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(The protagonist has a soft temper. If you mind the plot of a macho man crying, don't watch it. Don't scold (¯―¯٥). There are a lot of private settings. Please don't disturb me if you are pursuing the original work.)
Lin Yu traveled to the world of the Ring of Law. Although he had a second-week account, it was before the Broken War. Not understanding this game, he changed everyone's fate in a daze, including the red-haired Lani, the black-haired Snow Witch, Marlenia who was not disabled by corruption, and Xiao Nanniang who had a modified personality.
In short, come and experience a different junction!
Too much content and weak introduction
Reader comments
It's really good that the game doesn't have any contact with any of the original important NPCs at the beginning. It allows the protagonist to first come into contact with ordinary people in the world and their lifestyles, which makes the world feel very real and makes the sense of isolation brought by game fans less obvious.
The character of the protagonist is quite cute, and the author will appropriately add emojis and emoticons to the protagonist to make the protagonist more youthful.
I haven't watched too much at the moment. I just watched the opening and it felt very smooth and had some warmth, which made it very comfortable to watch.
It's a masterpiece. The emotional lines of the characters are very natural. The author has not yet written the highlights (I couldn't find out where I cried). There are really many detailed descriptions. It really doesn't look like a local. It's not time to write big scenes. If the big scenes are good, the author can start signing a contract.
Very good, the writing style is very suitable for me, but I feel it is not suitable for Tomato, just like there was a low-star review in front of me, but I still didn't kill it. Alas, I don't know how to say it. I can only say that the author's writing is very good and I like it very much. I hope it will be popular.
It's such a humane border, not the place in the game where a thing can chase me for several streets.
The author's characterization is very delicate, and the starting point is also very good. There are no bad points for the time being. It's just that there are too few battle scenes, or basically none. The suggester made a mistake.
At first glance, the writing style is very comfortable, a little draggy, which is completely acceptable. Now I am more curious about the script. Does the protagonist have an emotional line?
It's good-looking, comfortable, not literate or sophisticated, and the writing style is very rhythmic for online reading and listening to books. It really makes me happy.
Don't abandon the book, you must update it! !
I remember that the magic of the full moon can destroy all magic and prayers. The author should pay attention to the original settings.
I like this feeling. Should I call it real or life-like? It's not quite accurate, but I like the feeling when I read this book.
Very good, but updates are slow and not enough to watch
It's very interesting, a heart-warming story. Good luck to the author. I really like reading this book [Like]
I finally saw the Dharma Ring book I wanted to see. Great support to the author, please don't stop updating [Sending my heart]
OK, the angle of entry is very novel, but I don't quite understand that Reed Village should be in the Reed Land, but judging from the following content, the protagonist is still in the junction, and the timeline should be relatively early. From the fact that there are so many civilians, it should be before the war starts, and it may even be before the Elden Ring is broken.
It's really good that the game doesn't have any contact with any of the original important NPCs at the beginning. It allows the protagonist to first come into contact with ordinary people in the world and their lifestyles, which makes the world feel very real and makes the sense of isolation brought by game fans less obvious. The character of the protagonist is quite cute, and the author will appropriately add emojis and emoticons to the protagonist to make the protagonist more youthful. I haven't watched too much at the moment. I just watched the opening and it felt very smooth and had some warmth, which made it very comfortable to watch.
It's a masterpiece. The emotional lines of the characters are very natural. The author has not yet written the highlights (I couldn't find out where I cried). There are really many detailed descriptions. It really doesn't look like a local. It's not time to write big scenes. If the big scenes are good, the author can start signing a contract.
Very good, the writing style is very suitable for me, but I feel it is not suitable for Tomato, just like there was a low-star review in front of me, but I still didn't kill it. Alas, I don't know how to say it. I can only say that the author's writing is very good and I like it very much. I hope it will be popular.
It's such a humane border, not the place in the game where a thing can chase me for several streets.
The author's characterization is very delicate, and the starting point is also very good. There are no bad points for the time being. It's just that there are too few battle scenes, or basically none. The suggester made a mistake.
At first glance, the writing style is very comfortable, a little draggy, which is completely acceptable. Now I am more curious about the script. Does the protagonist have an emotional line? It's good-looking, comfortable, not literate or sophisticated, and the writing style is very rhythmic for online reading and listening to books. It really makes me happy. Don't abandon the book, you must update it! !
I remember that the magic of the full moon can destroy all magic and prayers. The author should pay attention to the original settings.
I like this feeling. Should I call it real or life-like? It's not quite accurate, but I like the feeling when I read this book.
Very good, but updates are slow and not enough to watch
It's very interesting, a heart-warming story. Good luck to the author. I really like reading this book [Like]
I finally saw the Dharma Ring book I wanted to see. Great support to the author, please don't stop updating [Sending my heart]
OK, the angle of entry is very novel, but I don't quite understand that Reed Village should be in the Reed Land, but judging from the following content, the protagonist is still in the junction, and the timeline should be relatively early. From the fact that there are so many civilians, it should be before the war starts, and it may even be before the Elden Ring is broken.
The characterization is quite rich
It looks very comfortable, I like it very much
Good-looking, good-looking, grass jelly [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
The protagonist is a little boy [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Warm daily stickers, nice looking.
Very well written
Immortal product, rare to see It's so humane, this is the real intersection.
Very good, very beautiful
Good book, recommended to collect
It's beautiful and comfortable to watch. It's a rare type of Dharma Ring fanfic. I hope the author can write a good follow-up.
It's great. I love reading it. Can you do ten chapters a day?
It looks really good, and I look forward to the follow-up development.
Fast update, good looking, excellent work, author, come on
It's very good-looking and has its own characteristics as a Dharma Ring fan.
Super pretty! It would be nice to have more updates
It looks good and the writing style seems very comfortable. It's finally updated, I've been waiting so hard [crazy]
The setting is pretty good and the writing is pretty good too, keep it up!
Come on, good writing