Pokémon: Parallel Daughter Revealed, I'm Numb

It's good-looking and has a relaxed daily style. It looks quite interesting. The disadvantage may be that the pace is too slow and there are few scenes of the protagonist. I hope the pace can be faster, otherwise the problem of book maintenance at the back of the book may be serious. 5 To 6 updates every day, author, you win, I am so productive

Although this book is a celestial text, it is definitely not the product of assembly line AI. It has its own thoughts and thinking, which people can feel. The dialogues of the characters are dialogues that will develop in reality, not generated by some AI. Good stuff, recommended.

This is a very interesting Pokémon fanfic, I hope there will be more scenes of the main character. It's kind of behind the scenes now.

The logic is smooth, the thinking is methodical, and there is a little bit of water (especially when Pokémon come in to chat). It is the best Pokémon fanfic I have ever enjoyed so far (there is no such thing). I really like this behind-the-scenes hidden text. Is there a fan base? You can add it to my update list [shy]

Not bad. The canopy flow is okay. With the concept of the multiverse, the pretense is even more powerful. No trace of AI has been found yet. The author is good. Now as long as it is not AI and not poisonous, it is fine. 4⭐ It is well written and starts with 5 stars.

A good book with exciting content and clear logic. But I personally feel that every daughter of the protagonist has a mythical beast. I feel that the mythical beast is a bit cheap. Of course, this is just my personal feeling. This book is still very good-looking.

Overall it's pretty good, but personally I don't think it's as good as everyone says. Here's my little opinion: I feel that the author's portrayal of the protagonist's daughter is a bit strange. It can be seen that on the one hand, the author wants to portray the protagonist's daughter as very talented, and on the other hand, he also wants to reflect the protagonist's education and help to his daughter. This is partially reflected in the first daughter (she looks very comfortable getting along with Squirtle), but the protagonist's help to his daughter is a bit too deliberate. The first daughter was given a dragon, and even the Lugia trial was clearly arranged by the protagonist. The second daughter was given a tyrannosaurus. Personally, I didn't see the highlights of my daughter at all. I only had the feeling that everything had been arranged by the protagonist and that the protagonist was very powerful. (There is even a feeling that no matter who is involved, the protagonist Dou can solve all the problems by himself) This certainly shows that the protagonist cares about the children, but the author's main purpose in writing this copy should be to write about his daughter and at the same time reflect the protagonist's unusualness, right? Since the perspective is mainly focused on the daughter, can we appropriately strengthen the portrayal of her charm? It's like giving the offspring of one's Pokémon to a child. The second daughter's Shark was born from an egg, but her Tyrannosaurus and the two daughters' Dragonite gave me the feeling that they were given just for the sake of giving them away, without any bond. Of course, this is just my own opinion and cannot represent the feelings of all book friends. I hope it will be helpful to the author.

It's nice to watch, system replay + chat barrage + parallel time and space + Pokémon + daughter + invincibility + harem. The subject matter is novel and the writing is sophisticated. It's a pity that the Pokémon IP is almost half dead.

The subject matter is novel and as long as the author keeps writing, I will keep following this novel.

It's a good read. Although the overall narrative rhythm is a little immature and the protagonist's presence is slightly low when portraying the first daughter, it is more productive and has a serious attitude. The subject matter is also very attractive to me. The impression is not bad. Come on author, I support you!

The character of the protagonist is very good, with a guiding personality. It is recommended to give him a full quasi-god with all championship levels. Quasi-gods, which are more collectible and good, can be completely obtained. Then each different elf will appear, which will give the original author some shock. Then the protagonist will become a mythical beast user? If you want to be a divine beast user, it is only recommended to get Arceus and Rayquaza, like the three gods of time and space, the black and white dragons, and the earth and ocean are not suitable because they all have priesthoods. As for the black and white dragons, they are not strong in themselves and can be used as a transition. And if the protagonist takes it, it is better to leave it to the protagonist's child, and then there are the second-level gods. I won't go into details here. There are too many second-level gods. You can decide which one you like.

