HP Plus Tomb Robbing: Learn Magic to Become the Clan Leader

I really like the heroine's character, and this book is super good, but I would like to make some suggestions. To be honest, based on the character of the heroine and the general content of this book, I hope that the heroine does not need to have cpp. Currently, Draco and the heroine have no cpp feeling, and the heroine is from the Zhang family. She has been trained like this since she was a child, and it feels like there is no love. I actually hope that the heroine is uniquely beautiful. Of course, if the author really wants to write it, I suggest writing an if extra chapter. The author can also secretly write about the heroine and the heroine. Draco's emotional line should be written more secretly. Anyway, I am not disgusted with the interaction with Draco that I have seen so far, but it is awkward to think about being a partner with Draco. I also read the comments, and there were no comments that criticized the heroine and Draco's CP. Instead, there were many objectionable comments. I think their views and opinions are probably the same as mine. This is a small suggestion. I hope the author can adopt it [Blow kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhh, it's so good, so good, so good. I've read so many, and this one is really well written, and the characters are not broken. I just want to change the male protagonist. It's not that Draco is bad, but I think that the female protagonist is so strong and hard-working, and I feel that the little brat nowadays is not worthy of him. In the end, he is worshiping a cult. I feel that the cult is perfect for the female protagonist. He is very capable and secretly protects the female protagonist. This age difference is not a problem for the Zhang family.

Give it a five-star rating. This is the first fanfic I've read that connects Tomb Raiders with Harry Potter. Cp It seems that it is too early to consider now. The protagonist is my equal now. He is only 13 years old. I am used to harem stories. I don't know if this book is about pure love. But no matter who the male protagonist is, there is only one real protagonist. Judging from the description, it fits the stereotype of the Zhang family, but because of their status, they are more stubborn, willful, and rebellious. They work hard to be the patriarch and do not want to be a tool to continue the bloodline. They have family members who love them. Here they refer to Zhang Haike and Zhang Haiyan, as well as some other names that the Zhang family boy band can name. The plot is quite watchable, except for the strong AI flavor between the lines, and the writing style is a bit immature. Nothing wrong with it. I read other comments saying that using AI has a strong flavor. I was still thinking that it is not a good habit to identify AI in vain, but after reading it, it is true that the whole article has a strong generative flavor. When I have nothing to do, I let the AI ​​generate which pairs of evil CPs I want to see, and then I watch them myself, so I have a little sense of perception. If the main plot is my own, then don't let the AI ​​generate and modify the whole story, because the AI ​​flavor cannot be removed no matter how hard it is, and the flavor is really obvious. AI's words and sentences are completely different from those of humans. There are too many adjectives accumulated layer by layer, and there are also those ultra-short sentence fragments that are difficult to describe, but it is really generated by AI at a glance, which is really a bit uncomfortable. One thing suddenly occurred to me: why in a world where the protagonist is the main character, why do you have to write about the little brother when watching a movie? The protagonist is the only protagonist in this world, so she should be the focus. I would rather the movie show the protagonist's childhood life and her hard training, which will lead to the Zhang family as a whole, rather than the movie mainly focusing on the younger brother. I don't like the protagonist's light being blocked. Although I don't like it, my dislike is useless. I'm just complaining.

Nice. I really like the heroine. The relationship between the heroine and Draco is hard to argue with, so I suggest you don't eat it. But the CP between the heroine and others is particularly delicious. For example, the Zhang family's. It's really delicious. ! ! ! Push hard push.

The author's writing is very suitable for the Zhang family's characters, and I personally feel that the plot is good, and he even writes how to practice the hair Qiu Finger. The details are also well grasped, and the characters are not OOC~ In short, it is a strong recommendation~ However, the interaction between the heroine and the hero is not particularly strong within the 60 chapters updated by the author, so before chapter 60, you can temporarily treat it as the main heroine. The heroine's goal has always been to solve the Wang family. After seeing the magic that Snape showed her, she immediately agreed~ In order to defeat the Wang family, she wanted to turn into a little flying insect when she was in the transfiguration class. In short, she is cute, cute and self-improving (please don't criticize me! It's just my personal opinion) I really highly recommend this book! The author is quite active in the comment area, he is a nice person, and his writing is also very good. There should be many CPs for the heroine, but they have not been decided yet. There are Draco, Zhang Qiling, and Zhang Yuanshan. I personally prefer Zhang Qiling. The author's description is really super good. I highly recommend it. I feel that the score should not be so low. The current score is 7.6 In fact, I feel that the cp between the heroine and Draco is not very good, and there is relatively little interaction, but the other Zhang family members are very, very good-looking. I plan to save a few chapters and then read them again The score really shouldn't be so low, because no matter who the cp is, the protagonist will always be the heroine

This book is really good-looking. It is rare to see a link between tomb robbing and HP. It is completely in line with my personal preferences. Moreover, the characters are well written in line with the setting and are not OOC at all. The main reason is that the writing is very enjoyable and she is a heroine. Highly recommended!!!

