Rock Kingdom: I Am Really Not the Succubus Savior

In the end, a dream will come true, Locke Kingdom. I hope my elf can find his soul in the big world again. Goodbye, Locke Kingdom.

Unexpectedly, S2 exploded directly. [Face covering][like]

It's good, not so childish. I hope it's the same as what I said, write it well and keep writing it. I'm still lucky these days and have swiped the pony out, but I still feel that the future of Rock Kingdom is bleak. In the end, it's just a dream. The clown is very suitable for it, so let this dream stay there.

There will always be gaps when a broken mirror is reunited, and there will still be flaws when broken jade is reunited. It's so sad, Rock Kingdom, maybe I will never forget you in this life...

The book is a good book, but it's a pity that Locke died suddenly [face covering]

The book is well written, but Locke made a big splash. I only read it now that I have a night shift.

Huangliang has a dream, let everything stay in the dream [crying]

It's hard to stretch. I just finished reading this novel and missed the beauty of S1. My family gave me a big-eared egg with different colors.

Alas, picking up the light in the dark night, weaving a dream, the carnival sound of the circus, please don't rush me, I don't want to wake up, and I will never come back.

The writing is very good, there is no embarrassment of being pretentious, and the writing style is readable. There is no stinky pornographic tone, and there is no harem. I hope there will be no harem and just keep the friendship. I watched Locke Kingdom just to see the relationship and bond between Locke and the elves. No love lines, no harem, this is one of the best among Rock Kingdom fanfics. I hope the author will not be affected by the rhythm in the comment area. Also, we are here to read the book. Can you please stop mentioning the rhythm of the game in the comment area? It's a bit annoying.

Personally, I feel that this book is of the highest quality among Locke fanfics, and I will not exclude other works here. After all, everyone has their own preferences, and everyone may have different styles. But there is no doubt that if you are interested in Locke fanfics, then this book must be a masterpiece worth appreciating. (PS: Author, you must stick to the current momentum of updating two chapters a day!)

The big-eared hood is the strongest, and whether the fat cat can successfully lose weight and become a martial artist [laughing]

The writing is good, but there is too little, and I think the setting that can trigger evolution during battle can be added. Anyway, there is already an example of Amiat. Otherwise, although the big-eared hood is cute, it is really a bit brittle.

Own comments Very nice fan novel, Little Locke, please distinguish between the game and the novel properly. S2 is not perfect, but we can make it up in the novel. Don't bring the bad mood of the game here.

The writing is really good, and it is a novel that is good enough for me to give as a gift. If the game hadn't exploded, the results of this novel would definitely have been better. You must stick to it, author!

From the first chapter to the present, a total of 400,000 words, I experienced an amazing story with the protagonist. Travel into this world, establish your own bond, take the elves and friends on adventures, and finally defeat the nightmare and save the world with pure childlike innocence. At the end of the first volume, the protagonist finally meets his adult self as a dead child, as if his childhood is really waving to him. So much foreshadowing, smooth writing style, warm daily life, and passionate content about how to save the world, I have to say, it's a really good story!

I feel that the big-eared hood still needs to evolve. After all, it is the initial elf. If you don't evolve into a pure baby form, you will be at a disadvantage. If you really want to be cute, you can use the sweetheart battery life to make yourself cute. Find a reason to say that you are used to the initial form so you like it like this [Thinking]

The quality is excellent, both the writing and the emotions of the characters are great. Compared to other fanfics, yours is the most authentic I have ever seen. It has no other added elements or gimmicks, and is the purest adventure story.

It's quite beautiful, I hope it won't be affected by the rhythm. The rhythm is barely over, let's watch the live broadcast at the end

Not bad, it needs to be investigated, and there are Cocolia and Roko in it. They should be independent and strong. They should not be tied to the protagonist like a vassal. Let them have their own highlights and be more exciting.

The writing is good and the characters are well-developed. In the current plot of Fengmian Province, the author changed the ending that was not very good and successfully made Lao Ma survive. When facing the nightmare maggots, he also strengthened the maggots to make the boss battle more intense and interesting. The protagonist of this article is the childlike innocence of the adults who died in the past. In the original world, the children came to the Locke Kingdom with the desire to change the bad ending. Seeing this kind of "travel" for the first time feels very novel and makes people feel a little emotional. I personally feel very good about this book [I learned it]

It's okay. It's not like another book I read. It said that the protagonist had tens of thousands of tons of power and could break mountains with one punch. But because he had no money, he couldn't enter the school and was about to starve to death. He released the strange-colored snow shadow doll that had been with him for a long time and became a strategist for the villain. I was almost poisoned to death at that time.

Overall it's not bad, the rhythm is well controlled. Compare the protagonists of "Template". However, because the original work is a low-age plot, it doesn't look too abrupt, but it's just not good enough. After all, he is a time-traveler who has entered society, but he feels like he has assimilated into an indigenous student child. I don't know if the cp will be adjusted later, but it feels inappropriate. It feels like there are emotional lines and foreshadowing, like many Supplement: There are many ambiguous descriptions

I've read Chapter 36. It's so rare. It's rarer than the stars in the sky to read a fanfic of the mobile game Locke Kingdom. It's also rare that the writing is not childish. The plot is not bad, it's not dark and crooked, and it's not childish either. Especially since I also love to play mobile games. It's really my cup of tea. It's a pity that I've read Chapter 36. I found that the biggest weakness is the plot. The author's plot setting is not outstanding enough. It is probably above the standard, but it does not make me feel happy or interesting. But it is indeed rare. There are very few people who write this kind of fanfic, and even fewer can write it well. Come on! I read Chapter 61, but it doesn't work. It just follows the plot of the mobile game Locke Kingdom. There is basically no change, so it's boring. I still want to read Elf Observation Diary--

I feel that this is Tomato's best Locke so far. The protagonist's heterochromia is almost catching up with me 😭 Forget about the kids, I'm going to paint the heterochromia. Accumulate the wisdom of the swarm. Accumulate it. Accumulate it. Accumulate it. Accumulate it.

The writing is very good [blowing kiss], I suggest Princess and Roco to be the heroines [laughing evilly]

The quality of this Locke Kingdom fanfic is online, the pace is relaxed and comfortable, the protagonist behaves openly and not awkwardly, and there is no deliberate self-absorption. The setting fits the atmosphere of the original Locke Kingdom but also has fresh ingenuity. It is natural and comfortable to read. It can be regarded as a first-class masterpiece in the same type of works.

The overall article is written very delicately, the interaction between the elves and the characters is very real, many gameplay rules in the game are also explained and set up in a rational way, and he even has an emotional line [smile]. Personally, the only thing I find picky is that the elf combat is very simple, and there is no exciting Baba game session. If you are a mature junior high school student, it may not be suitable for you, but if you are a naive college student, it is highly recommended to read [top post]

Yes, this kind of niche article is not AI

It's of high quality and has a power that doesn't belong to a tomato. Lockewen wrote a good story about the bondage and teeth for me.