[Two male protagonists + master and apprentice + young man + pure love]
The lazy master who follows the circumstances VS the paranoid and extreme disciple
Master: Just let it happen and be too lazy to move.
Disciple: If you don't move, I will move you.
Introduction
Dependent origin means resentment arises.
Yin Zhezhi was created by the way of heaven. It is located below one person and above all gods. It is called Budu Immortal. He went down to earth and planted a plum blossom tree, and casually granted his wish for a child - thus Xie Fengzhi was born.
He picked up the child who was about to freeze to death on a snowy night and raised him. Later, the way the child looked at him changed from dependence to paranoid possessiveness. What Yin Zhezhi is afraid of is not hatred, but the madness of loving and hating her at the same time, and destroying everything if she doesn't give it to him. So he ran away. Xie chased him when he knew it, pursued him to the immortal world, pursued him to the mortal world, and worshiped him as his teacher even after many calamities. Yin Zhezhi knew it was a trap, but still accepted it.
After the truth was revealed, disaster struck first - he was taken away from his body. Nineteen book-piercers took over his body one after another. Xie Fengzhi waited until they thought their strategy was successful, then tied them up one by one and beat them to death, and put their bodies back on the bed.
When the twentieth soul woke up, it was on that bed. Yin Zhezhi lost his memory, and the system told him: You have passed through the book, and your mission is to live well. He believed it and passed it casually.
Many years later, Xie Fengzhi came in with a rope. Yin Zhezhi laughed and held him down with his backhand: "You want to tie me up?"
"... No more binding."
Yin Zhezhi let go of his hand and yawned: "Then I'll take a nap, don't disturb me." He fell asleep.
Xie Fengzhi sat by the bed and looked at him all night - it was his master. That bastard who was always undisciplined, never afraid, and always had him under control, was back.
The fate is immortal and the resentment is endless.
Reader comments
The teacher's overall writing is okay, the plot is okay, Zhezhi's character is quite abstract, and several senior brothers and sisters are also well portrayed, but I still have to make some small suggestions: the teacher can lay down more foreshadowing in the follow-up, because if every place is explained too clearly, it will be boring; and you can consider developing the story line from multiple characters, and the grand world view is more attractive to readers; now you can still see the immatureness of the teacher's writing, I believe the teacher will improve, come on!
A very interesting plot with a lot of foreshadowing and a lot of desire to read on.
I have a small suggestion. The teacher can write some of the plots a little more obscurely, so that you will not be able to easily guess the subsequent plots when watching it in the early stages. Of course, the possibility of a reversal in the later stages cannot be ruled out (ˆつ⩊⊂ˆ)੭
It's really good to read, I personally feel that way. I've been short of books recently, and it's been a long time since I've seen a book that I like so much. There are a lot of foreshadowings. I was thinking about the direction of the plot and foreshadowing, and at the same time I was amused by the unexpected funny parts (=^▽^=)
Super super pretty
Please give me more opinions, I will read them! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
The plot is rich in content, the foreshadowing is just right, and it is very visual. I hope it will get better and better in the future [Sending Hearts]
The teacher's overall writing is okay, the plot is okay, Zhezhi's character is quite abstract, and several senior brothers and sisters are also well portrayed, but I still have to make some small suggestions: the teacher can lay down more foreshadowing in the follow-up, because if every place is explained too clearly, it will be boring; and you can consider developing the story line from multiple characters, and the grand world view is more attractive to readers; now you can still see the immatureness of the teacher's writing, I believe the teacher will improve, come on!
A very interesting plot with a lot of foreshadowing and a lot of desire to read on. I have a small suggestion. The teacher can write some of the plots a little more obscurely, so that you will not be able to easily guess the subsequent plots when watching it in the early stages. Of course, the possibility of a reversal in the later stages cannot be ruled out (ˆつ⩊⊂ˆ)੭
It's really good to read, I personally feel that way. I've been short of books recently, and it's been a long time since I've seen a book that I like so much. There are a lot of foreshadowings. I was thinking about the direction of the plot and foreshadowing, and at the same time I was amused by the unexpected funny parts (=^▽^=)
Super super pretty
Please give me more opinions, I will read them! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
The plot is rich in content, the foreshadowing is just right, and it is very visual. I hope it will get better and better in the future [Sending Hearts]