Dark Magic at Max Level, and the Light-Magic Campus Belle Keeps Wanting to Study Me

In fact, I haven't watched much, and the male protagonist is a pretentious guy, but this kind of dark male ghost secretly sends shadows as bodyguards. He wants to go to the window to take a look at her when she is unconscious. Plus, he is in a low-self-esteem puppy state that I dare not say I like. I really like it. I almost read it as a romance.

Well, after reading it, I also left a comment on the first chapter for you to read. My first impression was very good, and the emotional part later was also well written. I wrote less of the situation in the first chapter, but there is still one thing. I also have a suggestion. The author can write an outline. I always think that the first book is the most important book for an author. He can reveal himself. If the author doesn't care about this book, you don't need to read the following paragraph. The outline is very important for a book. The strength of the male protagonist is very vague, and sometimes the consumption is too high to keep up. But it is clearly written that the male protagonist still has the strength of his previous life. What this means is that mental strength has nothing to do with the body. He is obviously an emperor? I kind of forgot about the elemental power, but it used 50% to deal with the commander level. If you say the commander level is the emperor level? Fifty percent of the total, so pretend I didn't say it, but it's a little strange that the heroine's strength has increased, right? I would like to say that some of the plots were handled in a confusing manner, and there is another one that I remember more clearly. At that time, the relationship between Lu and the heroine in the previous life was written as if the heroine was alive when Lu died, and Lu was still alive when the heroine died. It was a bit strange, but I didn't understand it anyway. Maybe that's not what the author wanted to express, but I misunderstood. Another thing is, are the last few chapters messed up? Why do I see that these paragraphs are repeated?

The details of the plot of the characters are really well controlled, especially the details of using the characters' actions to express the psychological state. The plot is also very compact. What I like most is the emotional description of Lin Ye and Su Nian. There is no deliberate sugaring or specific description of love. Very simple words and action descriptions can portray the inner feelings of the characters. Come on, author! Hope to see more exciting clips in the future!

The writing style is really good. The author's way of telling stories is different from common modern online articles. He will tell you slowly and in detail, as if he knows you will stay and listen patiently to him. Many details are told to you slowly and bit by bit... I personally like it very much.

Yes, the writing is delicate and emotional, but there are many repetitions in each chapter, but overall it's good.

Very magical to me I really beg you, don't stop updating. Please, I have opened so many books, I beg you to stick to one. This book is really promising 50 photos were very impressive before, but then the writing declined seriously and the writing became serious. Brother author, can we write steadily?

The writing is like a diary, and it feels like Zhang Jiajia is passing through your world. It's not like Tomato's novels, but it feels pretty good.

Very nice, I don't understand why the rating is so low

The author's writing style is very good, not like that kind of industrial saccharine, but more like that kind of thing. He doesn't say I love you in every sentence, but you can feel I love you from the language.

The writing is very good (personal opinion), but there are some things in the storyline that are not very perfect.