Rebirth of the Freshman Awakening System, a Fat Man Becomes a Male God

The writing is delicate, the system is responsible for complaining, the emotional scenes are well written, and the protagonist is really growing up. The male protagonist saved the heroine's family, accompanied and helped the heroine get out of the original ending, and the heroine did not dislike the hero because he was fat and ugly. She also accompanied and helped the hero grow up, and the hero expressed her care for the hero before he successfully helped her get out of the predicament! The male classmates in the class are also not stereotyped. They are also the fat guys in the class. The character Wang Jun is particularly likable and has high emotional intelligence. Although my best friend has a poor academic record, he becomes more courageous and courageous when writing novels. He is brave and outspoken. He writes when he is interested. If he is not good at writing, he will try to learn the writing methods of his peers. If the protagonist writes better than him, he will use the protagonist as a benchmark. When he writes 100,000 words and is told that he will throw away, he deletes the first 100,000 words and rewrites it. It is very inspiring. It's a bit slow, but this kind of slowly growing novel is also very good.

It's pretty good. The story is long, the content is advanced in an orderly manner, and the overall writing is very good. However, this super power is basically the starting point for the next story. With this kind of deadline super power, you know that there is a story and a way to deal with it. I think it can be improved, but it does not affect the overall look and feel. I give it 5 stars. I hope the author can update it stably [please update] Again, it's pretty good. It's one of the best things you can read in a bad 🍅. But I think it's better to give the protagonist one or two small problems to solve without superpowers. This kind of superpower can solve the twists and turns of the story. It's okay, but it will always be cliche. Find a few small plots to neutralize it so that it won't be so repetitive. It's best to add some skills, such as mind-reading to let the male and female protagonists enhance their relationship. The daily writing is very good and very attentive. I still give it 5 stars. I hope the author will update it steadily [please update]

The previous entry of "multiple female protagonists" has been quietly changed. Knowing the mistakes can make a lot of improvements. I think good articles are written "like a god". Even if a certain section of the article is different from the author's original setting, it will happen naturally, rather than being forced to change due to the intimidation of the reader, leaving the author with a stuck in his throat. However, some of the details and profile descriptions of the male protagonist's two male classmates have a "teaching" feeling. I really want to express the stories behind them. I personally feel that the force is a bit too strong and the techniques are repetitive, but it can be regarded as a group portrait. I can feel that this book is slowly growing, as if the author and readers are making progress together with the male protagonist. Finally, I would like to say that there is a sentence in the sketch "Eighty-One Difficulties", "To save the world in one lifetime is the same as to save one person in one lifetime." Being able to meet such a female protagonist who has already fallen in love with the male protagonist even though her appearance is still in the single digits, she deserves all the love from the male protagonist. [Love] [Top post][Top post][Top post][Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates][Working on writing][Working on writing][Working on writing]

It was very touching to read, there were not so many calculations, not so many refined egoistic concepts, the three views were very upright, and full of warmth. This is the novel I want to read. This is a good book. As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep following it.

The writing is good, the logic is clear, and the book ratings are true [Like]

The writing is very interesting. Although the protagonist is wide and fat (temporarily), he is indeed a kind-hearted guy, and the system is also very interesting.

The current protagonist, Lin Bei, has a correct outlook on life. She is a single female protagonist who is hard-working, helpful, stable, and has a harmonious family. Advantages of this article: delicate emotional description, interesting characters, daily plot but not slow, Zhou Ziheng who loves to write novels, funny but business-minded Fatty Wang, helpful Zhang Mingyuan, iceberg beauty Shen Xueba, Mr. Shen who loves to play chess, Su Yuan (Su Wantang's father) who is easily deceived, Su Wantang who silently cares about others... The current main task is to prevent Su Yuan from being deceived by pyramid schemes. Disadvantage: Those who pay more attention to details may not read it. For example, the protagonist's novel is exactly the same as this novel, which may lead others to guess that he is a reborn person (of course, this does not mean that it cannot explain the system's cognition modification). Zhang Mingyuan was also given a physical recovery pill. The efficacy of internal medicine pills can easily make people suspicious, but he had no doubts (of course, this can also be explained by the system). By the way, there is also a system. The system cares about the protagonist, but it is a bit venomous. It bears the responsibility of making complaints, but it also praises the protagonist and gives appropriate incentives. It is a very responsible system.

It's funny, the writing style is humorous, and the plot is very attractive.

Overall, there are a lot of rebirth system articles inside and outside the site. Although the pace of advancement seems a bit slow on this site, I feel quite comfortable watching it. The protagonists and supporting characters, including the system, are very "interesting", and there are no dementia plots or characters for the time being. The writing style is humorous, which is different from the humor that many rebirth novels have been making fun of. It feels like "playing" with words. The author's words give me the same impression as the protagonist - not frivolous, and very to my liking!

The writing style is humorous, and it's quite interesting so far! Come on, come on, come on

Very interesting story. I hope the protagonist will continue to grow up and give out sweets with sister Wan Tang

The plot is smooth and it's a nice read.

The three officers are very upright and the characters are well drawn!

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot transitions are very natural without being overly exaggerated.

It is a high-quality daily article. The author hopes to write a single female protagonist. In today's era, multiple female protagonists are no longer suitable. With the pressure and pace of life, the pure and sacred love of a single female protagonist can make people feel more healing. Particularly relevant to modern contexts and values

It's quite beautiful and the writing is also good [blowing kiss]

The writing is good, I like this kind of thing very much [Adoration] I like it very much, I will continue to read it

The plot moves in a reasonable direction, the writing is more comfortable to read, and the logic is always online. It's pretty good. Everyone gets richer and richer as they look at it

It's a very nice book, the group portraits are well written, and many of the characters are well drawn. The author is so quick! ! !

It's beautiful. The author has a very big brain but also very logical.

This urban campus refreshing article is very interesting and highly recommended! !

The daily trivialities are slow-paced and the writing is good, especially the family relationship. Whether it is the protagonist's home or the two living treasures' home, these descriptions touched me. The biggest regret is that I started reading this book today and read the latest chapter in one day [crying] I can't get enough of it. I hope the author maintains his standards and doesn't end up being a mess.

It's a very interesting read about campus rebirth. The male protagonist is very good. Like, like, like [like][like][like]

The writing is okay, pretty good. Although it is a bit bland, the sentences are quite humorous. To be honest, it really looks like a high school student recording life. It suits my taste. I encourage you with the five-star review!

I've been very happy watching it, it's really interesting, I like this protagonist, oh my god

The writing is very good, the logic is reasonable, and the plot unfolds smoothly.

It's relaxing and not mind-numbing, and the male protagonist is still a righteous and caring person.

The novel is wonderful, the content is fresh and smart, the plot development is layered, and it is very readable. The logic is very strong, the plot is rhythmic, and it is very touching.

The follow-up is exquisite, the structure is clear, and the future is promising.

This imaginative article about the system of rebirth in high school has a brisk pace and is beautiful to watch.