After I Picked Up a Master, Every Fairy Started Keeping an Eye on Me

It looks good, the writing is average, the plot is interesting, there is not so much fighting and killing, it is mainly about daily life, by the way, the master, the senior sister and the little demon girl gave me a lot of electricity when they were going through the tribulation, a group of shotaiko [laughs]

It looks good. Don't worry about other people's comments. Just look at it the most. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage. Very relaxing daily life, much better than those mindless and cool articles. It is updated steadily every day. Come on, author!

The relationship between the male protagonist and the various female protagonists is well laid out. If you like the pure love harem, you can watch it. The daily writing is good. The cultivation in this book is a bit slow. It seems to be based on the upgrade progress of a mortal's biography of immortality? (I don't understand it well if I haven't seen it.) The biggest problem is still a bit bland. The protagonist has a smooth journey. The plots in places like the Secret Realm and the Junction Continent can be written with more twists and turns. The protagonist is rarely caught between life and death. As a result, even if he defeats powerful enemies and obtains secret treasures, it is a bit boring and unpleasant to read. But Mo Qing's conspiracy may be a breaking point later in the plot, and I hope it can be improved.

It's okay, there's no impressive plot, it's just mediocre and boring to watch, it's okay to pass the time. The protagonist has no highlight moments, nor is she a spiritual genius. In terms of strength, she is always downplayed for some inexplicable reasons. Maybe it is because she wants to show off the genius and strength of the heroine. There was no pretense, just a few heroines fell in love with the protagonist inexplicably, and they didn't even start giving out sweets. Then the protagonist was separated for some inexplicable reasons, and then he met several other heroines. It's bland, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

I've read 50 chapters, and the writing and artistic conception are spot on, and the characters are pretty good. If I have to pick a flaw, it's that I came too early. The book only has less than 200 chapters, but 6,000 updates per day is really good.

I finally found gold in 💩. It seems that the guarantee has been triggered. There are currently no poisonous points. Just take a look [smile] Hurry up and get the rating, live happily, I want to see the follow-up, [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]

It's been a long time since I've come across a book that made me feel the need to review it. When I first read it, I just felt that the author had a good control over the characters. It is a good emotional novel worth reading. I can read a lot of relaxation and comfort in the daily life in the article. However, the part that seems like memories and seems like the past in the second volume is really the climax of the article. It shows a very good writing style. It writes a sense of sadness in the calm daily life. It is quite necessary to write to make daily life feel heavy. The author writes this part quite viciously. A master with a nine-aperture glazed heart who had never experienced inner demons broke into the disciple's inner demon tribulation out of concern. Inside, he and the disciple became the childhood sweethearts of the senior sister and younger brother. In seemingly ordinary daily life, due to an extraordinary attack, the younger brother's Dantian was shattered and fell into pieces. As a mortal, the senior sister, who has never encountered setbacks in her spiritual practice, searched for opportunities and traveled across the five continents. Unfortunately, things didn't work out as she wished. When the junior brother gradually fell silent in the dusk, the helplessness and sadness around her broke the warm daily life in front of her and gave the words thickness. A highly recommended book

To be honest, the author's writing style is really good. Overall, I feel that this book is very good, but the pace is a bit slow. Many people may not be able to bear it, but it is really good to read, and there is something different about Master [crying] [crying] [crying]

Very good fantasy multi-heroine 1. The character creation is okay. The female characters have their own personality characteristics. The growth of the male protagonist is also described. The emotional development and the character's mental journey have certain logic and characteristics. It is not the kind of stud novel that you can just accept. 2. After all, it is a day-to-day story. The advancement of the main plot feels a bit slow, and the progress of the protagonist's realm is a bit slow, but it is acceptable. Some contradictions and conflicts are not obvious. The writing is less, the pace is not fast, and there is not too much scheming. It fits the label of daily writing. 3. To be honest, there are quite a lot of foreshadowings, which make people want to continue watching. There are also some settings, some of which are older, and some of which I think are quite interesting. 4. Some plots may be written a little strangely (I personally feel that), such as Huang Liang Yimeng in the emotional development of the master. The subsequent development feels a bit rushed and a bit strange. Come on, author, I look forward to your subsequent stories.

It's rare to find such a traditional fairy tale nowadays. It's very well written. The writing of Huang Liang Yimeng is very average. From the overall structure, it can be said that it is not good, and the plot has not been advanced very much.