The Apocalypse Exchange Student in the Cultivation World

Not bad, the writing is very good. Although it is mainly about cultivating immortals, it has a "chivalrous" flavor. I personally like it very much. The relationships between the characters are also very delicately written. It's rare to see someone analyzing the so-called ruthless way and writing about it in depth. The wording is basically okay, with a few things I didn't pay attention to. But I personally don't like disciples very much. Obviously the author also used disciples, so I don't know why he wrote about disciples again. In addition, "grandma" is used in one place. I don't know if the author didn't realize that this word is anti-female (how could he call grandma like this when he obviously came from a women's and men's society), or if it was simply a mistake.

It's pretty good-looking, and the writing style is better than most other foreign films (I almost vomited when I saw the AI...) It's a real group portrait, everyone has the same role. I read the introduction about Guan Shan and thought she would have more roles, but because of her personality, I feel that Phytolacca has a stronger sense of presence, and it would be a bit difficult to write because there are too many people. I know that the author may want to give everyone a chance to appear, but there is no need to write about what this person did and what that person did every time, and then write it again for everyone. After all, this is my first time writing a book (maybe?). The rhythm of some plots is not very good, and many things are not explained clearly. Although readers can almost know it with half-guessing, but it is very troublesome... For example, the story of Xie Yunyun, and another example of Jiang Xingzhou and Chen Yanqing. What happened to them before to become what they are now, these are not explained clearly. Maybe a memory of the past can be added after the plot is over? Overall, it's a good book. I highly recommend it. I just don't know why so few people have read it.