Traveling Through the Ancient Forest, I Led the Orc Girl to Open up the World

Overall, it's fine and not obviously toxic, but this is a tomato. The first five to ten chapters determine the retention rate. After hundreds of thousands of words, there is no obvious sweetness or refreshment. Now no one is looking at the pure farming fields, which are still suffering, and the farming is not stable. It's almost 400,000 words. I think it's a bit too late to strengthen the protagonist, and it may be that the scale of the current forces is a bit too big. To be honest, there was no such a large tribal force before the agricultural era. There is also a mysterious power involved in the introduction. I haven't read this book for more than a month. I heard that it was changed at the beginning but I am too lazy to read it again. The later chapters are still mediocre. The most important thing is that it has no sugar and no interaction at all. There is no group that is easier to stay than the love brain readers. After all, no matter how poisonous these are, they are willing to read them, let alone the non-toxic ones. I wanted to write a book review on a whim. I rarely write, but I just felt that this book was a pity. I have read over 400,000 words and have no ratings. I feel that it is too far away. Come on

So-so. Two people, one with a serious injury and the other with an injured hand. They just found a cave and they thought about raising animals and farming. They couldn't guarantee that they would have enough to eat and drink every day. So they thought about breeding and farming.

The gameplay time can be seen, and there are frequent minor problems in the setting (there are so many that they really affect the viewing experience). In particular, the description of the nest where the protagonist lives and its surrounding environment confuses me, as well as the orcs' understanding of fire: At first, the lack of knowledge about the use of fire by the black panther was emphasized, but in the end, anyone who came later knew about fire and knew how to use fire, which confused me even more The details and settings are polished and polished, and it can be regarded as a good book. It is very hard-core and has a tight rhythm (but I feel that the content is too repetitive for the hard-core part, and it is a bit too compact, and it feels like there is no time for development)

The author really put a lot of effort into this, and it's not easy to write a book review in the first place. Because the story in the first thirty or so chapters of the first edition is relatively dull, as a book listener, I fell asleep while reading it, so the reading time was particularly long. However, you can clearly feel the seriousness and dedication in the creation and conception between the lines. The details of the interactions and behaviors of the beast girls are also very brilliant, and it feels like it is a pity to throw away the food if it is tasteless. When I planned to pick it up and read it carefully today, I suddenly discovered that the author had almost re-written the previous content. Whether it is the framework or the characters, it can be seen that he has polished it for a long time. He painted the world in his mind into words. I really admire it. What else can I say? The author is awesome. Plus, the current cover is just as cute as the last edition! [Blowing kiss]

At present, I see that I am in my early 100s, and the team is getting bigger and bigger, but it is still running. The wounded cannot recover. The book can only be said to be okay, but it is not suitable for King Jiji to read (at least for me to read it to exhaustion). I think this rating is just right. Those who like a slower pace can read it (this review is for reference only). I will withdraw now. See you again when we are destined, brothers.

Five-star praise. It's been a long time since I've seen such a wild farming story that I could slowly sink my teeth into. What attracts me the most is not simply relying on killing monsters to level up, but the feeling of slowly living a better life from nothing. Fire ponds, wooden walls, fields, medicine sheds, pottery bowls, granaries, patrols, everything does not appear out of thin air. They are all made little by little by the protagonist and everyone. Watching the Fire Wall Village slowly grow bigger, it is really a sense of accomplishment. The characters are also very memorable. Kasha is cold and protective, Linshuang is tough-tongued but reliable, Luya protects seedlings like a baby, Huiluo digs ditches is funny and useful, Scarface talks troublesomely, and works more seriously than anyone else. The daily plot is relaxed, there are laughs, and there is a sense of warmth that is rare in the wilderness. Book lovers who like beast mothers, multiple female protagonists, farming infrastructure, and slow-paced development can give it a try. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. It is a type where the more you read, the more reluctant you are to skip chapters. The most important thing is actually the emoticon packs. The author will make some emoticon packs later. Like, like, like, like [like] [like] [like]

Among the works of the same type, it is well written, and you can see that the author has put a lot of effort into it and is not just making it up out of thin air. The plot is not good. While dealing with various ferocious beasts in the forest, you slowly build a tribe. The overall look and feel is very comfortable. If you like farming survival stories, you can give it a try.

It's a very good book. It can be seen that the author is not taking it for granted. He should have actually seen orcs.

