HP: When a Qilin Girl Comes to Hogwarts

I really like the heroine's character, and this book is super good, but I would like to make some suggestions. To be honest, based on the character of the heroine and the general content of this book, I hope that the heroine does not need to have cpp. Currently, Draco and the heroine have no cpp feeling, and the heroine is from the Zhang family. She has been trained like this since she was a child, and it feels like there is no love. I actually hope that the heroine is uniquely beautiful. Of course, if the author really wants to write it, I suggest writing an if extra chapter. The author can also secretly write about the heroine and the heroine. Draco's emotional line should be written more secretly. Anyway, I am not disgusted with the interaction with Draco that I have seen so far, but it is awkward to think about being a partner with Draco. I also read the comments, and there were no comments that criticized the heroine and Draco's CP. Instead, there were many objectionable comments. I think their views and opinions are probably the same as mine. This is a small suggestion. I hope the author can adopt it [Blow kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhh, it's so good, so good, so good. I've read so many, and this one is really well written, and the characters are not broken. I just want to change the male protagonist. It's not that Draco is bad, but I think that the female protagonist is so strong and hard-working, and I feel that the little brat nowadays is not worthy of him. In the end, he is worshiping a cult. I feel that the cult is perfect for the female protagonist. He is very capable and secretly protects the female protagonist. This age difference is not a problem for the Zhang family.

Give it a five-star rating. This is the first fanfic I've read that connects Tomb Raiders with Harry Potter. Cp It seems that it is too early to consider now. The protagonist is my equal now. He is only 13 years old. I am used to harem stories. I don't know if this book is about pure love. But no matter who the male protagonist is, there is only one real protagonist. Judging from the description, it fits the stereotype of the Zhang family, but because of their status, they are more stubborn, willful, and rebellious. They work hard to be the patriarch and do not want to be a tool to continue the bloodline. They have family members who love them. Here they refer to Zhang Haike and Zhang Haiyan, as well as some other names that the Zhang family boy band can name. The plot is quite watchable, except for the strong AI flavor between the lines, and the writing style is a bit immature. Nothing wrong with it. I read other comments saying that using AI has a strong flavor. I was still thinking that it is not a good habit to identify AI in vain, but after reading it, it is true that the whole article has a strong generative flavor. When I have nothing to do, I let the AI ​​generate which pairs of evil CPs I want to see, and then I watch them myself, so I have a little sense of perception. If the main plot is my own, then don't let the AI ​​generate and modify the whole story, because the AI ​​flavor cannot be removed no matter how hard it is, and the flavor is really obvious. AI's words and sentences are completely different from those of humans. There are too many adjectives accumulated layer by layer, and there are also those ultra-short sentence fragments that are difficult to describe, but it is really generated by AI at a glance, which is really a bit uncomfortable. One thing suddenly occurred to me: why in a world where the protagonist is the main character, why do you have to write about the little brother when watching a movie? The protagonist is the only protagonist in this world, so she should be the focus. I would rather the movie show the protagonist's childhood life and her hard training, which will lead to the Zhang family as a whole, rather than the movie mainly focusing on the younger brother. I don't like the protagonist's light being blocked. Although I don't like it, my dislike is useless. I'm just complaining.

Nice. I really like the heroine. The relationship between the heroine and Draco is hard to argue with, so I suggest you don't eat it. But the CP between the heroine and others is particularly delicious. For example, the Zhang family's. It's really delicious. !!! Push hard push.

Nice! In fact, I couldn't stand it hahaha, but it's very interesting. I didn't watch the Zhang family's TV but I understood it more or less, because it was an intermarriage within the clan. I hope the CP is not Draco. If it is Zhang Qiling, it will definitely be interesting in the future hahaha👏👏

The author's writing is very suitable for the Zhang family's characters, and I personally feel that the plot is good, and he even writes how to practice the hair Qiu Finger. The details are also well grasped, and the characters are not OOC~ In short, it is a strong recommendation~ However, the interaction between the heroine and the hero is not particularly strong within the 60 chapters updated by the author, so before chapter 60, you can temporarily treat it as the heroine. The heroine's goal has always been to solve the Wang family. After seeing the magic that Snape showed her, she immediately agreed~ In order to defeat the Wang family, she wanted to turn into a little flying insect when she was in the transfiguration class. In short, she is cute, cute and self-improving (please don't criticize me! It's just my personal opinion) I really highly recommend this book! The author is quite active in the comment area. He is also a very nice person and his writing is also very good. There should be many CPs for the heroine, but they have not been decided yet. There are Draco, Zhang Qiling, and Zhang Yuanshan. I personally prefer Zhang Qiling. The author's description is really super good. I highly recommend it. I feel that the score should not be so low. The current score is 7.6 In fact, I feel that the cp between the heroine and Draco is not very good, and there is relatively little interaction, but the other Zhang family members are very, very good-looking. I plan to save a few chapters and then read them again The score really shouldn't be so low, because no matter who the cp is, the protagonist will always be the heroine

This book is really good-looking. It is rare to see a link between tomb robbing and HP. It is completely in line with my personal preferences. Moreover, the characters are well written in line with the setting and are not OOC at all. The main reason is that the writing is very enjoyable and she is a heroine. Highly recommended!!!

It's very beautiful, and every pair of cp's is quite fun. But I still hope that Xiaoyou can not be with foreigners. It feels like there is a wall! And I feel that except for Draco, everyone else's interaction with Xiaoyou is quite easy. I can only say that if the CP is Draco, it will be really difficult for Xiaoyou to be the leader of the clan. Moreover, Draco is the heir of the Malfoy family. If they are together, who should marry the other and marry the other? That is almost impossible. It's impossible to run on both sides, and one side is in China and the other side is in the UK.

Let's see what treasures I found. This book is so good. I really like Hai You's character. The cold and alienated character brought out from the Zhang family also reveals a bit of love for life (it's so gratifying to see Xiao You get a broom and fly to Hogwarts). Xiao You is very scrolly at the beginning, with a slow pace, which is the daily routine of the king of scrolls. Later, everyone starts to understand Xiaoyou better. Xiaoyou also shows his power, including but not limited to one The knife wiping the monster's neck is really cool. I'm looking forward to the author's follow-up updates. This kind of beauty, strength and cruelty is really to my liking, especially the collision between the Zhang family's epic family struggle with blood and the peaceful and leisurely campus life of Hogwarts (in the first few grades) is really exciting. I look forward to watching this kind of extra story that can make the collision between the two more direct! Come on, author!

It's nice and well-written. I haven't read it for a long time and I can't remember it clearly. Basically, the feeling of disobedience is not serious, but the relationship with Draco just makes me angry, and the feeling of disobedience is also very serious. And the attitude of old Malfoy is really impossible to achieve CP. There is no frustration at all, and I can feel that the teacher is still trying to match up intentionally or unintentionally. ? It always scares me so much that I rush to read the introduction. It's so scary. Draco is definitely not good as a CP. . No CP is better than this. You even said that Snape and Brother may be acceptable to me. After all, they do have some knocks. But at this stage, Snape's sense of CP is actually not that heavy anymore, and he can't hit the point anymore 🤔 I can only say that this book should be quite difficult to finish. The update speed and plot content both give me a confused feeling. I have a feeling of being infatuated with everyone, my fiancé is very nice/. The description is quite good✔️