Pokemon: My Parallel-World Daughter Is Revealed, and I'm Losing It

It's good-looking and has a relaxed daily style. It looks quite interesting. The disadvantage may be that the pace is too slow and there are few scenes of the protagonist. I hope the pace can be faster, otherwise the problem of book maintenance at the back of the book may be serious. 5 To 6 updates every day, author, you win, I am so productive

Although this book is a celestial text, it is definitely not the product of assembly line AI. It has its own thoughts and thinking, which people can feel. The dialogues of the characters are dialogues that will develop in reality, not generated by some AI. Good stuff, recommended.

This is a very interesting Pokémon fanfic, I hope there will be more scenes of the main character. It's kind of behind the scenes now.

The logic is smooth, the thinking is methodical, and there is a little bit of water (especially when Pokémon come in to chat). It is the best Pokémon fanfic I have ever enjoyed so far (there is no such thing). I really like this behind-the-scenes hidden text. Is there a fan base? You can add it to my update list [shy]

It's nice to watch, system replay + chat barrage + parallel time and space + Pokémon + daughter + invincibility + harem. The subject matter is novel and the writing is sophisticated. It's a pity that the Pokémon IP is almost half dead.

Not bad. The canopy flow is okay. With the concept of the multiverse, the pretense is even more powerful. No trace of AI has been found yet. The author is good. Now as long as it is not AI and not poisonous, it is fine. 4⭐ It is well written and starts with 5 stars.

A good book with exciting content and clear logic. But I personally feel that every daughter of the protagonist has a mythical beast. I feel that the mythical beast is a bit cheap. Of course, this is just my personal feeling. This book is still very good-looking.

Overall it's pretty good, but personally I don't think it's as good as everyone says. Here's my little opinion: I feel that the author's portrayal of the protagonist's daughter is a bit strange. It can be seen that on the one hand, the author wants to portray the protagonist's daughter as very talented, and on the other hand, he also wants to reflect the protagonist's education and help to his daughter. This is partially reflected in the first daughter (she looks very comfortable getting along with Squirtle), but the protagonist's help to his daughter is a bit too deliberate. The first daughter was given a dragon, and even the Lugia trial was clearly arranged by the protagonist. The second daughter was given a tyrannosaurus. Personally, I didn't see the highlights of my daughter at all. I only had the feeling that everything had been arranged by the protagonist and that the protagonist was very powerful. (There is even a feeling that no matter who is involved, the protagonist Dou can solve all the problems by himself) This certainly shows that the protagonist cares about the children, but the author's main purpose in writing this copy should be to write about his daughter and at the same time reflect the protagonist's unusualness, right? Since the perspective is mainly focused on the daughter, can we appropriately strengthen the portrayal of her charm? It's like giving the offspring of one's Pokémon to a child. The second daughter's Shark was born from an egg, but her Tyrannosaurus and the two daughters' Dragonite gave me the feeling that they were given just for the sake of giving them away, without any bond. Of course, this is just my own opinion and cannot represent the feelings of all book friends. I hope it will be helpful to the author.

It's a good read. Although the overall narrative rhythm is a little immature and the protagonist's presence is slightly low when portraying the first daughter, it is more productive and has a serious attitude. The subject matter is also very attractive to me. The impression is not bad. Come on author, I support you!

The subject matter is novel and as long as the author keeps writing, I will keep following this novel.