[Everyday Comedy] + [System] + [Transmigration] + [Power Fantasy]
My name is Uchiha Setsuna, Itachi’s twin brother. I’m a transmigrator who just wants to keep a low profile, save money, and open a dessert shop.
But I have an emotion-value System: the more shocked people are, the stronger I get.
I’d planned to coast my way to an easy victory in the Fourth Great Ninja War. Instead, I had two tomoe at four, broke records at five, and took a Tailed Beast Ball head-on at eight.
Danzo sees me as a thorn in his side, and Obito sees me as the biggest wildcard.
On the eve of the clan massacre, my brother raises his blade against me, tears streaming down his face.
I sigh and turn around, pulling all the village’s top brass into the Infinite Tsukuyomi space:
“Don’t rush. First, let me put on a PPT and walk you through the Uchiha Corporation’s hundred-year plan.”
“Bro, put the sword down and come help me change slides.”
I feel pretty good, but I feel like there are too many words in one paragraph. Most of the time, I can only fit two paragraphs on one page. It's a bit tiring to read. My font size doesn't feel very big, either. It's 19. Sometimes, on mobile phones, I can only fit two paragraphs on one page. I feel like it would be better if there were more paragraphs.
👍👍👍👍👍It's good if you don't look at the timeline
That's right, that's how it should be written.