Realistic time-traveling wilderness novels, there is no Ding Ding system, there is no nonsense illogical science and technology, there is no such kind of Long Aotian, there is only survival, a breath of fresh air, it doesn't matter whether it is well written or not, the key is to have a sense of substitution. In Chapter 140, the author gave up what I think is the core highlight, reality and survival, and gave the protagonist an artifact. The combat effectiveness collapsed directly, and the most hard-core thing was lost. It became a third-rate Long Aotian cool novel. You can refer to the Japanese manga "Another World Leisure Farmer". For those who like Long Aotian's harem cool novels, you can read it. If you like hard-core survival stories, no luck, no Dragon Aotian, and no system novels, don't fall into this trap. It is very disappointing. It's a pity that a good hardcore stream has to interfere with Jackie Chan Aotian's harem template.

To be honest, I just casually clicked on this book to take a look at it. Unexpectedly, it became more and more enjoyable as I read it. It is not the kind of article that starts with crazy monsters and upgrades. It is more about a group of people slowly living a good life in the ancient forest. At the beginning, everyone was short of everything. Food, shelter, gunpowder, and granaries all had to be built bit by bit. Watching Huoqiang Village gradually develop fields, medicine sheds, roads, and granaries from the messy fire ponds, I really feel like I grew up watching this village, and the characters are quite likable. Kasha takes care of the male protagonist with a cold face, Linshuang talks little but is very reliable, and Lu Ya protects Miao every day.

Overall, this book is a genre that gets more interesting as it goes on. The first part is about survival, and later on, the division of labor and rules are established, and the characters gradually have their own responsibilities. Watching Huoqiang Village change from a messy fire pit to a place with roads, medicine sheds, granaries, and patrols, this sense of growth is quite attractive. If you like slow-heat infrastructure and the daily life of beast girls, you can try it

The small animals in this book are also very good. The Tibetan chestnut beast and the red-feathered whistling bird both have a strong presence. One turned from a small grain thief into a granary guard, and the other wanted to exchange bright stones for things every day, but he kept getting caught. Although it is only a small supporting role, it has scenes as soon as it comes out, and it also makes the daily life of Huoqiang Village more lively.

It's still very good, except for a few points: 1. In a wild beast that is not even popular, the man is too smart and can raise a dog, which is a bit super model. 2. The battle of wits is a bit too much. The battle of wits started from chapter 50, and the battle of wits started for nearly 70 chapters. So far, it's still pretty good and worth a look.

The roles of Lu Ya and Hui Luo are very good. One protects the field every day and is happy for a long time if the seedlings grow. The other digs ditches every day and almost digs out the road. They don't seem to have much fighting power, but Firewall Village can't do without them. Such small characters can also play a role, which shows that the group portraits are quite thoughtful.

Why does such a beautiful article have such a low rating? When I first saw this rating, I thought it was a bad article. The author is too watery and keeps repeating the same thing over and over again.

Why did I remember that I met the Silver Fox Lady a dozen chapters ago? Have you changed the text? I don't want to speculate on the author with malice, but after the modification, it really has a strong AI flavor. Of course, it may be influenced by a similar style of writing, but it really doesn't look good and affects the perception. "It's not... But..." "No... But..." "First... Second... Third..." Sentences with similar structures also include many excessive modifications and metaphors. I can only say that it is not as comfortable to read as the original version of the text.

The character of Scarface looked quite fierce at first, but then she became more and more pleasing to the eye. She always said that she was troublesome. When others were in trouble, she had to stand up first and take the lead. She also carried heavy wood, big rocks, and road blockages. The labor team part was quite interesting. I felt like she didn't want to admit it, but everyone had already accepted it. She takes care of the heavy lifting.

The more I read this book, the more I felt like it. At first, I came in because of the beast mothers and wild farming, but in the end, I really stayed because of the daily life in Firewall Village. It does not rush to write a great story about the village all at once, but slowly starts from a pile of fire, a little grain, and a wall. Dividing bowls, making pottery, digging trenches, building granaries, and storing grain may all seem small, but when put together they give a sense of accomplishment. It feels like watching a group of people go from hungry to finally being able to drink hot soup in peace and slowly live their lives.

The character Lin Shuang can be written more, I feel she has great potential in the future. Her cold, tough-tongued, action-oriented personality is very suitable for vigils and battles, as well as some daily contrasts. For example, if you say it's not cold, you still take the hot soup; if you say you don't care much, you will actually patrol more times at night. The more a character like this is written, the easier it is for people to like it.

