This Time Travel Was so Real That the Protagonist Almost Starved to Death

I read Chapter 41. It was well written, but the pace was too slow. It took more than 80,000 words in Chapter 41 to figure out that I have a magical talent. Being so slow can be said to exclude most readers.

Yes, it's okay to be too smooth and logical. It seems that it has an outline and its own ideas. Start Survival introduces the main plot line and continuously shapes specific characters through the plot. You will be able to recognize the old author at a glance. Opposition is created through class, and an alien version of the Dark Forest Law is used as the background tone. But the description of the main character's foundation, the baronage, is pretty good. It's at least much better than many illogical books. The slow pace has also screened out many novice readers, making it a high-quality product. It depends on the author's arrangement of the plot after the protagonist leaves the novice village in the later period, and he takes out a book. It's not in vain for me to pay for my money [face covering]

It doesn't look like saliva, but overall it's pretty good. No wonder some comments said it was a female video and the protagonist was a bit too naive. People who have lived two lifetimes would have such low precautions. He even sensed the presence of other time travellers.

In fact, you can also add a sadist in the introduction.

It's been a while since I've watched it, so I decided to watch some together. The previous ones were a bit too frustrating. Of course, gods killing gods and Buddhas, killing Buddhas is too cliché and not good to watch, but one person can't just step on the protagonist. Now that I'm out of books, I came back to read it again. Although I feel calmer, I still feel uncomfortable reading it. I always feel that it's close, I hope the author can speed up the pace and see if there are any changes. Of course, it would be great if I could have a small orgasm, and it would be best if I could kill Olivia! ! ! ! ! It will definitely be a good plot.

Strive to be real, stick to the details, and enrich the background as much as possible in the clichéd adventure stories, in order to greatly enhance the immersion for readers.

Children's life is indeed very real, and I personally like this type of work. The shortcomings are quite obvious, I feel like I can't get high scores. It's a good Western fantasy, but the dialogue style always uses Chinese expressions and is official, which is awkward no matter how you look at it. Daily conversation in vernacular is normal, but when talking to elders, there is a sense of drama.

After tasting it, I found that this book is for readers. The writing is quite out-of-the-box. A 30-year-old soul travels into a child and starts playing house.

Leave a comment while there are few people around. The first dozen or so chapters felt unsatisfactory, and I felt they were just killing time. Later, the writing got better and better, and the whole world and story gradually unfolded. If not fascinating, at least it was not boring. I hope this novel will reach a higher level in the middle and later stages of writing.

Overall it's okay and I can look forward to the future.