The thing Lin Lan is best at in life is thinking he's doing all right.
Burned the meal? It's all right. The firewood's wet? It's all right. His parents died young? That's all right too. So when a wandering Daoist discovers he's got a false spiritual root, meaning “there, but practically nonexistent,” he thinks for three seconds and says, “That's all right. At least I've got one.”
Meanwhile, the quiet little girl next door, Su Jin'er, is found to possess a Lunar Sacred Body, a rarity unseen in a thousand years. The Daoist is so excited his beard trembles as he offers to take her to the Qingyun Sect to train. She stands beneath the old locust tree at the village entrance, eyes red, clutching Lin Lan's sleeve and refusing to let go.
“If he doesn't go, I'm not going either.”
That year, Lin Lan was twelve and Su Jin'er was eleven. The mountain path was long, and whenever she grew tired, he carried her.
On the day they entered the sect, the sect leader personally oversaw the spiritual-root test. Su Jin'er's spiritual root lit up the entire mountain, and the elders swarmed around her. When it was Lin Lan's turn, the steward expressionlessly wrote a line on the jade board: “False spiritual root. Lowest-grade aptitude. Assigned to the outer sect's labor quarters.”
Su Jin'er was taken to Cloudtop Peak, where she lived in a cave dwelling thick with mistlike spiritual energy. Lin Lan was led to the foot of the mountain and put in a shared room with more than a dozen others. His master was a broom.
Everyone said that from that day on, the two of them would live in different worlds.
Everyone was wrong.
I feel a little depressed and have a stomachache. I can't watch this kind of plot where lovers are broken up. I'll watch it after the two get together.
The structure is clear and concise, and you can feel the author's effort in writing. For me personally, the only drawback is that the whole story is too depressing. Even Luotuo Xiangzi would have made some mutton to improve it. Let's add some happy little moments in the middle.
Although the plot of traditional grass-roots immortality novels is very classic, the reason why it is a classic is because it is still attractive after being written. I'm so confused😦, what does this Qingyun Sect mean? There is no need for people who are related to the sect's genius to die even if their talents are too poor! The protagonist tried his best to save the heroine, but in the end he was dying and had to ask the heroine to plead for mercy before rescuing the hero. It turned out that the reason why the boss didn't want to save the hero turned out to be because of his bad reputation! They are already cultivating immortals, so reputation doesn't have much impact on their cultivation. Besides, what impact can a friend with poor talent have on the heroine's reputation? What I know is that the author wants to suppress the protagonist and give him motivation to practice. What I don't know is that the author likes to torture the protagonist [punch out] After reading it, it turns out that the heroine has been in seclusion for three years, so she might not have a three-year date. The male protagonist is only in his Qi training period now, and I feel like the author is far away from the title [Chigua]
Good. To be honest, the author's logic and writing style are not very good. But it's inexplicably comfortable to watch. It's not ugly or ugly. In short, just two words "okay". But logically it should break.
Turtle man with a great mentality 🤦🤦🤦
After reading a few chapters, it was okay, and we could talk about it in a normal way, and then it was a relationship that could bear the separation, and it was an embrace that transcended inferiority.
Brothers who have never eaten that kind of food can be very full here.
The writing style is quite comfortable, but these days it's not that exciting to write about this kind of ancient traditional useless style, the style of beating mandarin ducks with sticks 😂 It's really a bit self-destructive
It looks okay so far. It may not be very exciting in the early stage before the golden finger arrives, but the narrative rhythm is steady and steady. The current evaluation is solid.
The plot is okay, and the protagonist is not the kind of person who always wants revenge, but the sect is almost interested. Let's see if it will change in the future.