Don’t You Hate Your Master? Then How Did You Become His Dao Companion?

Before reading it, either the introduction to the work or the comments in the comment section were not very good. Since I have not read it, there is no reasonable evaluation. I have read about 40 chapters. The following evaluation is limited to the content within 40 chapters, which involves certain spoilers. Please read with caution if you do not want to be spoiled. As far as the introduction of the work is concerned, it should probably be regarded as the crematorium of twins chasing husbands (personal opinion, subject to the author). However, judging from the content and plot of chapters 1 to 40, the male protagonist's hatred for the female protagonist is basically the same as a quarrel. It seems to be something that seems very excessive, but the big thing is trivialized and the trivial matter is eliminated. The apprenticeship is the first problem. It is obvious that the protagonist has already planned not to consider becoming the female protagonist or consider it temporarily, but because of the female protagonist The master simply agreed and became a disciple with a complacent expression. What about your hatred? [Thinking] Then when it comes to the male and female master's sect, it is a chaos of internal conflicts. When the protagonist has good talent, he not only considers training, but also deliberately targets and maliciously educates, right? The second is the heroine's master. Later, he deliberately arranged for someone to frame his apprentice's apprentice. The reason was that because the apprentice didn't listen to him, and even talked back to him, he framed his own talented disciple, and even gave his apprentice (the heroine) who was good at cultivation to the opponent. This was because he was afraid that his own disciple would develop, right? They all wondered if he was an undercover agent of the opposite party. Then when it comes to the female protagonist, there is nothing she can do. She will only put pressure on the male protagonist. If it is the male protagonist's problem in the first place, then forget it, but shouldn't this problem itself be the female protagonist's problem? Although there is a patch later, it is said that it was because she did not dare to resist the master's arrangement, so she abolished the protagonist, and then reborn, she will only pressure the male protagonist. Finally, I would like to add a light Generally speaking, a yandere is considered a yandere if she is not deliberately paranoid about gravity. This is generally called a psychosis. She has no suppressive power externally and strikes hard internally. Then the author tag says that the female protagonist is strong and the male is weak. I don't see where the female protagonist is strong. The male protagonist is indeed weak. If you say that the female protagonist is strong only in comparison with the male protagonist, then it is indeed very strong. I will not comment on the male protagonist. Just read the comments in the comment area. Finally, I would like to add that as a middle school student, it is indeed okay for the author to publish his work on a public platform for the first time, but the public platform is like this. If it is published, there will be good and bad reviews, especially if the work does have certain problems, there will be more bad reviews. However, it is the first time for the author to create, and I still hope that the author can absorb the experience of this work and supplement his own bad points in his free time. I hope that the author of the next work can create a better work.

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This is the first time the author writes a book. The plot arrangement is not good enough, and the relationship changes too quickly. In a story about a man chasing his husband, it seems that the male protagonist is a jerk. Generally, other authors of this kind of novel will write that the female protagonist works hard for a long time before the male protagonist slowly accepts it, and the readers will not seem so uncomfortable. There is also a very classic ancient content in the plot (I often saw this kind of plot seven or eight years ago), where the male protagonist and the female protagonist are forced to accept marriage or something. It is best not to have this kind of plot. Regardless of whether it is good or not, it is a very big poison in male videos, and it is not a small poison. I read a lot of books, but now there are few that write like this. The author's description of the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists is quite interesting. After eliminating these poisonous points (which I skipped), I can continue to read the daily content. Seeing that the author said that he was still a student, I thought that my emotions were indeed so rough when I was studying seven or eight years ago. . So I have watched a lot of this type of movies, but today's young people are more mature, and it is difficult for them to accept such stupid plots. My cousin lost his love and blocked and deleted a dragon, but the next day he was fine. . It's not like the various pulls and pulls I had before. I read the novel just to bring a better version of myself, not to reflect reality. I'm looking forward to the author's second book.

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Four stars for encouragement. It's not as exaggerated as the comment section said. There's no hint of hatred in the author's early writing. Oh my, if you really can't grasp the angle well, the author can just put a female channel tag and just change the writing a little bit.

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It's pretty good-looking without any glitches, and I love the praise. Judging from the author's final autobiography, it is his first time writing at a very young age, which is quite impressive. I am envious that I can write a complete novel at such a young age! I hope that the more the author experiences and reads in the future, the more he can continue to write better articles! Looking forward to the follow-up!

Give good reviews first and follow up on progress. The plot is very good, not a brainless novel, it has a sense of ups and downs, and the emotional description could be a little more delicate, but it is already very good!

Okay, pretty good

Come on, work harder. They say there are three golden chapters. In fact, I didn't see how much I hate you in the early stages. Just work harder.