do it to make the quarrel very ambiguous? Haha, I was very happy when I read this paragraph. I hope the teacher will keep updating! (*^O^*) OMG I'm here again after reading the full text [smirking] [smirking] The second half is particularly pure and pure love between the two people. Due to family environment, personal personality, etc., The two people are destined to be separated. It is very delicate and well-written! The final he ending made me feel like Hart was soft and [I was about to cry]. Time will dilute everything. People's mentality is different at each stage and there will be different developments. They are all trying to understand each other back then🥺 Overall, it's really great! My language skills are really bad, but I really recommend everyone to read it! (I found it on other platforms, and I fell in love with the boss's style of writing at first sight. Come and see if you don't lose money by investing in it òᆺó) Follow you forever❤️Looking forward to new articles hahaha

I like the protagonist, but this is my first time reading a second-person novel. At first I was looking for the cover + adding books to my bookshelf, and then I really found something I liked (although my reading standards are not very high, but at least I have to have a comfortable experience, the plot is reasonable, the characters are not too OOC and overly whitewashed) Then, I like the protagonist Very humorous (?) Style of writing (?) Okay, forgive me, I have read too many articles recently and it may be a bit confusing, but for me, the reading experience is five stars, the listening experience is five stars, the protagonist control experience is five stars, and the sense of immersion is also five stars. And, I like the protagonist very much The quarrel in the latest chapter (well... There are some spoilers below, but please forgive me) (it doesn't seem to be the latest chapter, but it's not important). I felt very comfortable watching it for some reason (yes, I am the protagonist). Also, Sirius' cp/scandal/rumor (bushi) in the campus newspaper is also very funny. I really like Sirius's expression when he saw his two "brothers" being rumored to be a couple (one is a biological brother and the other is an unrelated brother), especially when he saw this newspaper in the hands of his girlfriend. It's also very funny that James' pursuit of love was rejected and Sirius' pursuit of love progressed like a rocket. Finally, I really liked the main character Highly recommended reading. Although I haven't read many HP articles, this one is at least mid-to-upper level at this pace. (Of course, in my opinion it is)

The writing style is not ordinary and beautiful. I am so happy. It took me two days to read it all. It gave me a withdrawal reaction. Alas, it seems that I will watch the follow-up. It is the best HP fanfic I have read on Tomato so far. I think it is also the best analysis of Sirius in this article. It is really good. I feel that Sirius, the character of Sirius, has a tragic flavor because of his family, growing environment, and subsequent experiences. The author's description of Hate Haiqing's innocence is very appropriate, and Hate Haiqingtian is actually very difficult to grasp. If you don't have a certain literary foundation, it is easy to write contrived, but the big emotions are very natural. I think "It's not the wonderful music that makes the wonderful fingers, just because the flowing water is like a flowing spring." This is the first time I write a long review. I really hope there will be a follow-up. Actually, you lied to us when you said it was the end. [Cool] (Dreaming)

On this day when the wait is finally over, I would like to offer a few thoughts. I may be one of the first people to know the prototype of this article, and I have watched this "child" grow up little by little with my own eyes. When I read the author's previous article, I felt that she was a person with delicate emotions and deep thinking. Sure enough, this article still maintains such quality. A lot of the things we think about Sirius (and the parent generation) are very similar. When I read it, I often feel that "it's just my mouth". I really like the Sirius created by the author - passionate, brilliant, burning, with a bit of arrogance and pride, and the madness that cannot be erased from the Black family's bones. The author also has very in-depth views on the theory of pure blood, war, and love and hate. You will often sigh when reading it. The characters created by the author are also very interesting. The characters in the original work are very close to each other, even if they are only a few strokes; the original characters also have their own flesh and blood. I really like Leona's group of best friends, all the girls have their own personality traits; the brother is also a very charming character, and the part where he takes on the pressure and responsibility for the family is really exciting to watch; I'm also very interested in Adrian. (As expected, are you still attracted to gentle male protagonists? Damn it. Finally, a word about Leona and Sirius. In fact, from an adult perspective (God's perspective), there is no real "irreconcilable" conflict between the two people: if both parties take a step back - but if they each take a step back, they are no longer Leona and Sirius. They are all people with obvious personality traits, pride, and persistence. So, I actually think the te (be) line is more in line with my understanding of this relationship? But maybe everyone generally likes to watch he ( All in all, reading this article is like drinking a glass of perfectly chilled sparkling water on a hot summer day. Very recommended! ——————————— "This was the best of times, this was the worst of times." The stories of family members are like the gilded halo of the setting sun, beautiful but short-lived. This is why we have always been so obsessed with this era.

