Lei Zejun

It is a great opportunity for Tomato to have this book. The writing is super good and the content is good. It's just too short. We'll see if we can maintain such literary talent and good story later on. Tomatoes deserve a good push. Such writing style is not common in Tomato. This can be regarded as one of the few excellent novels written by Tomato.

It's really good-looking. It stands out from the crowd of old-fashioned novels. It doesn't have so many dangers. The rest of the plot is really hard to describe, the logic is extremely poor, and the realm setting here is not good. Several affiliated Qi-training families under a large sect actually think that a foundation-building family can protect them by breaking through the golden elixir. Why is this? They suppressed all the golden elixirs randomly without considering the family at all. In the end, there are several types of foundation building and golden elixirs. This is really disgusting.

It is rare to see the orthodox genius cultivation style. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is fluent. It is very comfortable to read. The plot is also very compact. I have finished reading the current chapter without realizing it. I look forward to the subsequent development of Dong'an.

An orthodox genius who cultivates immortal literature, a large number of disciples, talks about his insights, it's great

[Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss] Come on, baby Dongan! Rush the duck! Come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! ! Nice [blowing kiss][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Genius Liu Xiuxian is a very comfortable book to read, and the golden finger is not so big that it makes the novel boring.

The writing is good, the writing style is very good, and it can be regarded as a high-quality product among foreign persimmons.

It reads quite smoothly and the plot arrangement is reasonable. Geniuses have the preferential treatment and practicality of geniuses, and big sects have the style of big sects. The descriptions of high-level monks are also accurate.

It's good-looking. It's rare to see genius articles. I hope the author of this article will use AI at most to polish the pen. There is also a single female protagonist. Give a reward to support the new author.

The storyline is good, but one star is deducted because some plots are too slow and some small details are not good enough.

Very good. It is a rare fairy tale novel among Tomatoes. Nowadays, the taste has changed.

The writing is very good, and it is different from the usual fairy tales. The author of this book is very careful.

It looks good. Please update quickly. Don't stop updating.

Good book, keep writing well

It's really well written.

Good reviews, good looking, great product

It's pretty, the rhythm is pretty good

Not bad, cheers for the author

There are just a few words [laughing and crying]

Not bad, good looking

It looks pretty good so far

It's okay, but there are some minor flaws, nothing serious

The taste of classical immortality is not enough and needs to be improved. The author can read more books on this aspect.

It doesn't feel too refreshing, but the style suits my taste quite well. The flaws in the plot are also not small. In order to break through the golden elixir, an ancestor of the foundation-building family made a magic breakthrough in the territory of his backer (the top sect of the righteous way) [facepalm], and then several nearby Qi-training families dared to follow suit and engage in magic...

It looks good, but the author divides each picture into paragraphs when writing so that it doesn't look hard.

Great book, I haven't seen such a clear and logical book in a long time. Recommended by old bookworms.

So far I think it's quite good, and I'm about to tie it. The rating of this novel is a bit low. I didn't want to open it when I saw the low rating at first, but I was attracted by the introduction and read it.

It's not bad. It's a pure genius who practices immortal literature. It's almost non-toxic at the moment.

Traditional fairy tales, very comfortable to read, not bad

It's very beautiful, not too bad, and has a guaranteed score of 9 points.