Paradise: Seven Curses? Nanasawa!

You call this a little polish with AI? ? Without the original novel, you really put on a brilliant performance, extending one sentence into several pages. "[The treasure chest (white) is/is open.] Zegong held the white treasure box in his palm and chose to open it without hesitation. At first, there was a very faint white light, which diffused softly from the surface of the box, like the beginning of morning fog. But the next moment, a thick blackness that was enough to swallow all the light suddenly surged out from it, swallowing up the entire treasure box in an instant. The white light struggled twice in the black tide, then was completely annihilated. "

So far it looks very good. Although the author admits that it has been polished with AI, the look and feel is worse than the Daphne made by most Tomato authors. I hope that the subsequent authors will not offend the literary youth and not overwhelm the combat power. The original Su Xiao can basically hit the same level in seconds, and the failure is so high. The actual performance is not as good as the original [eat melon] In addition, has the author considered reincarnating into the world and becoming a slime [smile] Recently, I have been playing the reincarnation journey. I feel that the protagonist Faye and the great sage will be very interesting.

The content of the reincarnation paradise novel modified by MC is very innovative. I think it can be written as a fun novel, and I think there is a high probability that there will be a female protagonist. So if you think that this kind of paradise novel requires you to be a lone wolf and fight desperately, it may not be suitable for this book. Personally, I feel that it is more suitable for the kind of story with a little fun. All in all, it is still very interesting. I feel that this book is quite promising.

Generally speaking, there are many books to read The characters in the plot (females are not killed), (the protagonist has read the original work), the previous copy deliberately used his real name all the time [rolls eyes]

The writing is okay and the rhythm is okay. In Infinite Stream, each world needs to be longer. If it's too short, it's like traveling. On other novel sites, it's normal to have dozens or hundreds of chapters in one world. But on Tomato, everyone is in a hurry, so I won't force it.

Samsara Paradise + MC, it is rare to support it The article "Under One Person" doesn't have any special features, and it's still very watery. I'll come back to it later.

Another seedling, come on. When the mosquito was finished, it conveniently blocked the way to cross. If you hang a small one, don't go to reincarnation. The original sin over there is that if you don't show your head forcefully enough, you will die.

It has the feeling of the original paradise, and unlike other fans (who are not decisive in killing at the beginning), it has a bit of wisdom. The description of the environment looks like it was written by AI, so the word count is just water.

It's okay, but the plot is a bit slow. It reads a bit like it has been polished by AI. I'm not sure if the plot was used or not, but the details look like they were polished by AI.

So far, it looks okay, there are no bad points, and the book is readable. However, the pace is too slow. The initial copy is almost 40 chapters long and has not yet ended.

There are only a few accessories mods: Seven Curses, Moon Stone, and Book of Thousand Curses. Are there any Terra trinkets or mysterious relics? After all, there is no jewelry bar in reality, so you can just have 100 rings on one hand.

It is a rare Samsara Paradise fanfic. It is well written and makes people want to read it. The author has his own understanding. It can be said to be the best fanfic. I just don't know why it is a little less read. I hope this book will not die. Come on, Mr. Author!

Hey, it's so beautiful. It's rare to find a paradise novel in Tomato that suits your appetite. It's just a bit short and I haven't picked it up yet. In order not to get discouraged, I'll give it 5 stars [please update]

Pretty good novel

It can be very good, in fact it is really good, you can take a look at it! ! !

It's a very good Samsara Paradise fanfic, and it also has the cube-man element of Double Happiness, and the combination is very good and not stiff at all. 5-Star recommendation (#^.^#)👍🏻

It's a difficult paradise fanfic, with clear logic and smooth writing. Come on, author, don't cut it.

Five-star support

Yes, I hope the author can write it down

Damn it's really interesting. More to come.

I really don't understand the world of cube people very well.

So far everything is good, water the seedlings

The thought of the protagonist entering the void with his original sin object makes me want to laugh. Who can afford to offend him?

It's okay at this stage, but the initial copy is a bit long, so I look forward to the follow-up.

It's rare to see well-written Paradise fanfics. I hope I can keep writing them without stopping.

Very nice, I hope the author will update it soon

Please support me. It's a rare Samsara Paradise fan whose ability is still a Minecraft module. It's very rare.

Please support me. It's a rare Samsara Paradise fan whose ability is still a Minecraft map module. It's very rare.

A very nice fanfic about Samsara Paradise, which shows your own world view.

It feels pretty good. The combination of MC and Samsara Paradise is very innovative.