The Cannon Fodder Master Coveted by Crazy Critics

Beautiful, beautiful, very delicious, very delicious⪩. .⪨ But I take the liberty to raise one point to the author that I personally think is a bit of a problem⪩. .⪨ That is, there are too many sentences in the sentence pattern "It's not what it is"... Starting from the first chapter, every chapter has it, and almost every picture has two such sentence patterns ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`... In fact, some places don't need to be written like this... You can write hidden points ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`... Of course, the author's writing is very beautiful

I like the direction of the plot so far and feel very motivated to continue watching. There are just some expressions that are not very good, such as "It's not... It's..." Then I think some of the protagonist's personal explanations can be more rounded, instead of writing "because xxx but xxx." It reads too much like what AI said ᗜⰙᗜ. But the plot is well pushed.

The writing style is very clear, with a touch of melancholy. I really don't want to cry when describing Lu Qingyun ('-ωก̀)

This article gave me a faint feeling. The first few chapters were okay, but the faint feeling of melancholy in the following chapters became stronger and stronger. The subsequent plot always has a kind of sadness. The pain of being deceived several times. It feels heartbreaking to watch.

There is a slight sense of sadness. The emotions are described very delicately. I'm currently still doing the senior part, which is pretty good, and I'm also looking forward to other people's parts. Come on, teacher! You must live this book until the end! It's truly a fairy tale.

In fact, it's okay. It can add a novel edge, but it makes me feel a little weird. I feel that the protagonist's combat power is average, but there is no improvement in practice (it can be said that it is because he came from time-travel and can't understand practice). When I went to complete the sect mission, I didn't say to shake people since I couldn't beat him (I I don't understand the plot very well. Is it because he is the leader of a peak? So he has to have the respect he deserves? Forgive me for not expressing it very accurately.) From my personal point of view, the emotional line is good, but the status of the protagonist and the strength of it are not matched, which makes me feel weird. And the prince surnamed Li at the back gives me the feeling that he is an ordinary person but he is relatively equal to the protagonist in strength (feeling, in fact, the protagonist is actually stronger than him, but it just feels like it gives me an illusion). It feels similar but not similar to traditional immortal cultivation novels. It pays more attention to the emotional line. I feel [] I'm not criticizing when I write these words, I'm just expressing my feelings based on the overall situation! The last thing is, when will they take the law? ‍🔥🔥🔥

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There were too many emotional scenes with Qin in the past, and it felt a bit like 1V1, but overall it was still good.

It's very nice. Can you write more extra stories? [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, a bit sour, but very heartwarming. I haven't seen such a beautiful novel in a long time.

A very good article, with detailed descriptions of the characters' minds, coherent logic, clear relationships between the characters, and a description of relationships in society and the workplace.

Awesome, I can't sleep, please write more, no, write more and I won't have to sleep at night, anyway! I really want to know if Li Chengze will have a role in the future. It feels like he is not on the table in the introduction. Come on, Senior Brother Qin. Come on, the eldest apprentice. The second apprentice has just started. I feel like he is a tsundere, ugh! So cute, come on

It's pretty good. The protagonist's brain circuit is quite novel and interesting.

It's delicious, it's delicious, it's great to eat this author.

Overall, it's good and quite to my liking, but I didn't understand what the protagonist's level of cultivation is, foundation building or golden elixir? Apart from this, I feel that the timeline is a bit strange and I don't understand it, but I still like reading this book😋😋😋😋

The plot has ups and downs, the characters are well-drawn, and the rhythm is tight and appropriate. The more you read, the more you will get hooked („• ֊ •„)੭

It's so good-looking. It's just that the main character has been cultivating for a while and building a golden elixir for a while, but it's still very good-looking!

Good looking, delicious, top quality, love watching

I like it, it's pretty

Very well written! Like it! The author is probably the best in the world! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The emotional line is very delicate, the kind of flowing water, and the main character is also super gentle. I felt so warm after watching it.

The writing is very good, the emotional lines are very reasonable, and the characters are very well drawn.

The water flows slowly, the writing is elegant, so good👍

It's pretty, but the AI ​​smell is a bit strong. It should have been polished by AI.