At the Beginning of the Chase in Another World, I Turned over to the Country

There are a lot of double-crossing articles recently, ah, there are also a lot of this kind of cooperation with the state. However, some protagonists are strong, and some protagonists are powerful and have their own strength, and it is more of a form of cooperation with the country. The protagonist of this novel is very ordinary. Although he has become a super soldier, he still has an ordinary person's mentality. The country also tends to be bound together and is a national destiny-type figure. It feels closer to reality, comfortable to watch, and many details are handled well. Come on, author!

Overall, it's okay, but the early pacing is a bit suppressed. The crushing game like the latest one is what readers want to see. There is also hope that there will be more female protagonists, who can marry the opposite princess, etc. The reason is that the male protagonist is too powerful and the female protagonist cannot stand it.

It's not bad. The protagonist is a time traveler with a normal mind. It's not like other books where all the angry young people are embarrassed.

I haven't read many chapters, but the force value has basically collapsed a lot in the past. If you transport people there, you transport less things and fewer weapons, which is also reasonable, but why not transport some more powerful weapons? It has to be a rifle, a Barrett, a sniper rifle, an automatic artillery or something? Grenade C4 braking cylinder, TNT, black lock essence, just these few fixed points, blast and mine, as long as the enemy dares to attack, release the line and stab the surrounding football field, it will not kill them all, it doesn't matter what level you are, not to mention your combat power, the third level can't carry bullets, I don't believe you can handle the black lock gold TNT high-explosive bomb? Expand the mines, ah, remote control, it really doesn't work, get some small nuclear weapons, just these few, I don't care who you are, throw it in, you won't die even if you don't see it, and besides, you have nine hours, as long as you hide for nine hours, you go back, come back and hit it with one more, I don't believe they will all die, so the country behind you will sort out the weapons. With extreme combat effectiveness, just fight to the death. Kill them at the beginning, then stabilize the rear and then slowly move the people over there. Expand the base, then take in the refugees from the east, then expand the army to directly occupy a place. Anyway, the platinum drops. After it drops, expand the transport capacity at the back. The upgrade you can upgrade should be for transporting supplies or something. You should also upgrade, right? Will coins come up again, will there be more weapons, will satellites be sent up to control the entire planet, and the entire continent will be looked at to see where there are threats, and then two more nuclear weapons will be launched, and remotely controlled satellite guidance will basically rule the entire continent? Unless you have a higher-end extraordinary, which can move mountains and seas, or wipe out half a city with one fireball, then let's say that your extraordinary force is too high. You can't do it at the third level at the beginning. In terms of system warfare, that's not possible. Yes, it's not directly proportional, not to mention that a grenade will increase the damage by 30%. You can take your time and taste it yourself. So let's say you have to write a slow article. I think I understand it, but if you have to rely on the country, then you can't slow down the pace, so you have to use fast weapons to die. Besides, writing novels does not allow you to be close to reality. You have to be close to reality, and there is more to say, so you have to go up. If the country wants to be more awesome, use a sniper rifle from a distance. If you go to England and shoot down, you can still hit the ears of the third level. At close range It's 7 meters away. Let's say you need a speed of 30 meters per second and a reaction from your brain to your body to dodge this bullet. And it's predicted in advance. Let's say your rifle or some high-explosive armor-piercing projectile shrinks to death. How can you dodge with this reaction? Besides, there are more weapons with bigger weapons. Which one has a higher point of 42 and which has a higher point of 30? Or maybe the Barrett is really not good enough. Can it be faster than Barrett's muzzle velocity bullet? You said that human reaction is not enough, but if it is a robot dog AI computing power to predict the vaccine, then can you still hide? If I give you the vaccine directly, where will you hide? The bullets have already been fired, and the firepower is covering it, so the combat power has already collapsed at the beginning. No matter how you write it later, you have to write down this combat power. Let's just say it's a bit like that. We can only see how smooth it is in the subsequent plot. How did you do it? You either have to make Extraordinary higher than Steel Torrent, or make Extraordinary lower than Steel Torrent, and the lower one is the crushing low. Even if you can resist horizontally, you still have to compare it one by one. If you don't talk about long-range combat, you can do close combat, but you are useless. So what's the difference? There is still room. When I first said how big it was, wasn't there that wild boar behind it? You also built a bus, a bus-sized pig or a car-sized pig. Let's just say, can't more of these things be packed with mechanical dogmen? And you said you can calculate it, and you don't have to disassemble the whole gun into parts. Wouldn't that make it easier to assemble? So the combat power has also collapsed. How do you feel about the delivery of supplies? What will you write next? I can only say that if the author compares it with others, to be honest, the beginning is a little bit broken. You can either teleport over and make a realistic door. For example, if you open the door with a limit of ten meters, you can bring things through, or you can say that the door can be opened for one minute or half an hour. Then transfer supplies and so on, and make it stand like this. I think in the early stage, you either have to do it with the torrent, or you can make the style bigger and the world view bigger.

