Time Travel Pokémon: I Became Ash's Godfather

It's very beautiful. It's my favorite Pokémon fanfic. The author's writing skills are also very good. I just don't know why the rating is so low. I feel that the rating of this novel should be 8.7 Or higher. The plot and characters are also very good. It's very comfortable to read. It's not like some novels that praise and criticize others. Xiaozhi's growth journey is just like in the animation. He grows step by step. , The protagonist is a companion and a friend to Xiaozhi, and as the title of the book says, the godfather guides Xiaozhi to further grow at the right time. This book gives me a very warm atmosphere. It is not only about Xiaozhi's growth, but also about Hoshino Cheru. I hope the author will not stop updating [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The author will be happy every day [love] [love] [love] It's so good, the author will give you a lot of support for the update [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] I'm looking forward to the subsequent plot. This book is actually much better than other Pokémon fanfics I've read. I hope there won't be any emotional lines like the heroine. Just keep writing like this. If you suddenly add a female protagonist and emotional lines, I really can't accept it. Just keep the status quo. Author, please do your best to update [please give more updates][please give more updates][please give more updates]

I really like it. I'll read it later. I picked it up from the author's bookshelf with the cp. I hope it doesn't have the cp. I'll leave it later if there is a heroine. The plot is okay. As for the writing... It can be seen that AI was used to polish the writing, but because of the comrades who scored low with AI, times have changed. Well, I won't comment on Mewtwo blowing this, because I just like to watch Pokémon. But there are some people who are a bit cloudy, so it's hard to comment on this aspect. As for those who give low scores because they follow the main story, they don't read the author's book title and introduction at all. I laughed, they are from the navy, yes, I quite like the book, but I still hope that those who are interested in the book will read it themselves, and don't abandon the book or fall into the trap just because of someone else's words, yes /

Although I feel like a novice writer, the description of the fighting scenes is very graphic, and I can see that the core focus is that the logic of the early plot needs to be strengthened. It feels like the characters between the two chapters have been cleared or non-existent memories have been added, but overall it is still a very potential work (also I am very curious about what the protagonist looks like, and don't be too similar to Xiaozhi AAA)

It's okay for now, but the old guys seem to lack care, just like the background board

It's very interesting. I wish there wasn't a female protagonist. I'd rather see the bond between Pokémon and the protagonist and Ash and the others.

Why did I throw away Ash's Bulbasaur? I didn't explain clearly why the Bulbasaur followed Ash together [face covering]

The content is very exciting and rich; the character of the protagonist is great, I really like it. Come on, the author, come on! ! !

If I remember the rough plot sequence of the Muji chapter correctly, the competition on Uzumaki Island will not start until some time ago. Then the protagonist group first went to Odomale for a trip and then returned to Uzumaki Island to participate in the competition.

In fact, I think the writing is okay. I saw a lot of comments saying that AI was used, but I didn't see it. Anyway, if it weren't for AI, I think it would look pretty good. I hope that the Blue Flame Blade Ghost will appear more often. After all, he is the first one to conquer.

Super nice treasure book

It looks good, the author must keep updating it [crying]

ZIt looks good, I love reading it, I hope Padiya has more features [shy] and I hope the author will continue to update and don't stop

I hope the author will not stop updating🥺

Special session for trainer password writers

I hope the author will update more often and will not stop updating.

I quite like it. I hope there won't be any emotional scenes. I feel like it's easy to break down when writing emotional scenes. [Sending my heart]

As a champion trainer, the protagonist does not hide all the time. He shows off his strength when he transforms into a huge dragon, which is quite cool to watch [Adored]

Did the author forget about the Koga Ninja Evolution Stone? [Laughs awkwardly]

Nice looking, love watching hehe

Looks good, please update soon [Love]

Very novel and very good

Like it very much, interesting

Nice. Don't stop updating!

Give me a firm update

Like it very much

Support it, but it's a little different from the original work, but not big.

There is a feeling of traveling through time in person, the system has almost no effect, and daily life

It's still okay, the protagonist's strength is online The protagonist's starting championship team is very natural and connected with the original plot. It is very comfortable to read. The bond between Pokémon and trainers is also written out. The experience of the whole book is very relaxing [Love] [Love]

It's well written, but the characteristics of Pokémon are gone.

I really like reading this type of Pokémon fanfic