Redemption************

This is the first time I have seen such a detailed boss raising, just bite it hard [angry][angry][angry] The writing is quite good, but sometimes there are inexplicable plots. For example, when I saw the senior sister's sword, she directly destroyed her cultivation. I insist that it can only be used to add emotions to the apprentice, otherwise it is really a fool. Likewise, the one who delivers resources at the back doesn't look like the Son of Destiny at all. He doesn't look like a human being. He can't fight back but he can't run away. He stands there and lets Chen Xihe beat him to death. Besides, except for the protagonist, the others are just on the side of the road. They are a bit inhuman. This novel can only be read from the perspective of the protagonist, and other people are not treated as human beings at all, and others are not like human beings.

Suddenly I discovered that I had actually read the author's last book. Although I didn't read much of it and abandoned it, I also had a control group. First of all, compared to the previous one, I feel that the author has made a lot of progress. The main thing is in making jokes. He is really good at making jokes. The amount of jokes in the previous one is lethal. It seems too awkward to keep up with the airwaves. It is a bit bad and hard to play. In my opinion, the current content of this book is acceptable, it has plenty of laughs, and it doesn't repeat any jokes. In addition, the setting of this book is much better than the previous one. The setting of the previous one is too similar to the "Destroyed Dog". This one feels very good and the setting is quite new (for me) Also, the author's descriptions are basically limited to the protagonist, and the supporting characters are a bit thrown away after writing, and the broader background cannot be developed. But according to my rating standards, this is a fun article that mainly focuses on comedy. The above problems are not that serious. It deserves 5 stars. It is very interesting.

Not the kind of mindless, very thoughtful and innovative. This is the first time I have mastered the heroine system. It is the first time I have seen it written like this and I think it is very interesting. Few people have read the new book. It is not wrong to fall into the trap anyway.

I really have to praise the author. Among the many novels I have read, the author is really the one who has the most logical and closed loop. He writes very well in connecting the previous and the following. He is very skilled and very worth reading [Like][Like][Like]

Hee hee hee hee haha, it's amazing to find a small amount of novels among a large number of memes. For snail noodles, you have to mix No. 49 Reinforced concrete. Sun Wukong visited the thatched cottage three times to invite Zhuge. Lu Zhishen captured Meng Huo seven times to harvest the demon king. , Diao Chan rode through the pass alone to kill the enemy general, Xu Xian burned Red Cliff and defeated Cao's army, Nezha drank alone under the moon and raised a cup to invite the bright moon, Bao Gong gathered people to revolt in Liangshan, Chang'e stationed at the border to guard the desert, Li Kui wrote the song of everlasting regret.

The children are so delicious, there is an aesthetic that rides my morality on the road. I have to rate this, A+

It's amazing, it's hard to imagine that even though ice is banned here, we can still create such magical things. (Some of them do have a cerebral hemorrhage, but only in this way can we raise a pure boss. What kind of boss can Taipinghe raise?)

It's the traditional way of sacrificing yourself to raise the boss. The author's writing style is also quite humorous, and it still has great potential.

The book has just been opened not long ago, but it has already begun to take shape, yo[adoration][adoration][adoration], I appreciate hard-working people, so I will update it [anger] Hold on tight, you crashed, this is really not going to work anymore [face covering]

Author, hurry up, I want to see Shura Field

The author is amazing! Not AI! Look! Show them all to me!

Come on, come on, come on, come on look at the time

😋What a great book, no one can stop reading it. Why was the author so shocked? This is obviously quite normal😄

A good book is a good book, but after reading it, my conscience aches [Please update][Please update]⊙▽⊙

It's okay, it just has a bit of a female video flavor, but senior sister, I really like it [crying][crying][crying]

Not bad, not brainless, and has a good balance between funny and serious.

It's really beautiful, I burst into tears when I saw it

Needless to say, this is a masterpiece. The more I read it, the more interesting it becomes. The first chapter made me very happy.

It's good-looking, has a lot of jokes, and is also very interesting. [Thinking][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly]

Looks good. I love watching. Please update.

What else is there to say? Haokan

Strong and powerful, strong and powerful!

Very nice looking

Not bad, pretty good

Food and wine are a must-try

Personally I think it's pretty good

Very beautiful, great emotional lines

Mouth! I want to see this river of blood

Update quickly, don't forget Zhuge Ling's copy too

Don't tell me, the front is a little bloody and a little bit poisonous, but the back is a little cool, everyone is a talent.