[A little slow in the early stage, try to be logical] [Group story, single female protagonist, don't enter if you don't like it] Traveling through the world of Naruto, becoming Minato Namikaze, and just became the fourth generation Hokage. As a result, Hiruzen Sarutobi gave up his position and refused to give up power. The top management of Konoha, headed by the third generation, bullied me when I was young, and Danzo monitored me every day.
Fortunately, [Hokage Territory System] has awakened!
Konoha's initial control is only 10%?
It doesn't matter!
I formed an alliance with Uncle Snake, obtained evidence of Danzo's crime, and worked step by step to kill Danzo.
"Ding! Kill Danzo, control exceeds 75%, and unlock the god-level passive: Heart of Konoha·Endless Source!"
When the darkness of Konoha was uprooted, Uchiha regarded me as the light, Hinata bowed her head, and even the arrogant Third Generation could only abdicate sadly, with great power in his hands.
"I am the Hokage! From now on, the darkness of Konoha must obey my orders!"
From this moment on, Konoha will become great again in my hands, Minato Namikaze.
Reader comments
This is actually the first book review...
The author, teacher, please change the introduction when you have time... This introduction is true and makes people want to read it. I clicked and exited after reading the introduction for the first time, and almost didn't scroll down. I browsed through the recommended list and clicked back when there was nothing else I wanted to see.
The content of the story is quite interesting, and the character creation seems to be okay so far. I haven't seen Goldfinger in other articles, so I feel like I should write about it in the introduction.
Anyway, collect it first! Looking forward to the follow-up [send heart][send heart][send heart]
The early politics section is very well written, highly recommended!
But since there are so many emotional scenes, there is a problem...
The protagonist has traveled through time, so why does he love Kushina (and Naruto) so much that he wants to write it in the core setting? Of course, the current interpretation of being an orphan in his previous life is reasonable, but... The protagonist was adopted by Minato after he became Hokage. Kushina was not the one who fell in love with Minato in the first place. Why couldn't she tell that Minato had changed [face covering]
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From the moment Kushina was about to give birth to Naruto... Emmmmm, what's going on? The writing was messy?
The later part is no longer linked to the previous level [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] I'm a little disappointed
It's very interesting to watch, the protagonist has both intelligence and strength, and the plot and political struggle are also well written. It's not stupid, but it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. It's worth watching.
The author is very sophisticated now, and his writing and internal strategies are quite good. The few shortcomings are that it seems to me that the protagonist did not travel through time and became Minato, but Minato awakened Su Hui's feelings, so I hope the author can adjust this discordant place, and there will be no other problems.
The AI is refined, at least the author has put in half the effort, so it doesn't hurt to have some fun.
It's okay, but I think the politics of Naruto in your story take up too much space, and the progress is very slow. This is an extraordinary world. I personally think the main plot should be developed towards invincibility. As long as you have the power to solve 70% of the problems, the rest will not work no matter how brilliant your political methods are.
Yes, the overall writing is very smooth, there are not many logical inconsistencies, and no flaws were found.
Unrestrained violent organizations cannot benefit the country (Ninja Village). Just like Jin Yiwei and Dongxi Factory, without restraint, they can actually override the imperial power, but without the support of the imperial power, they are nothing. So the root itself is the right given by the Hokage, it is a knife in the hand of the Hokage, but when the Hokage cannot mobilize and use it, it cannot be held in the hand of the Hokage, then the knife cannot be allowed to exist, otherwise it will hurt itself.
Those who learn to fly the Thunder God Formation are these three fourth-generation shadow guards:
Shiranui Genjian, and Zuduyi, and Iwahi.
I hope the author can modify it if possible after seeing it.
When writing a toad prophecy, don't predict the protagonist. You can change it so that you can't see it or use the original work. What you see in advance is the determined fate and the path the protagonist will take. What you guess is the recognition of the protagonist.
Although it is another book about time-traveling Naruto playing tricks, the overall plot is okay and the protagonist is well established.
Introduction: Be more serious
Obito is not for Lin, Lin is just an introduction. Obito's real purpose is to eliminate all ninja systems. What he wants is a carefree utopian world where children do not have to go to the battlefield and have no regrets. In Infinite Tsukuyomi, everything will be perfect. Lin is just the straw that makes Obito collapse of the ninja system.
The best thing I've seen recently
So far so good, but updates are too slow
Very good, keep up the updates
Overall it's pretty good, some minor flaws are acceptable
It's well written, and most of the characters' personalities are pretty much restored to the original. Just this point alone has already defeated a bunch of fan fiction.
This is one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read, highly recommended
Come on, author! This one is really good
There were a few good articles in the conference, and they were not too poisonous. They were refreshing to read and not uncomfortable. The author, please add more chapters [please ask for more explosive updates][please ask for explosive updates][please ask for explosive updates]
It's an old theme, but the author is very good, so it's still very interesting.
It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.
It's okay. So far, there is a glitch, but the blessing of this glitch on combat power is not great at the moment. Let's see if it will increase in the future?
Come on, come on, come on
It's okay, come on, author
I just watched it and it was good, but I found that the latest chapter was three days ago, so will it continue to be updated?
