Delta Force: Please Stop Teaching the Boss to Camp the Gate

The protagonist is invincible No heroine, no ambiguity No grievances throughout the process The best [laughs] Well, I checked it out a few times, and my objective evaluation is: The whole story is more casual and casual, with not too much fighting and killing. The protagonist is positioned a bit like a father among mothers. Several original game bosses only have deep admiration and reflection on themselves when facing the protagonist. Do you want to say OOC? Actually it's not bad, it's more of a private set. If you just like something a little more joyful and relaxed, then it's worth adding a bookshelf. And regarding the lack of cp, I said that the single man with absolute strength and steel is right, does anyone understand... There is no inexplicable girl appearing, no inexplicable blushing and heart-wrenching beautiful girl who falls in love with the protagonist. There are supporting female characters from other clubs in the article. The descriptions are very normal, not around the protagonist. It is very comfortable to watch, because I rarely use human beings to describe the supporting characters in Delta fan fiction. The content of the article is not too slow. I think it is just right. The plot is very compact. The protagonist has a role, the supporting role has a role, and the scenes are arranged well. Moreover, the current number is less than 200,000 words. I will talk about the plot later. If you have anything you want to ask, you can ask directly. I will read it in my spare time. If you haven't watched it yet and are afraid of being surprised, you can ask me to help you sort out the plot.

Although I don't play this game, the writing is really beautiful and the writing style is very relaxed. I finally found a writing style that makes me feel comfortable. Some of π^π really made me laugh. Recommend. Also, the author is updating very quickly, it's not enough to read [Sending my heart][Asking for more explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Looks good, updates quickly! ! Renew! ! ! Ps: The author has put the Tears of the Ocean in the Marine Corps for you, remember to take ()

It doesn't have many flaws and it's good-looking, but the protagonist is still too kind. This is not Masamune Su-senpai [smile]

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Oh, this is pretty but a little lacking. OS: When will the warden bring me tears? Every time I enter a picture, it takes 5 minutes to complete. After raising the book, I felt something was wrong and came back to take a look at the result. . . Oh no. . . Trench planning. . . Good luck, author, looking forward to the next book😊

Tectonic official! ! ! This is a super good book! ! ! Good night, instructor [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Everyone show me

The structure is rigorous and the characters are vividly described, but I was stabbed in the back by the dog, the source of all evil, [angry] [angry]. I really hope it can continue with more (extras are also good [crying] [crying])

So pretty! ! ! ! It makes me, a person who plays single-player games every day, want to get into the game, but I am too timid to play... One chapter a day is really not enough! However, because I couldn't update today, I updated an extra chapter yesterday, Haji Zuo, you guy.

It took me about a day to read it. Except for the last two chapters, which are not rounded off, the content is quite good. There are few Delta novels that I can read. This one is good. It's just because of the plot that the ending didn't wrap up, otherwise I would probably have written about a hundred chapters.