Nice! In fact, I couldn't stand it hahaha, but it's very interesting. I didn't watch the Zhang family's TV but I understood it more or less, because it was an intermarriage within the clan. I hope the CP is not Draco. If it is Zhang Qiling, it will definitely be interesting in the future hahaha👏👏

Let's see what treasures I found. This book is so good. I really like Hai You's character. The cold and alienated character brought out from the Zhang family also reveals a bit of love for life (it's so gratifying to see Xiao You get a broom and fly to Hogwarts). Xiao You is very scrolly at the beginning, with a slow pace, which is the daily routine of the king of scrolls. Later, everyone starts to understand Xiaoyou better. Xiaoyou also shows his power, including but not limited to one The knife wiping the monster's neck is really cool. I'm looking forward to the author's follow-up updates. This kind of beauty, strength and cruelty is really to my liking, especially the collision between the Zhang family's epic family struggle with blood and the peaceful and leisurely campus life of Hogwarts (in the first few grades) is really exciting. I look forward to watching this kind of extra story that can make the collision between the two more direct! Come on, author!

It's very beautiful, and every pair of cp's is quite fun. But I still hope that Xiaoyou can not be with foreigners. It feels like there is a wall! And I feel that except for Draco, everyone else's interaction with Xiaoyou is quite easy. I can only say that if the CP is Draco, it will be really difficult for Xiaoyou to be the leader of the clan. Moreover, Draco is the heir of the Malfoy family. If they are together, who should marry the other and marry the other? That is almost impossible. It's impossible to run on both sides, and one side is in China and the other side is in the UK.

Nice! Nice! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] But now the CP is unknown [Thinking] I hope he is in the Zhang family boy group, but judging from the comments, the CP seems to be German! But De's father probably won't agree [thinking][thinking][thinking] I'm a little curious about how it will develop in the future [love][love] Come on [like][like][like][like]

The sentences are fluent. It is recommended that other groups of CP prefer those without CP.

At present, the characters do not have much OOC, especially the core performances of Sijiao, Draco, etc. Are very good. In addition, the girls are portrayed very realistically, and you can really feel the transformation and unique inner feelings of an 11-year-old Zhang family member who first arrived at Hogwarts.

So far, the author's plot and everything are pretty good. The only thing lacking is the writing technique. I feel that the description of some details is a bit like AI. It looks very dull and repetitive. Like listening to the train counting the gaps in the rails [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] This description feels a bit outrageous [cover face], but the author is very good in other places [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Come on!

It's pretty good. Currently, there is no CP in the main text, but there is CP in the extras. I think it's pretty good. But I don't understand the part where the heroine is sparring with the younger brother. Shouldn't she kneel down when she sees the clan leader and then "meet the clan leader"? Should she rush up to him directly? Forget it. There is also the one behind who just hugs the younger brother's thigh in order not to be driven away. This is even more disrespectful. I really don't understand it. But other than this paragraph, everything else is pretty good. I give it four stars.

In fact, I'm quite fond of the heroine and Xiaolong... Maybe because I love HP and the tomb-robbing series. To some extent, the arrogant and awkward boy will be more suitable to be with the heroine. I feel that there will be a different spark, and it can also break the inheritance of intermarriage within the Zhang family, and the heroine's early portrayal of "I am alone." , I only choose what I think is right. "The spirit of counter-judgment is very relevant... I just write this way to understand the Zhang family series OOC, but the protagonists of the fandom should be different and more attractive. After all, they are the same two worldviews... I am quite looking forward to the heroine's choice between the family and herself after CP Draco, which feels more interesting And I think the heroine's heavy feeling as a member of the Zhang family needs an outsider to break it. Snape and Dumbledore really care about the heroine to a certain extent, but they are from the perspective of elders. Xiaolong is really suitable for the heroine! If it really doesn't work, let Xiaolong marry into the Zhang family hhhh

Oh my god, it's so beautiful! Very beautiful! ! ! The character design of the heroine is similar to that of the little brother, which is very cool, and the HP character in it is not OOC, it is really, really good-looking! ! ! ! ! ! The only drawback is that it is serialized, and it is the first novel that I have been updating on Tomato Novels every day. Everyone, hurry up and go see it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The protagonist has a full three-dimensional character, a complete growth line, a natural transition from youth to maturity, and a real and credible growth trajectory. The supporting characters are also flesh and blood, each performing their own duties. There are no tool people. Love, hate, gains and losses are all portrayed very delicately. The emotions of the characters are portrayed delicately and sincerely. Family, friendship, and love are all portrayed just right, and the empathy is full.