The author writes very well!ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ You can feel the emotional changes between the heroine and Sirius, and the character creation is also very clear and complex. The pace of the plot is fast and not laggy. More than 40 chapters have already told the life plot of the college, and you can also understand the reasons for their separation. Moreover, the heroine has her own friends, and their friendship is also very sincere. Not as long as most hps on the market? Maybe it's because I personally prefer a faster pace. I was also attracted by the cover at first. The author's writing is very good, very graphic, and also feels very fatalistic? The description of the meteor in the last chapter (so far) is particularly beautiful and shocking. I think this article is a very good article. Well, what strikes me the most is that the heroine is a three-dimensional image. He has his own family and friends. Will he protect his family for his family? Forgive me for not being able to describe it. In short, I hope that this article will be discovered by more people. The author's writing is super good╰(*°▽°*)╯

Teacher, I beg you to update quickly [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] As soon as I entered the Tomato homepage system, I recommended this book. It felt very novel, so I clicked on it. I originally took a look at it and planned to be in a book shortage, but I unexpectedly found a treasure. Very nice! ! ! This book meets my standards very well from the details to the plot rhythm. There is no pretense or pretense, the emotional and friendship lines are just right for me. There are two things I particularly like. One is that the heroine's attitude is very normal. (I'm a bit at a loss for words.) To be precise, the attitude of each character is very normal, very consistent with the original work, and very consistent with the plot. It also has small details like those in real life. At the same time, I have no particular preference so far and can distinguish right from wrong. Another point is that the second-person perspective is very new. Although this kind of second-person perspective has appeared in recent years, this is the first time I have seen second-person substitution in HP fandom. The most important thing is that the sense of substitution is very strong, as if I have really lived there for a long time. My way of describing how good it is is that some book reviews are very long in order to encourage new authors, but for this novel I feel like I have already written it here without even writing a review. Not much to say about the author. Quick update. . Ps. When I first started, I felt like I finished reading it in less than two seconds. )

I fell in love with this book as soon as I saw the introduction. I follow it like crazy. It's delicious. The perspective is very novel. The characters are delicious. The plot is simply explosive. The heroine and Sirius are 1v1, and the Slytherin heroine and Sirius are happy enemies. They pull naturally in both directions. No industrial saccharin. They are evenly matched. The reading experience is particularly friendly. The writing is great. What's more New stable, the heroine is independent and has a bottom line (I really like this!) And the author is very easy to get along with, and I especially want to praise the cover, it is very beautiful, our Leona's painting is so beautiful, I clicked on it when I saw such a beautiful cover, the author is so good, why don't many people see it, please come and show it to me!

Thank you, teacher, for letting us see a carefully crafted Sirius. The be ending made people feel disappointed [almost crying] [crying]. It was a grand be ending, if... No, there is no if. And the ending of he is also tear-jerking [almost crying] [crying]. Sirius suffered a lot, as well as the heroine's helplessness, powerlessness, and despair. The understanding between the two parties when they finally met, and the conflict of separation when they were young were understood, tolerated, and relieved due to growth and time. For me, this he is semi-open-ended. After reading it, I can't help but extend my imagination of the subsequent scenes: whether/how they will defeat the darkness together, their relationship with Harry, what their post-war life will be like, how will both parties learn to tolerate, understand, and cherish? All this is unknown, it just depends on everyone's thoughts... Finally, goodbye. Congratulations on the completion It really captures the sweetness in the early stage and the feeling of heartbreak and loss in the later stage. It is rare to see HP have such an ending. It is not torture for the sake of torture. It has a perfect source of conflict. At the same time, the ending of he is not casual, but really realistic. It is relieved, tolerated and understood due to time and human growth. When I saw such a short chapter, I still had some doubts about whether it could be written with so few words and whether the character settings could be written perfectly. It turned out that it was possible. I rarely leave long comments, but I think this article by Teacher is worth it in my heart.