I think this book is very beautiful
The score is low, but Machiavellianism is still very enjoyable.
After watching it, the impression is quite good, but there are too few and not enough to be watched.
The protagonist is very well portrayed, and the main plot and family plot are well balanced.
Good-looking, the protagonist has a bottom line, is decisive in killing, smart and sinister
Come on, the writing is okay. It belongs to Naruto and has a bit of a conspiracy. The follow-up can give the protagonist a qualitative change in his personal strength. Now he is still a normal person.
This is actually the first book review... The author, teacher, please change the introduction when you have time... This introduction is true and makes people want to read it. I clicked and exited after reading the introduction for the first time, and almost didn't scroll down. I browsed through the recommended list and clicked back when there was nothing else I wanted to see. The content of the story is quite interesting, and the character creation seems to be okay so far. I haven't seen Goldfinger in other articles, so I feel like I should write about it in the introduction. Anyway, collect it first! Looking forward to the follow-up [send heart][send heart][send heart] The early politics section is very well written, highly recommended! But since there are so many emotional scenes, there is a problem... The protagonist has traveled through time, so why does he love Kushina (and Naruto) so much that he wants to write it in the core setting? Of course, the current interpretation of being an orphan in his previous life is reasonable, but... The protagonist was adopted by Minato after he became Hokage. Kushina was not the one who fell in love with Minato in the first place. Why couldn't she tell that Minato had changed [face covering] ———————— From the moment Kushina was about to give birth to Naruto... Emmmmm, what's going on? The writing was messy? The later part is no longer linked to the previous level [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] I'm a little disappointed
It's very interesting to watch, the protagonist has both intelligence and strength, and the plot and political struggle are also well written. It's not stupid, but it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. It's worth watching.
The author is very sophisticated now, and his writing and internal strategies are quite good. The few shortcomings are that it seems to me that the protagonist did not travel through time and became Minato, but Minato awakened Su Hui's feelings, so I hope the author can adjust this discordant place, and there will be no other problems.
The AI is refined, at least the author has put in half the effort, so it doesn't hurt to have some fun.
It's okay, but I think the politics of Naruto in your story take up too much space, and the progress is very slow. This is an extraordinary world. I personally think the main plot should be developed towards invincibility. As long as you have the power to solve 70% of the problems, the rest will not work no matter how brilliant your political methods are.
Yes, the overall writing is very smooth, there are not many logical inconsistencies, and no flaws were found.
Unrestrained violent organizations cannot benefit the country (Ninja Village). Just like Jin Yiwei and Dongxi Factory, without restraint, they can actually override the imperial power, but without the support of the imperial power, they are nothing. So the root itself is the right given by the Hokage, it is a knife in the hand of the Hokage, but when the Hokage cannot mobilize and use it, it cannot be held in the hand of the Hokage, then the knife cannot be allowed to exist, otherwise it will hurt itself. Those who learn to fly the Thunder God Formation are these three fourth-generation shadow guards: Shiranui Genjian, and Zuduyi, and Iwahi. I hope the author can modify it if possible after seeing it.
When writing a toad prophecy, don't predict the protagonist. You can change it so that you can't see it or use the original work. What you see in advance is the determined fate and the path the protagonist will take. What you guess is the recognition of the protagonist.
Although it is another book about time-traveling Naruto playing tricks, the overall plot is okay and the protagonist is well established.
Introduction: Be more serious
Obito is not for Lin, Lin is just an introduction. Obito's real purpose is to eliminate all ninja systems. What he wants is a carefree utopian world where children do not have to go to the battlefield and have no regrets. In Infinite Tsukuyomi, everything will be perfect. Lin is just the straw that makes Obito collapse of the ninja system.
The best thing I've seen recently
So far so good, but updates are too slow
Very good, keep up the updates
Overall it's pretty good, some minor flaws are acceptable
It's well written, and most of the characters' personalities are pretty much restored to the original. Just this point alone has already defeated a bunch of fan fiction.
This is one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read, highly recommended Come on, author! This one is really good
There were a few good articles in the conference, and they were not too poisonous. They were refreshing to read and not uncomfortable. The author, please add more chapters [please ask for more explosive updates][please ask for explosive updates][please ask for explosive updates]
It's an old theme, but the author is very good, so it's still very interesting.
It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.
It's okay. So far, there is a glitch, but the blessing of this glitch on combat power is not great at the moment. Let's see if it will increase in the future?
Come on, come on, come on
It's okay, come on, author
I just watched it and it was good, but I found that the latest chapter was three days ago, so will it continue to be updated?
I think this book is very beautiful
The score is low, but Machiavellianism is still very enjoyable.
After watching it, the impression is quite good, but there are too few and not enough to be watched.
The protagonist is very well portrayed, and the main plot and family plot are well balanced.
Good-looking, the protagonist has a bottom line, is decisive in killing, smart and sinister
Come on, the writing is okay. It belongs to Naruto and has a bit of a conspiracy. The follow-up can give the protagonist a qualitative change in his personal strength. Now he is still a normal person.