Paradise: Seven Curses? Seven Layers of the Abyss!

You call this a little polish with AI?? Without the original novel, you really put on a brilliant performance, extending one sentence into several pages. "[The treasure chest (white) is/is open.] Zegong held the white treasure box in his palm and chose to open it without hesitation. At first, there was a very faint white light, which diffused softly from the surface of the box, like the beginning of morning fog. But the next moment, a thick blackness that was enough to swallow all the light suddenly surged out from it, swallowing up the entire treasure box in an instant. The white light struggled twice in the black tide, then was completely annihilated. "

So far it looks very good. Although the author admits that it has been polished with AI, the look and feel is worse than the Daphne made by most Tomato authors. I hope that the subsequent authors will not offend the literary youth and not overwhelm the combat power. The original Su Xiao can basically hit the same level in seconds, and the failure is so high. The actual performance is not as good as the original 🍉 In addition, has the author considered reincarnating into the world and becoming a slime [smile] Recently, I have been playing the reincarnation journey. I feel that the protagonist Faye and the great sage will be very interesting.

Generally speaking, there are many books to read It's like a plot character party. (The protagonist has read the original work of Samsara.) In the previous copy, he deliberately used his real name all the time [rolls eyes]

Samsara Paradise + MC, it is rare to support it The article "Under One Person" doesn't have any special features, and it's still very watery. I'll come back to it later.

The content of the reincarnation paradise novel modified by MC is very innovative. I think it can be written as a fun novel, and I think there is a high probability that there will be a female protagonist. So if you think that this kind of paradise novel requires you to be a lone wolf and fight desperately, it may not be suitable for this book. Personally, I feel that it is more suitable for the kind of story with a little fun. All in all, it is still very interesting. I feel that this book is quite promising.

The writing is okay and the rhythm is okay. In Infinite Stream, each world needs to be longer. If it's too short, it's like traveling. On other novel sites, it's normal to have dozens or hundreds of chapters in one world. But on Tomato, everyone is in a hurry, so I won't force it.

It has the feeling of the original paradise, and unlike other fans (who are not decisive in killing at the beginning), it has a bit of wisdom. The description of the environment looks like it was written by AI, so the word count is just water.

It's okay, but the plot is a bit slow. It reads a bit like it has been polished by AI. I'm not sure if the plot was used or not, but the details look like they were polished by AI.

Another seedling, come on. When the mosquito was finished, it conveniently blocked the way to cross. If you hang a small one, don't go to reincarnation. The original sin over there is that if you don't show your head forcefully enough, you will die.

So far, it looks okay, there are no bad points, and the book is readable. However, the pace is too slow. The initial copy is almost 40 chapters long and has not yet ended.