The character of Scarface is really becoming more and more pleasing to my eyes. At first I thought he was fierce, but later I found out that he is actually very suitable for managing the labor force. She refuses to admit that her body is very honest. She will stand wherever it is the messiest, and she will move wherever it is heaviest. This tough-talking, hard-working character is quite lovable.

I personally like characters like Lin Shuang, who doesn't talk much but has a strong sense of presence. She is not the kind of character who deliberately acts cute, but more reliable through her actions. Watching the wind direction, checking for footprints, keeping vigil, reminding others not to wander around, and occasionally making a cold comment are particularly interesting. I hope her plots will continue to be more in the future.

The protagonist made me feel quite comfortable. He didn't pretend to be pretentious at all times, and he didn't rely on forced cheating to solve everything. He mostly uses what he knows to help everyone improve their lives little by little. Fire tunnels, pottery bowls, street signs, medicine sheds, granaries, and dinner pots are all very practical. Writing such details in a wild background is more attractive than simply defeating monsters and upgrading.

The subject matter is very good, and the initial settings are also very eye-catching. However, the orcs are set to use claws for their bodies in the beginning, and they will use tools later. The main reason is that in the story, they encounter accidents all the time, and they can't breathe at all. Normally, they encounter accidents, solve the accidents, then develop, and then encounter accidents again. This one keeps encountering accidents, and they can't breathe at all. Farming has become hide-and-seek. I hope there will be fewer accidents and more development in farming.

I really like the current atmosphere of Huoqiang Village. Everyone may have stayed here just to survive, but now they have gradually started to have their own lives. Some people guard the fields, some patrol, some take care of the food, some dig ditches, some move stones, and even the millet beasts have the job of guarding the granary. This kind of process from chaos to order is very comfortable to watch.

The biggest feeling when reading this book is that it is not in a hurry. He will not push the plot for the sake of entertainment, but will slowly write about how to improve the village, the fire pond, and the fields. The medicine shed and the one-pot meal on Granary Road all look like things you really need to live your life. Those who like fast-paced monster fighting may find it too slow, but those who like farming infrastructure will find it very nice.

After reading dozens of chapters, the story progresses in a relatively natural and reasonable manner. The twists and turns of the plot are particularly attractive to readers. Overall, it is considered a pretty good book of the same type. I hope the author will maintain the characteristics and quality and continue writing.

I really like this kind of farming novel that develops slowly. The plot does not always rely on fighting to keep the pace, but there is something to advance in every chapter. There is an extra road today, the medicine shed will be expanded tomorrow, the granary will be capped the day after tomorrow, and then the grain will be stored for the first time. It looks very practical. Especially in the chapters in the granary, there wasn't actually much food, but when everyone put it in basket by basket, I really felt like I was finally looking forward to the day.

I think the most rare thing about this book is that he writes about life very well. Many of the writings about farming are just one sentence. Here he actually writes about how to divide labor, how to build roads, how to look at fields, and how to store grain. They seem to be small things, but when these small things are piled up, it feels like Huoqiang Village is really built bit by bit, and it is not suddenly made stronger by the protagonist's words.

Although it's a different world, your physique may be different, but if you don't eat meat for a long time, you may have less strength, so when will you stabilize, let's have a hunting team, I look forward to it. The author writes very well, keep up the good work and take care of yourself The fruits on the trees, small beasts, and the patch of rice that belonged to the beast before are now a little less food source. After all, we live in a large jungle, there must be something else. And the protagonist used the Analytical Eye in exchange for the Sacred Artifact of All Things, why didn't he see it. Although the protagonist said that the harvesting of labor is good, I think there are a few big teeth in the back. They are too arrogant in the early stage, and their personalities are not good enough to keep. It is very dangerous. By the way, you can also directly loot their food reserves. This will not make the food too nervous and not too much. With the current update speed, the author can take his time to write everything. After all, now it is not like hiding in Tibet like in the early stage. You can let go a little bit. No matter what happens later, I will continue to give praise. I hope the author will get better and better.

The writing is quite good, and the dangers are everywhere, which is the characteristic of the primitive jungle. The two people support the survival in the dense forest and the writing is very good. The protagonist does not rush forward, is cautious and cautious, and the author writes with peace of mind, not in a hurry, maintaining his own rhythm, and not losing his own characteristics. First give four stars to encourage and encourage. If you write well later, you will be rewarded with stars and rewards [laughter][laughter]