After I Picked up the Master, All the Fairies Focused on Me.

It looks good, the writing is average, the plot is interesting, there is not so much fighting and killing, it is mainly about daily life, by the way, the master, the senior sister and the little demon girl gave me a lot of electricity when they were going through the tribulation, a group of shotaiko [laughs]

It looks good. Don't worry about other people's comments. Just look at it the most. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage. Very relaxing daily life, much better than those mindless and cool articles. It is updated steadily every day. Come on, author!

I've read 50 chapters, and the writing and artistic conception are spot on, and the characters are pretty good. If I have to pick a flaw, it's that I came too early. The book only has less than 200 chapters, but 6,000 updates per day is really good.

I finally found gold in 💩. It seems that the guarantee has been triggered. There are currently no poisonous points. Just take a look [smile] Hurry up and get the rating, live happily, I want to see the follow-up, [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]

It's been a long time since I've come across a book that made me feel the need to review it. When I first read it, I just felt that the author had a good control over the characters. It is a good emotional novel worth reading. I can read a lot of relaxation and comfort in the daily life in the article. However, the part that seems like memories and seems like the past in the second volume is really the climax of the article. It shows a very good writing style. It writes a sense of sadness in the calm daily life. It is quite necessary to write to make daily life feel heavy. The author writes this part quite viciously. A master with a nine-aperture glazed heart who had never experienced inner demons broke into the disciple's inner demon tribulation out of concern. Inside, he and the disciple became the childhood sweethearts of the senior sister and younger brother. In seemingly ordinary daily life, due to an extraordinary attack, the younger brother's Dantian was shattered and fell into pieces. As a mortal, the senior sister, who has never encountered setbacks in her spiritual practice, searched for opportunities and traveled across the five continents. Unfortunately, things didn't work out as she wished. When the junior brother gradually fell silent in the dusk, the helplessness and sadness around her broke the warm daily life in front of her and gave the words thickness. A highly recommended book

The relationship between the male protagonist and the various female protagonists is well laid out. If you like the pure love harem, you can watch it. The daily writing is good. The cultivation in this book is a bit slow. It seems to be based on the upgrade progress of a mortal's biography of immortality? (I don't understand it well if I haven't seen it.) The biggest problem is still a bit bland. The protagonist has a smooth journey. The plots in places like the Secret Realm and the Junction Continent can be written with more twists and turns. The protagonist is rarely caught between life and death. As a result, even if he defeats powerful enemies and obtains secret treasures, it is a bit boring and unpleasant to read. But Mo Qing's conspiracy may be a breaking point later in the plot, and I hope it can be improved.

It's okay, there's no impressive plot, it's just mediocre and boring to watch, it's okay to pass the time. The protagonist has no highlight moments, nor is she a spiritual genius. In terms of strength, she is always downplayed for some inexplicable reasons. Maybe it is because she wants to show off the genius and strength of the heroine. There was no pretense, just a few heroines fell in love with the protagonist inexplicably, and they didn't even start giving out sweets. Then the protagonist was separated for some inexplicable reasons, and then he met several other heroines. It's bland, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

I feel that the writing in this early stage is okay, mainly because the progress is a bit slow, and the male protagonist's character is a bit soft in the early stage. We still have to wait for the male protagonist's growth later to draw a conclusion. It is still worth looking forward to the follow-up. It is indeed rare to find male protagonists in immortality novels with no system, no rebirth, no reincarnation, and no parents with a big background.

I saw the latest chapter and gave it an objective review: Advantages: The writing style is quite good. It follows a path of cultivating immortals similar to that of mortals. The focus is still on the entanglement between the protagonist and the woman. The battle is secondary. The plot does not seem to have major problems at the moment. The emotional scenes are relatively delicate, not industrial saccharine. Most of the characters and behaviors are quite reasonable. It has the legacy of cultivating immortals ten or twenty years ago. A few questions ① There are still relatively few slow-paced immortal cultivation + multi-female Shura field in 🍅. The Mo family is still writing this book. The number of female protagonists is still increasing. It is difficult to say how many chapters will be written in the future. In fact, 3-5 is enough for this kind of slow-paced immortal cultivation and harem. I hope not to accept too many women in the future, otherwise you will bite off more than you can chew ② Many book friends generally mentioned that the character of Xiang Shishi is not likeable, and I am the same I think so, the character's past is indeed very pitiful, but the role of a vase with no opinion is really not attractive, even if you impose an alchemy talent. ③ Pressure on the realm, this is a matter of opinion, I think it is okay. The protagonist's martial arts talent is full, in fact, from the perspective of the mortal flow, the protagonist's realm improves very quickly, and the master is currently a reincarnation immortal. After that, the combat power is full, but it is indeed a bit of a pressure on the realm.

The relationship between the male protagonist and the various female protagonists is well laid out. If you like the pure love harem, you can watch it. The daily writing is good. The cultivation in this book is a bit slow. It seems to be based on the upgrade progress of a mortal's biography of immortality? (I don't understand it well if I haven't seen it.) The biggest problem is still a bit bland. The protagonist has a smooth journey. The plots in places like the Secret Realm and the Junction Continent can be written with more twists and turns. The protagonist is rarely caught between life and death. As a result, even if he defeats powerful enemies and obtains secret treasures, it is a bit boring and unpleasant to read. But Mo Qing's conspiracy may be a breaking point later in the plot, and I hope it can be improved.

Very nice, really nice. I just felt a little regretful, and wanted to read the story of the cute little junior brother Shota and the gentle master Gao Leng senior sister, but it turned out that the young junior brother had to exercise. What a pity! Junior brother yes! Muscle Man No!

