Master, Stop Pretending, the Mountain Gate Is About to Collapse.

The pace is slow and the details are well written. Most of the words in the article are devoted to the friendship between the disciples. Please write more about Shen Changxian [I'm about to cry]. There are also a lot of foreshadowings, such as those who rebel against fate and are in debt. Shen Changxian is always on the way to losing blood. Can he not die? The character design is really three-dimensional and the people are very vivid, so can Shen Changxian not die? Come and collect one by one, have you ever considered yourself? Then one update a day is enough. After all, each chapter is almost 6,000 words. The pace is still too slow. It can be sped up a little. In the end, can Shen Changxian survive? [Almost crying]

It's pretty good to read, but the protagonist Chang Xian is a bit marginalized. The article focuses more on the description of Jiang Xiaoman (no bad words) and the other three disciples. Most of the article is about the bond between the disciples. Then the description of Chang Xian feels a bit lacking, and they are very rude to Chang Xian (feeling unqualified). Overall, it is quite warm and worth reading.

It's rare to see a fairy who doesn't follow the Shuangwen routine. Qingya Mountain is ridiculously poor, but the leader seems to be in trouble, but in reality he is silently protecting all his disciples. The plot is not bloody, there is no forced upgrade and crushing, and the gentle core of "living is the most important thing" is hidden in daily trivial matters. From a cracked door plaque to a table of warm porridge and rice, the home of a group of helpless people was slowly laid out. The writing style is light and comfortable, with a good balance of laughter and warmth. If you like the slow-paced group portrait Xianxia, ​​you can read it.

Not bad, the pace is a bit slow, but it has the feeling of a steady flow of water. Everyone is nice. Is there any connection from the past life? I hope Shen Changxian doesn't die! He is the root of Qingya Mountain! Can you write more about Shen Changxian? This Shen Changxian keeps losing blood!

The writing is very good, but it feels like it has been describing the relationship between Jiang Xiaoman and other people. It feels like Jiang Xiaoman has been redeeming other people. I don't like it a bit. Could you describe more about the master Shen Changxian, but overall it feels good.

How should I put it? It was the intention of an "old man" who had guarded an empty house for many years to pick up a child. The introduction is well narrated and summarizes the general content. The main perspective is that of Shen Changxian, the unreliable master. (The following is self-understanding after reading the book. It may contain spoilers, so read with caution) He only guards the Qingya Immortal Sect for who knows how long. It was so prosperous and lively in the past that even the peach trees are not willing to open now. He could only use one IOU to drag himself back to the world, using unreliability to cover up the sober reality. Among them, the multiple collapses and reconstructions of the "Mountain Gate" are also a clue. Is the indifference to face innate or because it has been severely damaged? It can be seen from the details in the article that Shen Changxian's cultivation is not weak, and he can also have a lot. But he just makes do with it, as long as he can survive. It wasn't until the arrival of the first disciple that Qingya Mountain gained some vitality, and he also remembered that he could change his way of life, at least for his disciple. Only then did he start to care about life, because he cared about these children who were suffering. But who cares about him? From the current point of view, his sect may be destroyed, and he is the youngest disciple in it. He became the leader, and no one asked if he was willing, so he could only do this. He silently used his blood to change their lives. Chapter 26, which is the latest chapter at present, says "Qingya Mountain is not short of blood.", I just want to ask, is it short of your blood? Finally, Xiaodao Yiqing's big knife will hurt your body, please don't do it.

The plot is very good, it should be regarded as a non-CP group portrait novel. I like the interaction between the apprentices very much. People who listen to these words "fate" and "death-defying debt" feel panicked. They really want to know what happened in Qingya Mountain in the past. Why does the leader look so bad when he says he owes Lingxiao Sword Sect an IOU? Putting the old IOU and the new one together means that the fate of the two groups of people is the same. They want to change their fate against the will of heaven but in the end...? I don't dare think about it and feel that I will cry😭 The author will update it quickly. I can't read it enough.

It's nice to look at, it feels bland, very plain, and comfortable for you. There are the boss who loves credit, the senior brother who is afraid of pain, the second senior brother who is asked not to do anything, the third senior brother who loves to keep accounts, the fourth senior brother who loves to say sorry, and the fifth senior brother who doesn't like to tell the truth. There are also many temporary or permanent residents. It is very lively and very Qingyashan, and the account books can't be thicker. Qingya Mountain never listens to fate when it recruits disciples. It's really beautiful.

It's very comfortable to watch. It follows the daily route of a relaxed fairy tale. The master hides his strength and pretends to be Buddhist. The disciples have different backgrounds and personalities. There is no messy plot. The author's writing is really good!

It feels really good to me. I never tire of the setting of the hidden boss master leading his disciples. It is lighthearted and funny every day, with a little passion occasionally. The character creation is very successful. It reads smoothly and effortlessly. The more I follow it, the more I like it. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I write with one person's blood in exchange for Shen Chang's peace and tranquility, which will last forever. I really like Master. . . . Please, my wife, please don't abuse me. If the master dies, will Pei Zhaoxue and the others embark on the path of reincarnation just like the master, just to find the master? In Qingya Mountain, no one can be missing. I really feel sorry for Master. I will write this letter in blood in exchange for Shen Changxian's safety and everything goes well.

The plot is pretty good, I guess I'll have to use a knife, but it's okay. The writing is also good, the characters are not rigid and have different personalities. Both Gold Finger and The Past have blank spaces, and there is also some pyrotechnics, which is quite attractive. Let's watch the follow-up, there should be no female protagonist, if there is one, she will deduct stars again.