It's really super pretty! ! ! [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] [Sparrow Eater Masterpiece] [Sparrow Eater Masterpiece] The plot is very compact and novel, there is no cookie-cutter plot, and it greatly integrates my own understanding of the characters. The characters of the male and female protagonists are very independent and will not change because of each other. It also made me see a different Sirius. It is really different from other fanfics. Also, the beginning is really super attractive! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] How come you are so good at writing? Those chapters about Sirius and Leona's Love in the Sea were really fun for me to read! ! ! [Grass has been planted] [Grass has been planted] [Grass has been planted] I am pulling this piece to the limit, hehehe, but when it is sweet, it is really sweet and when it is cruel, it is also really cruel [crying] I hope this book will be a big hit! ! ! I wish the author a happy life and all the best! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

(Implicit interpretation of the plot, there may be spoilers, please read with caution) To this story: This book is the first time I have read a long-form introduction about Sirius. It's very novel, although it doesn't feel like it's very immersive. The sweet but stormy midsummer in the middle part gave me a strong sense of experience, and I even smiled throughout it. The conflict in the later period was very reasonable and made me enjoy watching it. I used to think that falling in love with Sirius was a wonderful thing - he would take her to experience new and exciting things, he would take her on a modified motorcycle to feel the speed of the wind, and he would take her to taste the clinking orange soda in the Muggle world. However - I did forget the "Black" side of Sirius's character - paranoid, arrogant, reckless. Each coin has two sides. He's cool, so he doesn't think about the consequences. He is unruly, so he is inevitably arrogant. It can be regarded as making up for the blank part I have about him. Let's talk about the ending. I always feel that the ending is a bit hasty and does not connect well with the previous chapters. There is a lot of words describing "I"'s reluctance and helplessness in the previous article, but in the be line (I can't see the he line, because I think separation is the best ending to their grand and passionate love), "I" seems to be very straightforward, without any nostalgia (perhaps there is a moment of stiffness when looking at each other), which shocked me a little. In the few years that I have, I always believe that both parties in love can be beautiful and poor, but they are equal in soul. Both Sirius and "I" were impeccable in terms of appearance and family background, but in terms of mind - Sirius regarded "I" as a temporary pastime at the beginning - he might have realized his mistake later on. Perhaps I was too hasty the first time, and I didn't think Sirius would be a perfect partner at first - obviously, the following article confirmed my guess (the vinegar my wife made was very fragrant, and it was very delicious to eat with the dumplings~). As for Adrian, I preconceivedly put him in the role of a bitter male lead - maybe his "bitterness" is part of the performance, but who says that sincerity that is coerced by profit is not sincere? In short, I regret that he did not have the ending I imagined in the following article - but it is not bad, "I" did not choose among them, but chose myself. I hope this article becomes as widely known as I want it to be. Sincere thanks to the author and Rowling. Your loyal readers In July 2026, the sky will be filled with golden light.

I also finished reading it intermittently. When I was reading this book, in the first half, I watched the sweet campus love between Leona and Sirius, their natural interactions, every kiss, every smile, I felt happy with them, and I couldn't help but laugh out loud. By the second volume, conflicts that cannot be ignored appeared. They all had their own persistence and their own reasons. I felt like my heart was being torn in half. I even thought, "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, my cp can't be! Catch me and let this young couple reconcile, please🙏" I felt Leona's pain and entanglement, I even thought I blame Sirius a little. As long as you step back a little bit, you will keep going on and even get married. Of course I know this is impossible. Sirius is not such a person. So when James said "I really always thought you would get married", it hurt me so much that I stabbed him hard and cried [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] At the ending, although I couldn't watch it, I still tasted it secretly, and sure enough, it made me feel pain again. It was not hysterical, just a very calm farewell, and I learned the news about the Potters and Sirius. It was really frustrating, really frustrating, but the other ending healed me [blowing kiss]. I think it's because of the author's good writing style that I was so emotionally involved and felt the emotions of the characters in the book [love] [love] [love] This is a rare good book in HP, it attracts people, and you will definitely not lose money if you invest [like] [like] [like] (As soon as I finished reading it, I wrote a book review non-stop to show my love [love] [love] [love])