It can be given five stars. I think the only shortcoming is that in the opening meeting, you have to be careless when you see slaves in another world. If there are more rational factors, such as adding a few more rational analyzes like "united front", the look and feel will be much better. I was almost dissuaded here. Everything else looks great, go for it.

Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like my whole body is shaking. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I won't touch it anymore. , Please brother, really, just one episode, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore 😭, I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother, I beg you, just one more episode (screaming) (twisted) (dark crawling) (Crawling) (Writhing) (Darkly squirming) (Rolling) (Crawling violently) (Twisting) (Tilting head) (Sitting still) (Slowly retreating) (Smashing things with force) (Gnawing) (Darkly juicing and going crazy) (Crawling) (Crawling) (Twisting and folding) (Returning to the original and screaming) Brother, let's do another episode

Normal people think logically, and the plot progression is also very reasonable. It's much better than those crappy works with no brainer advancement.

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Now all I can think of is to find a plain, shoot directly and level. It doesn't matter what level you are, you will die. If you can't carry all the things in two times, you can do it 5 times. If you can't add more, first equip yourself with life-saving equipment.

It's really good-looking, the logic is on point, and the villains are not brainless. I like it very much. Come on, author, don't be fooled by those malicious negative reviews. They just like to vent while reading free books.

It's pretty good so far, not too toxic. I can only watch the beginning, the rest is full of toxicity and violence

It feels pretty good. I have read a lot of novels about this kind of portal. Most of them have the protagonist online in the first few chapters, and then some are just a background board. Like this, there are generally certain restrictions on the protagonist's ability, so that he will not be allowed to come in and directly push it. Personally, I feel good. The protagonist does have a sense of existence, showing important and irreplaceable. It's just that the data of this book is a little bit off [Shocked] The update is quite slow, and it won't be cut off in a few days [face covering]

A very good novel, yes my appetite

This plot is so enjoyable to watch, [Top post][Top post][Top post] I give you five stars

Friends who are bookworms can come and take a look. I guarantee it will take more than 4,000 hours to read. I'm wrong, I've been a reader for nearly 10,000 hours

Not stupid, clear logic

It's very interesting. The author must not want eunuchs.

Nice. I came here specifically to give it five stars. Go back and continue reading.

Whether there are many poison points or not, I personally feel it's still a matter of combat power.

Why aren't people allowed to practice? The author is a practicing Okay, that makes sense. , I feel like it's going to be unfinished, it's a bit messy at the end.

Good writing, keep it up'

Why do I need to write a review? I am afraid that the author will give up and run away, so I will comment on it.

It's good to keep this rhythm! !

Give it five stars, hoping to give the author some motivation.

Supportive, good-looking, logical and not rigid.

Okay, first time commenting

Wonderful, compact and super nice to look at

It's okay, it's a bit lacking. Please write more.

Looks good, come on, come on, come on [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The plot is reasonable and compact, I like it very much [Like]