Very good! ! This is the only Pokémon book I like to read. By the way, will Xiaoguang and Serena be Xiaozhi's partners in the future? It will make the regret I felt when I read it [crying]. Also, Daigo's definition is very good! !

Ha ha ha, what a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news.

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The subject matter is novel, but the main character has no scenes. But it's also pretty good-looking. Just treat your daughter as the protagonist

I always feel that there are too few people. As for the Super King, he learned that Sirona has a partner and did not show his teeth. Moreover, when Jie Zilan learned that Sirona married the male protagonist in the parallel world, there was no transition. After all, the male protagonist's current performance is mysterious but not very reliable. It does not reflect the positive attitude of the male protagonist. After all, he also knows that it is a parallel world. And to be honest, the acceptance of the heroine is a bit high. After all, it is a parallel world for them, and they are too close before accepting the memories. To be honest, Daigo is too OOC, and it is a bit difficult for ordinary people to see it. After all, there is no pause time when watching, so why don't you work? After all, this thing is mandatory to watch, and you are forced to watch it for a few hours every day, and the world does not work anymore.

Ultraman's five major oaths: 1. You cannot go to school if you are hungry. 2. Dry clothes when the weather is nice. 3. Pay attention to passing vehicles when crossing the road. 4. Don't rely on the strength of others. 5. Don't play on the ground with bare feet.

So far, it's a pretty good Pokémon Canopy stream. It seems to be attractive to me so far. If you're a book nerd, you can consider checking it out. The follow-up content will still depend on the author's performance. I'd like to support the author first.

Well, it's quite interesting, but the word count is a bit short, and the protagonist is quite mysterious. I don't know what elves there are, but there is a demon god Hupa who appears. Update soon 😎, pure harem, no need to be obsessed with it. If you like to watch it, you can check it out, there is Sister Baicai.

No, why are there still people stealing your books? The author has the exact same Jian Shao and the exact same daughter. The male protagonist and the female protagonist. The book is called Elf: The daughter was exposed and the ex-girlfriends blocked the door. The author is Xiantao Liangfentiantian, with 140,000 words coded.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist's role is too little.

Although the subject matter is the classic daughter plus light curtain, I feel pretty good after reading it, but it is a bit lacking. It is recommended to update 30 times a day.

It's almost a behind-the-scenes story, and the daughter line is pretty good too. It's the memory instillation and the predetermined ending that are a bit poisonous, it feels like a body snatching (people can't even empathize with themselves one second ago)

It's a relatively good-looking Pokémon book. It's good for battles and daily life, and the author has a lot of manuscripts that you can eat with confidence. There should be extra chapters at the end [Love] [Like] [OK] [Smile]

It's very interesting. When will Sister Baicai's daughter appear? I'm a fan of Sister Baicai. The role of the main character is a bit small.

Remember to add Lusamine and Xiao Juer Oh, by the way, remember to add Kaluni, after all, she has a ready-made daughter.

I no longer expect the author to update a few times a day, as long as he can ensure that he updates to the end every day. Recently, many authors' books have either been discontinued or reported. As long as the author can finish them [crying] [crying] Again, don't use your daughter to set off the male protagonist, as this will only make the protagonist's background look worse. Also, if it's not a diamond, don't take on the porcelain work. For example, Karuni's daughter, Juncai, went to the league with a fantasy beast and a mythical beast. I originally thought that the different-colored Gardevoir would have some strength. The half-day atmosphere team came here. You want to change the direction, but don't let everyone write for the championship. The first few daughters basically have their own main force, and the ace has won against their mother's ace. When it comes to Kaluni, they use mythical beasts to get the championship. Gardevoir loses against Gardevoir. The championship is too fragmented [face covering]

It's pretty good-looking, but there are too few of them.

The daily writing is quite good. There are no plots or villains. But the names given to the protagonist's daughters are too convoluted, and they are not named after their parents.

Overall, it's very distinctive. The first part is a bit slow, but the rest is okay, but the protagonist's sense of presence is a bit low. Is it possible to open a live broadcast for the protagonist in the future or write more about the daily interactions in the main world? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]