After reading it, I, a sexy person like me, wanted to cry all the time. It has been a long time since I have seen a fanfic with delicate writing. After a long time, I was able to stay and read the whole book. I read it based on the surnames of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and then I successfully settled in! It's super beautiful. It's a bit like the feeling of walking in the forest after a wet rain. I like both endings. It's also very delicious. To be honest, it feels like I hate the sea and love the sky. I like that there is a comment in it that says that Sirius is different in every author's works. The setting of this article is very delicious. The ending is also very beautiful. I don't know why it just fits the feeling of London. I love my childhood sweethearts and this intertwined feeling of love and hate, especially the part where there is still love within the hate, and the quarrels and fights in the middle were super fun to watch! So cool! So cool!

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The author's writing is super good! ! ! ! The ambiguous feeling is so touching! This is the first book I have read from beginning to end in one go, and the heroine is also very charming. She is not the traditional weak heroine. She is brave, strong, and smart. I think she and Sirius have the same fire burning in their hearts, so they are unconsciously attracted to each other. In short, it is highly recommended! ! ! Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ

I followed the updates on xhs all the way to Tomato To be honest, the Sirius portrayed in this book fits my imagination very well. His background is still Blake's arrogance, his eyes are black and white, and his final separation from the heroine is inevitable. He cannot accept that his partner is torn between what he sees as justice, a bright future, and leaving for his family. In short, I like this book very much and hope to continue reading it (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's so well written. I didn't read the second person before, but I can read it this time. It's a Romeo-style love, with a little pride and prejudice in the early stage, and very sweet in the middle. It's this kind of fragmented writing that makes it look a little messy, maybe because the book is relatively short. It will feel a bit sour in the middle and later stages. The endings of both versions are actually quite bitter, but it's still acceptable. And it can be seen that the male and female protagonists have similar personalities, but they are not exactly the same. The personalities of other characters are also quite distinct. The emotions of the characters are very well expressed, and you can feel it, and you will not feel that flat. This score is still low, please give me more support, the writing is really good. Because it's relatively short, I finished it in a short time, so I didn't feel bored at all.

The author's writing is very, very good. The Sirius he wrote really captured the feeling in my heart, which is the justice that comes out of the quagmire, but the feeling of being inevitably stained with some dirt. The writing is really touching. His boyhood is also written very lively and enthusiastically, making people feel the vibrant youthful spirit rushing towards them. The heroine is also my favorite type of heroine, bright and sunny, but she also has her own bottom line and her own dark side. From this article, it can be seen that the heroine is growing, and she has been growing in a better direction. She has her own bottom line, and she also understands when her bottom line can be transferred, and what can never be moved. I think the settings in Florence and Italy are particularly delicious. The heroine was born in such a place and was watered by love, so she must have the determination to tolerate others. Therefore, when Sirius is with such a person, both of them will have entanglements, so the writing is really, really good. I also like the author very much. The author is very cute and cute. Most of the comments will be liked or replied. The writing style of this book is also my favorite feeling. It is relaxed and everyday, but also full of vitality, making people feel that this is a real event. In fact, I think the first volume says: There is a dreamlike feeling that I can't explain clearly, like a huge dream floating on the terrifying environment of Britain at that time. It seems that there is nothing, nothing is missing, it seems that everything is just right, everyone lives out their own feelings, has their own life and their own trajectory. I love you, the author is great

I read it in one sitting, the author wrote it so well! The writing is super good and humorous. Sirius also wrote it very deliciously. I really like this kind of arrogant, elegant and a little paranoid Xiaotian. It makes my aunt laugh all the time! !

I feel so uncomfortable. I haven't clicked on Tomato for a long time and then I saw the ending. I felt empty in my heart. This book is comparable to Ode to Glory in my heart. I really like the characters and plots written by you, and I really like your writing style.