Hello, everyone! This book is really great! Although there are only 30 short chapters, you can still see the rating of up to 9 points in the future. As long as it is not unfinished, I will put this book on the bookshelf first. If the author updates it to more than 100 chapters, can you remind me? Thank you, babies!

Isn't the Zhang family intermarrying within the clan? Hmm... Or maybe CP is the Zhang Family Boy Group... Foreigners are just ambiguous... Isn't that allowed?

It's very interesting, really very interesting. I am one of the few books that I read and update every day. Many people in the comments and plot discussions are talking about CP, and many want no CP, but I think the heroine does not necessarily need to be CP-free. Is it good for the heroine to have multiple people? Why must there be no cp? Of course, the author can write whatever he likes. I will continue to read it with or without CP. As long as I don't abandon the trap [admiration], I just see a lot of people wanting the author to write without CP because the heroine is a big heroine. I feel a bit confused. Then, I saw a book friend in the plot discussion saying that he wanted the heroine's CP to be changed to Zhang Yuanshan. I personally found it a bit difficult to comment, because in my opinion, it was mentioned in the book that the heroine has been working hard, part of the reason is to get rid of her fate of being used as a fertility tool by the Zhang family's antiques, and Zhang Yuanshan was arranged for her by the Zhang family's antiques and regarded herself as her fiancé. If the two are really together, then in a sense, isn't the heroine fulfilling the Zhang family's antiques' wishes? So what has she been working so hard for? To live? Then use it as a fertility tool for the Zhang family to continue the bloodline? [What]

Not bad, the plot is a bit dull and daily, I hope there can be more scenes where the heroine shows her strength.

To be honest, this book is well written. The protagonist has a full character, a growth line, a psychological transformation, etc., But I think (ps: it's just me) that the Zhang family is actually a bit OOC. It's not about the character's personality, but the Zhang family is a family that respects strength. As long as there is strength, regardless of gender, They can all be clan leaders (maybe I've read too many others), so it's a bit strange that the Kirin girl here has greater rights (not rights, just don't know how to say it) than the clan leaders (self-feeling, you are right) (not to mention the length of my reading time, I lost my last account, the account I follow is my last account)

CP, don't be Draco, Draco is like a little brat in front of the heroine I hope the CP is Zhang Qiling

It's really good, especially for movie watchers. I really like watching movies. It's a pity that I only read two chapters. I want to read more later. I haven't watched Hogwarts for a long time, and I have forgotten some of the plots. This book was read to me and I want to review it. It is really good. The first time I read it, I only skimmed through the first 20 chapters. I picked the ones I liked and read the book. Now I'm reading it for the second time. Damn, can you update 100 chapters in one day? It felt so good to watch it, and I didn't want to stay up all night, so I wanted to come over and watch it. The summary is much more updated. It's very interesting. It's very interesting. Please watch more movies. Two chapters are not enough!

The author's writing is very good. I hope the author will write a sequel to let people in Hogwarts see how the Zhang family robs tombs.

At present, it is appreciable [Sending Hearts] The author's writing is very good, and the linkage is natural. The heroine is a member of the Zhang family. The author's writing is very close to the character. I am very much looking forward to the later plot.

The background setting is very interesting, I look forward to the follow-up ps: I hope CP is not Draco, he is too naive and he definitely can't drop everything and follow the protagonist back to his country. Pps: The viewing experience is a bit abrupt and strange, so one point is deducted

I haven't read Zai Geng's articles in a long time. I basically read them after I've fattened them up, but this is my favorite HP➕Pirates' collaboration, and I can't fatten it up at all. Follow up with updates every day. Cp make a wish for Draco or little brother! It's ok if it's 1v2.

Super nice. The plot is incredibly smooth. And the characters don't act out. The characters have distinct characteristics. In line with the original work. In addition, if you see this comment, can you please follow the author of this book? Please!

It's nice and well-written. I haven't read it for a long time and I can't remember it clearly. Basically, the feeling of disobedience is not serious, but the relationship with Draco just makes me angry, and the feeling of disobedience is also very serious. And the attitude of old Malfoy is really impossible to achieve CP. There is no frustration at all, and I can feel that the teacher is still trying to match up intentionally or unintentionally. ? It always scares me so much that I rush to read the introduction. It's so scary. Draco is definitely not good as a CP. . No CP is better than this. You even said that Snape and Brother may be acceptable to me. After all, they do have some knocks. But at this stage, Snape's sense of CP is actually not that heavy anymore, and he can't hit the point anymore [Thinking] I can only say that this book should be quite difficult to finish. The update speed and plot content both give me a confused feeling. I have a feeling of being infatuated with everyone, my fiancé is very nice/. The description is quite good✔️