HPA Prophet Comes to Hogwarts

Although there are a few small bugs in the details compared to the original work, the overall logic and settings are not written haphazardly. At least I have watched the original work or movie two or three times, which is very rare in Tomato (specifically refers to some authors who write fan fiction and do not read the original work, but only understand the basic settings and make up everything themselves) The writing style is also good, and it's very comfortable to read. It's probably not a new author, but the update is a bit slow. Judging from the update time, it should be a student party. Take your time, don't be anxious when writing slowly. If you write faster, the quality will decline and the gain will outweigh the gain.

It's so good to watch. Mona's character is the same as the original work, and the description of her parents is also very good. Because I like Snape and Dumbledore very much, but the fans who have gained several HPs in the past are not very friendly to them, or they are OOC, so I was really surprised when I saw this. I'm happy. Si Jiao's boyhood is much better than the original work. I'm really happy. I hope Si Jiao can continue to be happy (I just don't know if Lily will be with James or Snape in the end if the current situation develops. In any case, as long as Si Jiao is treated well)

It's very comfortable to read. It doesn't mention too much about Genshin Impact. People who haven't played it can also read it. Uh-huh, little Mona is very cute. I really like how it handles the relationship between the two Evans sisters. It doesn't take up too much space. It's very comfortable.

It's not very obvious, but it has an AI style of writing, and it may be very detailed and refined. Compared with the common random stew, I haven't seen any major problems so far, and I hope it can be maintained. I am not dissatisfied with the current content. Logically speaking, I should give it 5 stars. However, I am personally concerned about using AI as a tool to write articles. I deducted one star out of pure selfishness. If the quality can be maintained after writing for a long time, I will change it back.

So far, it looks good. There is only one thing I'm afraid of. Don't be a pigeon. I guess Mona is a Ravenclaw or a Gryffindor [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It tastes salty, the content is quite interesting, the author's writing style is also very good, not exaggerated, not bloated, the characters are very three-dimensional, and can express things very clearly, without unnecessary description of scenery, it is very good, among the Harry Potter, it can be regarded as a fairy tale

It's very beautiful, the pace is very slow, and the writing style has a very ancient flavor. I hope there are more paragraphs. I don't have the patience to read it after it's a long time. And I don't know what the author wants to write. The main line is not clear?

It's good to watch, and I look forward to the update. The theme is very unique. The original God astrologer Mona was reborn as the child of Sirius's parents, who was known as the traitor to the pure-blood family. She became friends with Lily and Snape of the same age. The plot is also very detailed, and I look forward to updates [please give more updates][please give more updates][please give more updates]

Very nice, well organized, not brainless, and looks very comfortable

It looks good, it feels like Mona has been raised again, that is, your personality has changed a bit based on the original one. But there are some places where you can see her characteristics

It looks good, the writing is very good, the narrative rhythm is clear, there are many details and the language description is not sluggish, it is very comfortable to watch, the characters are not OOC at all, they are all written by me, the plot is warm, and the character interactions are well written The only drawback is that it is still serialized. The author should quickly become popular and make hundreds of millions, then kick the boss and become a daily update (in fantasy)

Oh my God! The writing is really beautiful. Readers who don't know the setting of Genshin Impact can also read it. It integrates well with the original work. I think this article will get a rating of 9.0 Or above if I keep writing it. The only problem is that it was too short when I saw it, and there is still a long time before it is finished. I hope the author can write it to the end and look forward to the subsequent development of the story.

[Laughs] [Like] Very interesting and comfortable [Thinking] And I have a question. With Mona's interest in the stars, will she get involved in the aerospace industry? For example, directly cooperate with a capable country, or after learning about this situation, make a magic version of a rocket yourself. This can also well explain or show Mona's ambition to be a Slytherin. Of course, if not, it can also be explained. It is a simple ambition to explore the nature of the starry sky.

Those who have never played "Genshin Impact" can easily get started.

A great article, if you like reading it,

Two words are good-looking and three words are good-looking. Four words. Very nice to look at. No more to say. What the author writes is simply bursting with deliciousness. Very delicious!

The author is great and the writing is beautiful! ! ! But it's too little and not enough to watch! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! !

The biggest drawback so far is the weekly update

Please don't interrupt the update, and don't leave it unfinished.

Pretty good (I hope the boss can make Mona's alchemy stand out a little bit later, uh... The reason is... (I feel this setting is more delicious... Yes_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

Mona is cute and calm at ordinary times, but she turns into a child when she encounters astronomical stars or a telescope. It's a pity that there are only 28 chapters, I look forward to the follow-up development. Also, Tomato, do you understand the rules on the road? In chapter 28, you showed me how long I had to wait for the ending to be over (ノヽ)

The pace is slow, not the core line of the original work, the writing is good, and it is a good fan novel. However, I can already feel the emergence of a love line.

It's very, very nice to watch and has very good characters. The writing is also very good. The plot progresses steadily without giving people a feeling of being fuzzy. The weekly update is just too annoying. I look forward to the update every day. I really want to get the time turner and travel to a year later to read the updated chapters! ! !

I came here for Mona, it's very well written.

Nice article, looking forward to the update

Big cheers for the author

It's so pretty, but the drawback is that it's too short [smiles]

However, the quality of this book is considered to be very good among related fans of Yang Persimmon. It is not the kind of cool text that pursues sensory stimulation. It can be read as a good leisure read.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will make more updates.