Starting from the Golden Elixir Ancestor, We Started to Create the Fate-Gate Immortal Clan!

5-Star praise, I really like it. Keywords: decisive killing, online IQ, family 1. Starting from the ancestor of Jindan, we can avoid the frustration of those at lower levels. 2. The family does not feel like a burden or a complete nanny. There are also feedback resources for Pig's Feet. 3. The characters of the family members are also well portrayed. There are various members who are scheming, decisive, lustful, stupid, and willful. They are not the cookie-cutter Madonna, with the main theme image, which is more realistic. 4. The family of mortals cultivating immortals is famous for its high-quality products. I hope that the follow-up will be more successful. Come on.

It's a bit level, I feel like it's okay, keep working hard. Although your book is a late-blooming family story, there is no need to hide it when you are more than 400 years old and you are in the middle stage of the golden elixir. It does not mean that you have been promoted to the late stage or the peak in a short period of time. It just means that you have survived a small stage for 200 years and there is a small chance. It is normal to reach the middle stage of the golden elixir. I feel that you can't be too low-key or too frustrated. It's okay to be appropriate. Well, it's a bit of a deterrent, okay?

Overall opinion: It is a very good fairy tale, the characters' IQs are all online, and the plot is very reasonable. It is very suitable for beginners to read. The shortcomings are also very obvious. The author's plot construction ability is obviously insufficient, the quality and quantity of the plot are seriously lacking, the plot advancement is extremely slow, and there are a lot of useless plots stacked up. Not recommended for old bookworms, unless you have a strong resistance to toxicity. This book is essentially a book that abuses the protagonist. 100 Yuan is only worth 90 yuan to the protagonist and 200 yuan to the enemy. But if you can ignore the plot of abusing the main character, you also don't care about the two problems of extremely slow plot advancement. This book is a good choice for you. Overall, this book is relatively ambivalent. Because the feeling of pleasure is not direct enough, it is not attractive enough to novices. And the obvious poisonous points are too serious, and the plot advancement is like shit. It can be said to be ridiculously watery, and it is extremely difficult for old bookworms to accept. Suitable for people: People who have a certain amount of time to sit down and watch, but don't watch it seriously, that is, they just calm down and watch without thinking. It's a good book on Tomato, and it's a good choice for picking gold out of rocks.

Okay, okay, no wonder the reviews are not bad. Indeed, the writing is good, the group portraits, the concubines and the Taoist couple do not occupy much of the plot, and the supporting characters are also flesh and blood, the IQ is not low, there are many foreshadowings, the emotional scenes are very well written, as for the training system, please change it based on the fantasy cultivation of immortals! I just don't know what the rest of the writing is like, it's still too little, the author should add more soon!

The logic of the story is good, there are no obvious loopholes, the writing is also very good, the narrative is smooth and sophisticated, and most of the characters in the book have online IQs. It is a rare good book in the tomato fantasy genre.

The logic seems to be online when I see it. Goldfinger is not very defiant and has no obvious poisonous points. The protagonist is decisive in killing, which is not the basic requirement. However, the supporting characters are also very intelligent and I am surprised. The only shortcomings are that there are too few and no one is watching.

I think it's better. I don't know why. Books like this have very low ratings. I don't understand. If written well, this book still has potential at the beginning, but sometimes the writing is too frustrating. If there is a threat, kill it in advance. Every time I read other books, it is always the villain who strikes first, and then the decent ones have no choice but to kill the villain, and then so many people die. I really can't understand it.

Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm about to die. Please, brother, just one more episode. I won't touch it anymore. Please, brother. Really, just one episode. I swear I'll never do this again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and spitting now. Brother, I beg you. Just one more episode. Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm about to die. Please, brother, I feel like it. There are ants crawling on my body. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. I beg you, brother. Just one more episode. I'll do it soon. No, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, I beg you, just one more episode. Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and I can't sleep.

The writing is very good, the kind that makes you want to continue reading after a few glances. The protagonist is the Jindan Patriarch who leads his family and affiliated forces from a bitter cold land to a spiritual land of rewards to establish a powerful clan. And after reading a few chapters, I can feel the writing level of this article. The descriptions of the scenes and the descriptions of each character are very vivid and vivid, not the kind of mindless novel.

There is no brainless plot, and at the same time, the intrigues in the world of immortality are vividly written. The villain is not deliberately portrayed as a brainless person. The protagonist is not a nanny to the people around him, and it feels a bit like a poison. However, I hope the protagonist can upgrade faster and have a sense of control.

