The Outcast: Wait, How Can You Draw a Real Dragon?

It can only be said that there is room for improvement~ According to the original work, the character's personality is only a superficial description~ Lu Zhenlong is dull but not stupid~ Just say that when you first meet him, you will have a stereotype~ Lu Zhenlong may not have heard of the protagonist, but he must have heard of Wang Bing and the reputation of the Wang family~ It's not too much of a bragging about children bullying men and women~ According to my personal opinion, the Lu family may not be at odds with the Wang family, but they will not agree with the Wang family's behavior~ I will reply later Looking at Lu Linglong's description, it's more like pure stupidity~ Let's talk about Hu Jie's part~ It's still hard to tell whether Xia He's description is close or not, but Shen Chong looks like a reckless man~ He doesn't have the sense of shrewdness like a businessman. After all, my initial impression of Shen Chong is more like a businessman who lends money is very shrewd~~ And Quanxing is an organization... Will he really rush in and kill someone just because his opponent comments on him and uses aggressive tactics? Generally speaking, the character description and perspective logic of the characters are a bit rusty... I'll give it a four-star encouragement~[Thinking]

Personally I think it's good I started to dislike it, the protagonist was a little too obsessed with selling the country's treasures. It was those cultural relics, and then they kept killing, and the people from the company kept chasing, and then negotiated, and even if they were negotiating to arrest people, they didn't first check what they had done. I desperately wanted to change the Wang family's approach and judge my relatives with extreme justice.

Give yourself a five-star rating

Xia He can die, but not too early. I think it would be better to kill him in front of Zhang Lingyu.

The protagonist's goal is clear and clear, and he doesn't blindly follow the plot. The characters are all vivid and not unbearable. I think it's good.

It's pretty cool to look at, and it kills decisively. (Personal feeling)

Not bad, keep up the good work

This is the magnanimity that the Wang family should have. If you are proficient in painting and text, it would be great if you could paint Yanhuang/Xuanyuan/Chiyou/Suirenshi.

Invincible, it's been a long time since I've seen a novel that appeals to my taste [Like]

Yes, it looks great. Good luck to the author.