(It will not be connected when changing chapters) [Two male protagonists + non-traditional Western fantasy development system + non-mainstream cool writing + heartthrob + Shura field + sweet and sadistic intercourse + hot outside and hot beauty society + micro group portrait]
Sheen woke up and became an orphan in the fantasy world of the West. His talent was sealed and he was fostered in his family.
Testing his talent at the age of seven, the crystal ball exploded - the twins of light and darkness, the awakening of the time system.
When he was twelve years old, he was in danger in the mountains, exposed his strength and was rescued.
When he was fourteen years old, he went to Mozhou and was assassinated. The guard who had been guarding him in the dark for many years stood in front of him for the first time.
Afterwards, the swordsmanship instructor, childhood friend, adopted brother, fellow prince, and the priest... All stood beside him.
Supplementary settings: double strong, straight man, shota, several be lines
Reader comments
The plot is okay and the writing is good. The writing is very delicate, but maybe I have a quick temper. It is too delicate for me, and it looks stilted. After watching a long section, it was all about describing emotions, but the plot didn't move much. The years when the protagonist grows up, for example, 5 years later, or 7-12 years old, one paragraph per year. These paragraphs are mainly about emotional content with a little mention of growth.
It's not that I don't eat emotions, but now that I'm old, I can't help but feel like I have no mouth, and I'm giggling in my heart. And in the Western Fantasy talent stream, I still prefer to see the protagonist be strong. Even if it is weak in the early stage, I also prefer to see the protagonist tempering himself instead of feeling sorry for himself for emotion.
I have only read a little bit, about a dozen chapters, and I don't feel the obvious points in the author's writing. It just doesn't suit my taste. Maybe the protagonist will be very powerful in the future, and maybe it will suit my taste later. I will continue to wait and see.
There is nothing wrong with what the author wrote. I wish you good luck with your writing.
It's still a grind, and it's not exciting enough. The only exciting thing is the talent.
Good-looking (♥∀♥)[blowing kiss][sending heart][like][understood]
[Straight men, this setting is very good]
Come on, boss, I forgot to review the book after reading it, so this review is a month late, but boss, I have been chasing it all the way, from the original 100,000 words to the current more than 200,000 words. Although it is very difficult to chase the book I like more, looking back, I will be shocked and delighted by my persistence. It is even more uncomfortable to catch up to the end. There are not many books that allow me to do this, but I will definitely follow him to the completion of this book! ! ! [Salute][Salute]
Everyone has their own aesthetics and standards. No matter what others think, I like this book anyway. If you disagree, don't force it. I will always follow you! [Salute]
I also want to encourage you by posting this comment. I am not picky about the specifications of articles. It doesn't matter if there are too many words in a paragraph. It doesn't matter if there are too many or too few punctuation marks. I don't care whether the beginning is attractive or not. When I read an article, I look at the content and the core, not just whether the beginning or the end is gorgeous or attractive. I am not a Chinese answer sheet corrector.
The number of words in each chapter doesn't matter to me. If I feel like I'm reading a chapter slowly, I'll check the word count. There are many words and I like the content, so I just feel that it's enjoyable to read. And those kind of words are full of content and bad. Sorry, I have never seen anything like this [laughs]
The above content is what I really want to say about the book and the author. It contains only my personal thoughts. It may offend some people, but if you feel uncomfortable, you can skip it. There are no words in this long review that insult people who disagree with me.
It's okay, with a few minor flaws. You can read on. (。・ω・。)ノ♡
It looks good, please leave a comment. I want to see the ratings quickly.
I like this kind of Western fantasy style book the most. This kind of book is really rare, and even fewer are well written. But this book is different. The content is novel, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the writing is good. The interactions between Sheen and his friends and family make people feel warm. To sum up, it looks good, very good-looking, very good-looking. Looking forward to the follow-up [blowing kiss]
I would like to ask, how many male protagonists are there? Or do you want to keep it all in your pocket? Hehe
Super Invincible Explosion is good to watch. If you believe me and want to read cool stories, just jump in and you're done.