It's awesome. The world view is extremely rich. It really opens up a colorful and vivid world of immortality for readers. The characters have distinct ideas and have their own characteristics. All the plots are developed along the main line. At the same time, it also opens up the world view for readers. So far, I haven't found a watery place. It can be seen that the author is very attentive to his work. He treats it as a treasure, carefully crafted and cannot bear to be stained. And it really has a strong sense of immersion, and the description is just right, allowing readers to be immersed in the scene. I haven't seen much. If there's something exciting that I can't bear to keep privately, I'll review it and discuss it with everyone. If you have any thoughts after reading or any wonderful things that I didn't say, you can discuss them below (you will reply when you see them)

Okay, there are ups and downs but it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. It's nice that the main characters are written about the main characters rather than the family members. Finally, what I like the most is that the battle scenes are very well written and can be said to be immersive!

It's very interesting. Why is it so small? Basically everyone has an above-average IQ, and the protagonist's failure does not affect the viewing experience. Moreover, the protagonist is the ancestor of Jindan at the beginning, and his various working styles are consistent with his status. It is not dramatic at all. It does not have the kind of traditional novels that no matter how advanced the protagonist is, there must be enemies of a higher level. It is more about the intrigues and tricks between the same level, and the cultivation of the family, which is very good.

It's not bad. I've seen too many people who are constantly trying to kill enemies at higher and higher levels. Looking back, it's quite interesting to look at this kind of people who struggle to fight higher and higher levels. After all, they have been practicing for hundreds or thousands of years, who is not a genius! !

Absolutely good book. First, it's not the diaosi counterattack, but the golden elixir ancestor. 2. A large number of spells, details of family games, reasonable Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful The three major sects and monster clans compete for Yuan Gang, which is full of strategies, interests, reversals, and calculations. I was vaguely expecting a reversal, but it turned out to be true, and it was even more exciting. Excellent work. It's really cool to see the latest updates in one go

The work is good, much better than those trivial articles and childish casual ones, but if you press hard, 4 life grids have appeared so far, one of which is your own descendant, which can be used, and the others are all voyeuristic, which is not a golden finger at all.

The novel is well written, with a clear and reasonable logical structure. I have a golden finger starting from the golden elixir. The villain is written very reasonably and without any brain damage. The supporting characters express themselves clearly. I don't know why the rating is so low. I hope the author will update soon. I have already seen the latest chapter. Come on!

Finally, I came across a fairly good family cultivating immortality novel [crying]. It feels very real, unlike other casual novels. I highly recommend it (he gave me 50 cents to write it)

It's okay, but there is too little plot about the protagonist, and the descendants of the protagonist are a bit too stupid. However, there is a setting in the front that people without fate are of no use to the protagonist, so some people die without feeling distressed. But I still hope that the protagonist's decisive and decisive character will be established. Although the cultivation level is not high now, I finally want to update it quickly. Great update, not enough to watch Hurry up and write out the horoscopes in your profile. Hurry up and update the horoscopes. At the rate you are plotting, I won't be able to see the second horoscope next year. The author changed what I thought was a poisonous point, so I'm back again

I can feel that the author's writing style is very good in this book. I will continue to read it.

It's pretty good, there's no cliche situation of struggling at the beginning, and there's no embarrassing plot, which is very rare in Eggplant [Love] [Like]

The writing is quite good, not frustrating, and the family war comes and goes. I don't know why the rating is so low? Nice food!

Although it is a family story, the plot and fighting characters are all quite exciting, not bad.

Why is it only 6.5? This book should be rated above 8.5

The author can consider finding more talented Taoist companions, and the children born from his own golden elixir will most likely be gifted. Relying on those in the family will have to wait until the year of the monkey and the month of the horse.

It's okay, but I feel that the protagonist's realm has risen very slowly. There is no Yuanying after so long. I really want to see the protagonist rise up. Then the protagonist can have more heroines. I feel like the protagonist [Thinking] Let's give the protagonist a big sister [laughing] Finally, I hope the author can work harder and update to prevent the eunuch from being unfinished.

The subject matter is good, I would like to encourage you about the new book (≧∇≦*) [Sending my heart]

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and rarely give reviews, but this book is really well written. So far, the setting is rigorous and logical. It has the flavor of an online article from a few years ago. I hope it won't collapse in the future. I would like to give you some encouragement. The author is too slow to update.

Old bookworms also enjoyed reading it, and it should be rated as more than 8 points. The protagonist is 400 years old and in the early stage of the golden elixir. He awakens the golden finger and is a copy of the destiny (bloodline descendant). His character is decisive and not like the Virgin.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years. This book is really good and the writing is really good. I am not trying to flatter you. Tomato is at this level and it can be regarded as the fairy grass of Tomato.