Epidemic: a Narrow Escape from the Hospital

The author is very sincere, so I am strictly prohibited from commenting. First of all, the core of apocalyptic novels lies in the atmosphere and characters. There is nothing to say about the atmosphere. The ones who best portray the despair of Tomatoes should be those who have watched Blood Cross and Madness. The current characters are very reasonable, with a clear positioning of themselves and a certain amount of growth. The protagonist group should be expanded in the future, but not more than six people. The more people there are, the less the atmosphere will be. And do not add other emotional lines to the two brothers and sisters to lock them in. As for the plot, the rhythm is slightly flawed, but it can completely immerse the reader in it. The most touching chapter is the chapter where I wake up in the middle of the night. The bluffing infected outside the window really scared me. Just pay attention to the degree of horror and short-term warmth later. Secondly, the main mission is already very clear. First, help Lu Zheng return to Zhenzhou and escape from danger, and finally go to the extremely cold plateau. In this regard, just copy Mo Qianhui. The last thing is to balance the strength of both sides. The infected are now too strong and they have to be weakened at certain specific periods. They are currently dormant, but other things can be added, such as weakening the infected when a comet passes by. The overall evaluation is that it is a purely apocalyptic novel that is inherently scary and highly immersive. If you continue to write like this, you will probably end up writing it, and it commits many shortcomings of purely apocalyptic writing. I write so much to provide you with more ideas. All stories are written around the protagonist, which is immersive, but the direction is monotonous. It is always impossible to write a good story from a single-line perspective in a post-apocalyptic novel. It is necessary to write from multiple perspectives, to break away from the protagonist group and rely on others to develop the world view. The hope in the apocalypse represented by the protagonist group corresponds to despair. When other people join later, you can create a separate story for him. This story should be full of despair and the strangeness of the rest of the life, and it should be copied directly from Mo Qianhui. The final presentation of the apocalyptic novel must be the apocalypse as a whole, rather than a single world from the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist sees the tragedy of a certain city, and the stories of other characters can supplement the despair in other corners of the world. Secondly, there is no need to add new characters until now. It still presents a single adventure perspective of the protagonist group. Later, the new character can be written to death to continue to create a sense of fear. The protagonist group is not immortal, but the core character cannot die. The companions who join later must be people who have experienced the apocalypse. Despair can be exaggerated in his background story. This can also be imitated by Mo Qianhui. His former companions can die as many as they want. The death of the people around them must be seen from the subjective perspective of the character, so that the reader can be directly affected by the text. Of course, the story must be well written, otherwise it is useless. The protagonist group is hope. They will appear at the end of the story of these new members and bring hope to him and the world again. Hope amid despair is the core theme of your book, expressed through characters and plot. In short, the story should not only be driven by the protagonist, but also look at the apocalypse from the perspective of other people in the apocalypse and use their stories to describe the apocalypse. The protagonist is hope, and he is the one who brings hope to these people who have experienced despair. If you look at your novel this way, your ideas will expand.

I have read several apocalyptic books. Some of them made me feel chills in my back. I couldn't stop reading them all night. Then I opened this one again. I felt that the writing was quite good, but I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. I don't know why, but there was no strong desire to attract me to continue reading. Maybe it's because I was upset when I saw the apocalypse was so scary and had to describe my sister's cuteness. I also took in Chen Sisi, a procrastinator, describing how they are weak, how scared they are, and how they might grow up in the future. But I don't want to wait any longer, but I still give five stars to encourage the author to keep working hard!

It's good to watch, the protagonist and Lu are well portrayed, and the plot doesn't have any minefields. Looking at the back, I found that it is more of a group portrait. The protagonist's sister was portrayed as a bit of a giant baby in the early stages, but an explanation was given later. Chen's words also portray a giant baby, and I think it would be more reasonable to say he is seven or eight years old.

It's really nice to read, very detailed and rigorous. I feel this is the best article I have ever read. Other articles are not official, but this article is official, and it even describes how to get infected and how to eliminate the virus. I am just curious about how the author will write about post-war reconstruction. After all, it says that after water is contaminated and diluted to 1/100000, there is still a high level of infection. What if an infected person puts blood or body fluids into the river? After being thrown into the river, it evaporates and is recycled back to the sea. The details will depend on what the author writes later. It's just that the author is a bit slow in updating, only one picture a day, so the author should update quickly. [Send heart] [Send heart] I also give you a gift directly [laughter]

The author's writing is okay. I got it from the author's comments on Blood Cross. There are no poisonous points so far. Many settings and processing are well connected. I hope to see the author's follow-up writing. I hope to see the follow-up of Plateau slowly settle down and develop and deal with Blood Cross. The author must not write a love line. It means that a woman is suddenly added to the team and has a relationship with the male protagonist or teammates. Otherwise, it will affect the viewing experience. If you want to watch Survival, you don't want to watch a love drama.

I think this Blood Cross is a very good book. After reading Apocalypse of Survival in the Sick Realm, I always felt that no other book can compare to that one. The details in this book are very detailed. I like it very much.

It's super good to read. As an avid reader of the Blood Cross novel genre, I think this book is worth reading. The author's writing style is delicate and his logical expression is strong. I hope there will be more updates, but don't stop updating. [Sending heartfelt wishes]

I saw Chapter 32 and it was very well written. However, the infected person feels too out of line and feels like he could be chopped off. So desperate. Come on, author

The author's writing is very beautiful. It can be said that it is my favorite book among the blood cross themes. Don't stop updating, please, author

Not bad. I've become a little obsessed with this subject recently. The writing is very detailed and the pace is slow. It just lacks a bit of tension and excitement, but it's still good.

This book is very well written and the author is a huge fan. I hope the author will write more books.

So far, it looks good, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist other than my sister.

After reading half of it, I personally feel that it is a masterpiece among similar novels. Although there are some minor flaws in details, they are innocuous. Recommend! There is no AI flavor, I hope it can maintain this level in the future. However, the characteristics of this virus that we have seen so far will make it difficult to rebuild after a disaster. Come on, author

Come on! In terms of blood cross and madness I think what the author wrote is quite true The details are also well controlled. It feels like watching Mo Qianhui's video! Come on, come on, come on!

I have read more than a dozen Blood Cross books, and this is one of the better ones.

The writing is very realistic and immersive, and there are no blocking words. I highly recommend it. It can be said to be another masterpiece in the Blood Cross fandom.

It's very beautiful. I think it fits the psychology and reality of family love in the apocalypse [Sending my heart]

It's okay, nothing surprising, and the author is quite lively.

Good-looking and good-looking. Especially the one with the window testing, it's very immersive [Admiration]

It is recommended that the writing be more bloody and terrifying, and the zombies speak more pervertedly.

Strong sense of immersion, well written, and exciting

Very nice, I'll watch it next time

Not bad, worthy of encouragement

Not bad, support me

Faster, faster, come on, come on

So beautiful. Highly recommended.

Not bad, I hope there won't be any surprises

It's not bad to go, the atmosphere in the front section is very good

Very nice, the infected people are very good, and so are the humans, top-notch wits.

Good, it is relatively good among the fanfics I have read, the plot is compact and powerful.