To be honest, the author's writing style is really good. Overall, I feel that this book is very good, but the pace is a bit slow. Many people may not be able to bear it, but it is really good to read, and there is something different about Master [crying] [crying] [crying]

Brother, don't look at simplicity. If you are used to reading cool novels, you might as well stop for a moment. This is a good novel. Although the writing is not exciting, it is comforting. The content is simple yet interesting. I think you'll like it [laughs]

The author's writing style is strong, and the simple words are full of true feelings. It is the first time I read the novel on Tomato and I can see the warm feeling. I look forward to the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine as he grows up. RecommendationRecommendation[smirk][snicker][snicker]

A very good book, harem, non-toxic. When the protagonist grows up, he will eat it ruthlessly. It's a slow show, but it's really good to watch. I don't know when the protagonist will be able to eat it. Anyway, all the female characters who have appeared so far like the protagonist. Anyway, it's not a eunuch article. I guess I haven't read much of it.

It's rare to find such a traditional fairy tale nowadays. It's very well written. The writing of Huang Liang Yimeng is very average. From the overall structure, it can be said that it is not good, and the plot has not been advanced very much.

It's good-looking. Although the pace of practice is very slow, people who prefer daily life still like it very much.

It is definitely a work of heart, not to mention every character, as long as it is a character who has appeared for a long time, he is trying his best to create a complete and comprehensive character. It is not just a random writing. The writing is also very good at this level. There are definitely shortcomings. First of all, the emotional scene of the senior sister is so-so, and then the scene transition is really confusing. Sometimes I can't understand it. I have read half of it now. I will continue to comment after I finish it. I have finished reading it seriously, and now it's time for me to read the book, which is my favorite part. If you don't update a hundred chapters, I won't read it [laughing]

A good book, with multiple female protagonists and harem stories, master and apprentice Qingmei Tiansheng and senior sister, everything you need, two masters and a senior sister, a Qingmei, and another Tiansheng. It is very enjoyable, a large amount of content, and there are many updated chapters, which is very suitable for catching up [laughter]

I'm quite surprised, the plot is relatively slow, but the author's writing style is very good, and the writing has a sense of daily life, and there are more pits to dig. The master and Sister Luan are both very well portrayed. The plot is not developed at the moment. Let's wait and see what will happen next. To be honest, I feel that the male protagonist is being trained to be like Guo Jing, who is honest but affectionate. Maybe he will become smarter and more diplomatic later on.

The daily life is very good, the writing is good, and the protagonist seems to have relatively ordinary spiritual qualifications - mainly because he has ordinary spiritual roots and good physical training qualifications. I have also read the second volume. I started to feel a little bored here. Overall, the first volume is good. It is a rare book that can be read in Tomato

The morning is like blue silk and the evening is like snow. When I meet you, I will be destined for life. I just want life and death to follow each other. Good books need to be read quietly. Good books are rare in this fast-paced society. They have delicate and warm feelings. Only when you read each sentence carefully can you feel the delicate emotions hidden under the words. You can read them when you feel uncomfortable. The warm emotions may dilute the haze in your heart. I have loved reading novels since I was a child. When I first started school, I read Yashe, Dou Po, Douluo and others after class. After reading for more than ten years, I feel that reading novels by myself is more experiential than listening to books. Listening to books is easy to forget, but reading with eyes can make you remember deeply and understand better. The author writes very well, the protagonist's outlook on life is very positive, the character creation is warm and affectionate, and it makes people feel very comfortable. I hope my book review can help you. If not, I hope you can find a book you like. If you also like this book, you can give a five-star review and a five-star follow-up review. This is also a recognition and encouragement for new authors who create with heart✌︎' ֊'

The writing is good and tends to be about daily immortality. It reminds me of when I first came into contact with immortality novels. It's really good! ! !

Overall, it's pretty good. At least the first volume is quite to my liking. This volume is different from the traditional cultivation of immortality. It focuses on daily life and is quite relaxed and enjoyable. So after the map was changed in the second volume, I was not so adaptable and enthusiastic. But after all, it is not a streamlined immortal cultivation novel. This can really be felt that the author has put his heart into it, especially the delicate daily life of the first volume. If you like this, it will definitely be worth it.

This is my first time writing a book review, and I can only say that this book was a hit. The overall story is more daily-oriented, the author's characters are very well created, and the interaction between the protagonist and the heroines is really sweet. So far, there haven't been any surprises (the work has been done very well). Just don't let my senior sister become the district king. Now I just want to see my senior sister face Xiao Ji Ji Yan Yan [laughs] (There is also a quick update for Laozuo, please don't force me to beg you)

The pace is slow, and there was nothing particularly exciting when I first watched it. Personally, I prefer to watch three-dimensional movies, that is, character creation, whether they are good or bad. The character creation in this book is very good and three-dimensional.

It's good-looking, I feel comfortable watching it. The protagonist is not Long Aotian, he is a local without a system. It is finally not the kind of plot where the protagonist does some SB tasks and then rises all the way up. The rhythm is also very good. Although it is more daily life, it does not make people feel boring [shy] [shy] [shy], good-looking [admiration]

I'm so sincere, I couldn't help but comment after watching it for a long time, and the opening setting is also very interesting. It describes the growth from a young child. The master treats the protagonist as a big sister. This really pokes me hahh

Yysy, a very nice book. But I have a question, how long will it take for them to break through the golden elixir? Neither senior sister nor Mo Yuan seems to have succeeded in breaking through [what]

[Chigua] The whole book is not too poisonous! Not a cool article! Personally, I feel that it belongs to the cultivation type! Except within the first 30 chapters! The rest are basically about 100 daily chapters about going to the Demon Realm! [Eating Melon] Personally, I feel very good! Now you can see the content of the Demon Realm Competition and wait for the update! The author updates quickly!