I finally finished reading it... I feel empty in my heart. It feels like I've had a long, long dream and I haven't fully woken up yet. At first, I was attracted by the setting of "Slytherin heroine x Sirius", but I found that it was not the kind of love-hate entanglement between college antagonisms (laughs). When the author wrote about the quarrel in the Whomping Willow, Leona retorted Sirius one by one. It made me so happy to see that there was finally a heroine who could not spoil him! But Sirius's words "What if this were me" suddenly made people feel heartbroken. He was not quibbling, he was really afraid that he was that kind of person deep down. Leona is really a good little girl, tolerant and has a bottom line. When two people quarrel, no one will let the other go, but you just know that they actually care to death. The parts about the breakup of the Astronomy Tower and the complete breakup in the corridor were really well written. It gave me the feeling of reading a foreign masterpiece. It wasn't heart-rending in a dog-bloody way, but it made people unable to relax after reading it for a long time... I hate the love of the sea! Cool! The female characters are also particularly well written. Elise went to the United States to become a female writer, Amelia experienced the death of her family and grew up to be the head of the Department of Legal Enforcement in her own right, and Isolde! She and Leona are obviously not on the same path. I really like it when the rational Slytherin thinking collides with Leona's way of thinking. But she will still lend a helping hand. This feeling of supporting each other between women is really precious. The author's thinking about pure blood theory and the general environment at that time also went beyond the simple opposition between black and white. He was not simply criticizing someone or taking sides, but writing about how everyone finds his or her place in the times. Although there is not much space, each character has his own life and ending, and is not a foil to the heroine. To be able to write such a complete portrait of the characters in 150,000 words, the author's grasp of rhythm is really good. There is no skipping chapter in the whole film. The ending of SARS HE is neither too satisfying nor too cruel. I didn't cry after reading it, I just felt my nose was a little sore. How should I put it, it was like a golden dream. It will probably be difficult to get out of this book (sigh) Come on, author! I will be following the next book!

This is the first time I read a second-person novel. There is no pure emotional line in the plot. I feel that each supporting character is well shaped [heartfelt] [heartfelt]. The author also worked hard to analyze Sirius's character. I feel very attentive [full] [full]. The writing style of the whole article also feels very smooth. The heroine did not blindly cater to Sirius. She had family considerations and insisted on her own ideas. When the heroine was hesitant, showing a rational character like Isolde really gave the supporting character a unique personality charm. In short, it is really delicious, whether it is Be or He [laughing] Hate Haiqing is so innocent and delicious

For me, it's really good. It's a tie. I really like the heroine's character, and I can understand her choices. I think it's very real. I hope the author can keep writing. (Please don't give up [crying] [crying] There was a novel I liked very much before and the author stopped reading it. I hope I can see the ending of this book. I really love reading it [sending my heart] [sending my heart])

It can be said that the author is great, you are my god! ! ! The writing is very delicate, and the image of Sirius is very close to the original work, and the emotional line with the heroine is also very easy to relate to. It can be said to be a masterpiece that I have seen. Recommend everyone to read it! *\(^O^)/*

It's really delicious. "Hai Qingtian" is very delicious. I have fallen in love with the author. I feel so happy to read it. I must support it with five-star reviews! ! All my dear friends, come and see this masterpiece! !

The writing is very good [like it] The characters are three-dimensional and full, and the pull between the male and female protagonists is well described. The final quarrel between the male and female protagonists and the breakup of the Cold War made me want to cry (maybe because I am a more emotional person). The plot is not procrastinating, clear and coherent, and is more realistic (but because I have some emotional mysophobia, I can't accept it when I see the female protagonist kissing other people [I almost cry], but I can pretend not to see it). It is still a very good book. I recommend it to everyone.

Personal opinion This is one of the most beautiful fanfics I have read so far, and it will definitely rank in the top three! It's so beautiful and the writing is also good.

It's very beautiful. The conflict in the writing is particularly poignant. I like it very much.

It's very interesting to watch. The first half is sweet but it's so regretful later on. But I have to say that it fits the plot and character very well. It makes me feel that this is the real emotion and character.

The setting is very good. The author's writing of Romeo-style love is very touching. I haven't had such a good experience in a long time. [Crying] The author must continue writing. [Blow kiss]

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