The subject matter is very new and the writing is very good. The only drawback is that the author is too slow to update.
Okay, okay, no problem!
It's very interesting. I really like this kind of cool writing. The setting is also very unique.
How can it be so delicious!
It's beautiful and the subject matter is very new.
Like this book very much
It's really beautiful! Come on!
The author writes very well! The plot and writing are all online [Blow Kiss] I enjoyed watching the plot of the group pet [Adoration]
The plot is okay and the writing is good. The writing is very delicate, but maybe I have a quick temper. It is too delicate for me, and it looks stilted. After watching a long section, it was all about describing emotions, but the plot didn't move much. The years when the protagonist grows up, for example, 5 years later, or 7-12 years old, one paragraph per year. These paragraphs are mainly about emotional content with a little mention of growth. It's not that I don't eat emotions, but now that I'm old, I can't help but feel like I have no mouth, and I'm giggling in my heart. And in the Western Fantasy talent stream, I still prefer to see the protagonist be strong. Even if it is weak in the early stage, I also prefer to see the protagonist tempering himself instead of feeling sorry for himself for emotion. I have only read a little bit, about a dozen chapters, and I don't feel the obvious points in the author's writing. It just doesn't suit my taste. Maybe the protagonist will be very powerful in the future, and maybe it will suit my taste later. I will continue to wait and see. There is nothing wrong with what the author wrote. I wish you good luck with your writing. It's still a grind, and it's not exciting enough. The only exciting thing is the talent.
Good-looking (♥∀♥)[blowing kiss][sending heart][like][understood] [Straight men, this setting is very good]
Come on, boss, I forgot to review the book after reading it, so this review is a month late, but boss, I have been chasing it all the way, from the original 100,000 words to the current more than 200,000 words. Although it is very difficult to chase the book I like more, looking back, I will be shocked and delighted by my persistence. It is even more uncomfortable to catch up to the end. There are not many books that allow me to do this, but I will definitely follow him to the completion of this book! ! ! [Salute][Salute] Everyone has their own aesthetics and standards. No matter what others think, I like this book anyway. If you disagree, don't force it. I will always follow you! [Salute] I also want to encourage you by posting this comment. I am not picky about the specifications of articles. It doesn't matter if there are too many words in a paragraph. It doesn't matter if there are too many or too few punctuation marks. I don't care whether the beginning is attractive or not. When I read an article, I look at the content and the core, not just whether the beginning or the end is gorgeous or attractive. I am not a Chinese answer sheet corrector. The number of words in each chapter doesn't matter to me. If I feel like I'm reading a chapter slowly, I'll check the word count. There are many words and I like the content, so I just feel that it's enjoyable to read. And those kind of words are full of content and bad. Sorry, I have never seen anything like this [laughs] The above content is what I really want to say about the book and the author. It contains only my personal thoughts. It may offend some people, but if you feel uncomfortable, you can skip it. There are no words in this long review that insult people who disagree with me.
It's okay, with a few minor flaws. You can read on. (。・ω・。)ノ♡
It looks good, please leave a comment. I want to see the ratings quickly.
I like this kind of Western fantasy style book the most. This kind of book is really rare, and even fewer are well written. But this book is different. The content is novel, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the writing is good. The interactions between Sheen and his friends and family make people feel warm. To sum up, it looks good, very good-looking, very good-looking. Looking forward to the follow-up [blowing kiss]
I would like to ask, how many male protagonists are there? Or do you want to keep it all in your pocket? Hehe
Super Invincible Explosion is good to watch. If you believe me and want to read cool stories, just jump in and you're done.
The subject matter is very new and the writing is very good. The only drawback is that the author is too slow to update.
Okay, okay, no problem!
It's very interesting. I really like this kind of cool writing. The setting is also very unique.
How can it be so delicious!
It's beautiful and the subject matter is very new.
Like this book very much
It's really beautiful! Come on!
The author writes very well! The plot and writing are all online [Blow Kiss] I enjoyed watching the plot of the group pet [Adoration]