The pain in the back of Yan Jiefang's head felt like it was splitting, and he could only curse when he opened his mouth. He opened his eyes and was lying in a large courtyard. The sky was gray, and a seven or eight-year-old girl was squatting next to him with a panic look on her face. Suddenly, a large memory exploded from his mind. Standing around were Yan Bugui's family, and a young man in his twenties holding a stick in his hand. "Jie Cheng, you can just scare me. Why are you doing such a heavy trick?" Yan Jiefang covered his head and groaned - he had entered "Qinman Siheyuan".
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What a mess!
I don't know what you are thinking. There is no chapter name, or where it was picked up. No matter how good it is, it is only 2 stars. Without chapter names, 90% of people will not read it. No matter how low your writing cost is, it is a waste of effort.
There are not many punctuation marks, and there are even missing lines and paragraphs in the middle. The table of contents does not have chapter names, so it can only be regarded as average.
What a mess!
I don't know what you are thinking. There is no chapter name, or where it was picked up. No matter how good it is, it is only 2 stars. Without chapter names, 90% of people will not read it. No matter how low your writing cost is, it is a waste of effort.
There are not many punctuation marks, and there are even missing lines and paragraphs in the middle. The table of contents does not have chapter names, so it can only be regarded as average.
It should have been written by AI