[A lone heroine from a poor village × an outcast hero from a powerful household]
Tian Youyu had always kept a low profile. As a poor peasant, she knew her place: don't draw attention, don't cause trouble, and keep her head down while saving money. Her goal was to buy a small courtyard with a shop in Tongguan City before she turned thirty and spend the rest of her life there.
But after danger at the city gate led her to bring her mute benefactor back to the village, her life changed dramatically.
If the village wouldn't have them, then they would go to the city!
She sold her fields and land, then took her mute man to settle in the city.
If their bitter past brought one danger after another, then they would leave that place of hardship behind.
As long as they stayed together, they would find a way to get by!
“Miss Tian, where did you find such a handsome man?”
“I bought him for four taels of silver.”
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It's very good, plain and simple is the truth. The author's narrative rhythm is very well controlled. The love between the male and female protagonists is described in detail in the first part, and the supporting characters can also reflect the deep love between the male and female protagonists. Then the plot in the following is compact, describing the sweet daily life of the two after returning home, without any cumbersome and meaningless dialogue plots. What I didn't expect was that the male protagonist's character turned out to be a "heartthrob". Not only did the female protagonist I knew since childhood like him, but his own sister also liked him 🤦. Although I felt that this setting was a bit vulgar, the author handled it well in the end, especially when the male protagonist directly chose The way he chose to end the story by scratching his own face is really... As unexpected as being liked by his own sister, but the author's explanation is quite reasonable, and with this arrangement, the slight dissatisfaction with the male protagonist who attracted bees and butterflies is completely gone. It's an awesome plot. Oh no, I just noticed that the protagonist's child ended up having the same surname as the male protagonist who married into his wife. It's a big mistake. I hope the author can change it.
It's good to write like this. It doesn't necessarily have to be too long. Some authors clearly write the first half very well, but then they seem to deliberately shorten the length of the article and set up a lot of unnecessarily lengthy plots. A relationship is like going to the West to learn Buddhist scriptures. It seems very tiring to go through the difficulties of 9981. This way is good, the rhythm is clearer, and it's not all vicious. , Although the handling of the plot at that banquet was relatively weak, including the fact that Li Chang's stepmother did not take any subsequent actions against Li Chang. I think there are some that are not in line with common sense, but it does not affect the overall rhythm of the full text. In short, this article does not seem tired and the rhythm is relatively clear, which is good. The processing of the writing style still lacks some depth, but the overall look is indeed more comfortable.
I really like this kind of story about ordinary characters. It is light but not boring. The characters are real and lively but not exaggerated. There is no nonsense. This is my favorite part. I hate the kind of nonsense that is so long that the rating is low.
It's a great read, a short story. I finished reading it in two hours. I really like Mei Bao and the male protagonist. What moved me the most was that the male protagonist resolutely followed Mei Bao back to Tongguan City. There was only a little intrigue in it. Many times, Mei Bao and the male protagonist were very happy. It was really good.
Why is there no rating for such a beautiful novel? Although Tian Youyu doesn't know many words, he is smart and resourceful, and he dares to think and act, has ideas and courage! I met a devoted and excellent husband again! A sure winner in life!
Definitely unique and refreshing! Honey article! It's sweet but not greasy, the narrative technique is simple and not wordy, the writing style is not pretentious, it can be regarded as an outline article, the outline is very good, many places will be very tomato if it is lengthened and the plot is added, but if it is not lengthened, it will be small and fresh. Come on, author!
I like the female protagonist, she has an online IQ, is calm and rational, and the male protagonist is also responsible.
Beautiful and worth recommending!
A treasure trove of good articles, not long but very interesting
This book is so nice