It's very interesting. Although I've only read a little bit so far, it makes readers want to continue following it. I'm not very good at expressing myself, but the writing is good and the characters are interesting. I like the master very much. He is gentle, powerful and humorous. He seems to be incomprehensible but can always say very philosophical things. The daily life in Qingya Mountain also has a touch of warmth. I hope it's not be... ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥The author, please come on! Looking forward to the next story.

The group portraits are so good-looking and so good. They are from the comic series. They are so good. Shen Changxian is invincible. He is the best in the universe. Everyone else is also invincible and super good! I want to watch the plot, but I feel like there's a lot of talk in the back and it's not as interesting as the front [grievance]

I originally flipped through it casually, but ended up reading most of it in one go. The writing is good and the characters are very three-dimensional, especially the master, who poked me the most. He is usually careless and arrogant, but silently protects all the disciples at critical moments. It is full of contrast. Daily life in Qingya Mountain is also very warm and healing. After seeing the foreshadowing, I feel like it will be cruel later on. I really hope that the ending is not BE, and I want them to continue like this.

A healing fairy tale novel. There is no earth-shattering plot for hegemony, only the trivial daily life of the Qingya Immortal Sect. Master Shanlan uses his own way to protect his apprentice who has a bumpy fate. The deepest tenderness is hidden in the ordinary fireworks. It is warm and healing to read, and it is very suitable for reading slowly during the book shortage.

Yeah, it's very heartwarming and very daily. The interaction makes people's hearts soft. The pace is relatively slow. One chapter is added every day, but each chapter is basically like a super large cup of 6000+. There will be more interactions between the disciples, and there is a touch of humor. Sometimes it feels like there are repeated adjectives, but it's harmless (probably) Master will cough up blood a little bit, huh. Sickly beautiful woman, hehehe. .

I like Shen Changxian. The master could have more roles. I think his strength could also be increased. The plot is slow but bearable. Then the apprentice is great. I just like being sick and weak [please take a closer look], it's best to stay strong and write with great strength.

To be honest, the writing is very delicate and the plot is well connected. I like to see the lively atmosphere between master and apprentice. The only shortcoming is the repeated narration. I mentioned it a long time ago and I will mention it again. It's okay if it doesn't bleed too much, but it's almost always like this. You won't get tired of the same routine. I hope the author can change the narrative mode. It's worth a look if you like to watch group portraits without CP.

It's quite common. I personally think that people are just children when it comes to politeness. I also have a book under my pen. I don't think it's very disrespectful to Master. It's just the nature of children. However, it is worth mentioning that the author's writing is really beautiful and the writing style is good. I am amazed by all the apprentices in it. They are good talents. However, I think this book is a bit marginalized about Master. Looking at the title of the novel, I thought it was mainly about Master, which is a bit problematic. However, I still hope that the author will continue to work hard.

There is a faint feeling of long flowing water, like a waterfall that is neither rapid nor gentle. From a distance, it looks quiet. Only when you are closer can you hear the sound of water hitting the stones and grass blades. It is suitable for reading at night. If it is noisy during the day, you may not be able to understand it deeply.

A super healing and funny fairy tale masterpiece! Qingya Mountain is dilapidated and poor. Master Shen Changguan spends his days sunbathing and fishing. He claims to be an ordinary idle monk. His five disciples have weird personalities and have their own disasters. The world laughs at the poor family and the fact that both the master and the disciples are in trouble, but no one knows that the master has long been fighting against destiny alone and cutting off the tragic fate of the disciples. It is wonderfully written.

I particularly like the portrayal of everyone. The writing is very good, and everyone's plot line has everyone's description. Everyone is written in the center and not on the edge. And I think I wrote about everyone in the group portrait, not just one, so I think it is good to write about everyone. The master's plot line is also very full, although it is a little short in plot, but I think he is the kind of image that is very resistant to pressure and feels more noticeable. I like it very much. The author doesn't care about those who say that they marginalize so and so. You are also the first time to write, so you don't care about what they say. Study hard and follow your own style. Everyone's plot line is very important. Everyone's plot has their own story. Whether it's Lu Mian, Master, Xiao Man, No Return, or Senior Brother, there are rich plot lines and stories.

This book is really nice. It made me cry. The book is both tender and funny. Those who disobey fate put themselves into the game, and their debts follow them. Cry well, a group of little bitter gourds are living their lives seriously. I beg the author not to write about knives.

Although the writing style is a bit immature compared to many books, I think it is really well written. I can probably feel the feeling of wanting to write it. The characters are really lovable. Shen Changxian really made me cry to death [cry] [cry] [cry]. The ratings will definitely get higher and higher! !

It looks great and I feel a little sorry for the main character. But... Vomiting blood is really lustful. It's very nice ❤️. . Totally hits my XP mark. Nice. It's just that when I watched it, I felt that there were too many apprentice scenes.

First evaluation, the advantages of this article are as follows 1. Each character has his or her own distinctive characteristics, and Master has an extremely charming personality. 2. Humorous and relaxed 3. The truth and humanity in the story are so smooth, I bought it! !

The contrast between the protagonist dressed casually and being an expert is full of contrast, and the four apprentices have vivid characters, each with their own highlights. The teacher's daily life is lighthearted and funny, and in times of crisis, the master's actions are extremely explosive. It is both warm and refreshing. The writing is smooth and engaging. The more you read, the more you get hooked.

It's pretty good, looks good and recommended, but I always have the illusion that I'm going to be stabbed ಠ_ಠ

It has that kind of slow-flowing feeling, which is very casual and relaxed, which is still good. Although the apprentices may have basically come out in the later stage, all my characters like it, but it is still good.