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The plot is quite satisfactory, with no major problems. The male protagonist is also kind of calm and steady. It depends on how the female protagonists handle it. If they don't handle it well, there will be thunder. The other characters are okay, Yun Wentian, the god who cultivates the land, both of them are pretty good, five stars for encouragement.

The protagonist is not overpowered at the beginning. I like it. The protagonist has a great sense of development and growth. Knowing that he has a future, the protagonist is proficient in turning back the clock and is very rational. It makes people feel that their brains have been soothed.

Overall, it can be considered a very stable stream of cultivating immortals, but the overall scene is more of a modern academy type of cultivating immortals. , The setting is for high-level skills to be placed there. As long as you can practice them, you can practice them at will. However, I read a lot of comments and discovered that this is the early stage of Qi training. This partial market has persuaded many people to quit. But after I killed this Tu family later, I switched to normal cultivation of immortality. The disadvantage is that it is stable and has no exciting points until the current later stage. The description of this woman is a little too much The advantages are that it is smooth and has no blocking points. Based on the writing style, it cannot be considered a 5 star. But I personally quite like it, so I'll give it five stars to encourage you.

Don't write it as Siheyuan

It's a good book. The whole novel has a gentle pace, does not slow down the progress, and does not deliberately create disasters. The main characters are also well portrayed. In addition to the three female protagonists, there are also some good brothers and some classmates who have a good relationship with the protagonist. The protagonist's personality is also quite normal, he is gentle but does not let others control him, and he handles things in an orderly manner. Although the protagonist has only had five travel experiences so far, it seems that the protagonist handled these five times in a very orderly manner and the events were foreshadowed. It was not written for the sake of writing. Overall, it looks very relaxing, and I even feel a sense of leisure and contentment.

Gou Daowen, who is quite decent, is still considered a half-beautiful girl in the early stage (there is a Qingmei who is struggling with the protagonist's qualifications and is afraid of life span, so it is counted as half). He is not strong enough and has not done it for real. As for the nonsense that others say about giving away a daughter, the protagonist refuses to recruit a son-in-law if he doesn't want to. The qualifications and beauty of strangers he has never seen are not as good as the beauties. If he agrees, he can only marry a concubine. If this is considered as giving away a daughter, the scope of giving away a daughter is too broad.

It's a good Gou Daoliu, and most of the supporting characters' behavioral logic makes sense. If you can keep writing, it will still be a good source of food.

The hydrological system is not well described. The background is relatively detailed. , Which makes the world depicted more realistic. This is a relatively cool point. There is no show-off plot. There's nothing stupid about it. There are a lot of worldly connections, and the protagonist has a lot of friends. Because various interests are intertwined, well, these kind of friends are more cordial than those who are verbal friends. This is a better point in my opinion, because in many novels when the protagonist is a minor character, there are very few friends, and another thing is that the protagonist is not mentally retarded. , In terms of plot, the protagonist is already at almost the center of the world of immortality at the beginning. The righteous path completely crushes the evil path. The security management in the main city is very good, which I think is a very good point. Because there are many little things that I can't understand. There are fights and knife fights in the city, and the public security is different [laughing and crying]. I hope the author can update it quickly. In terms of plot, there are 5 sets of courtyards in one area at the beginning. Many people may not like to see the realm of Zifu, the steward of a district, with one courtyard next to another in a community. Something. But I think this is the most central location in the entire Ten Thousand Immortals Realm. If we can't fight and kill people in terms of public security, then we can only deal with the world. No one makes enemies without thinking. I think it's still worth seeing. You can go and take a look.

I've read Chapter 80, and I found an unreasonable point. I have to go on a mission. If I ask five people to form a group, they must have an array master and an alchemist. The formation master is because there are five people in the formation. I'm still wondering why I brought the alchemist. It seems that it's really alchemy on the spot, so I can't bring enough elixirs [face covering]. It's so strange. Chapter 179, I still have questions about why I have to bring an alchemist with me when I go on a mission. The alchemist even got the elixir, but I don't know how to reimburse him. If he doesn't reimburse me, wouldn't he be doing the mission and possibly losing money? [Thinking]

As for the late Golden Finger, as of the latest chapter 169, it can be said that the Golden Finger and talent have not played any role yet. Everything the protagonist has now is completely based on chance and understanding in traditional fantasy novels.

Fortunately, with an 8-point foundation, Wang couldn't have asked for it in the first place, unless the protagonist really only had that qualification, didn't want to go to a school, and had to deal with the Tu family, there would definitely be much less external help. As for Luo, if you don't take the initiative or refuse, you can have an excuse anyway.

Isn't it 61? Why have you regressed? @ Adventurous pig @loving adventurous pig @loving adventurous pig The author takes a look at the spell talent you wrote before, which was upgraded to 61. It is precisely because of the upgrade to 61 that the protagonist's mid-level spell was small, and the subsequent panel changed back to 60. Also, I would like to ask, is this novel mainly about cultivating immortals, about love, or about daily life? I feel that the power of this spell is a bit weak. The mid-level spell can only raise two meters of soil waves. This imagination is a bit weak. Even in ancient China, there were such imaginative sentences as Purple Air Traveling Thirty Thousand Miles from the East and Frost Cold Fourteen States with one sword. I have to raise my eyebrows.

It's okay. I like this kind of slow-heating. It doesn't overwhelm the combat power and develops slowly. The author can slowly upgrade the flying needle into a small flying sword by incorporating other materials or training. I feel that the upper limit of the flying needle is too low. Moreover, the flying needle is mainly a consumption style with a large number. Moreover, there is a formation diagram at the back. If there are more small flying swords, they can also cooperate with the formation diagram. Or through the small flying sword formation, the small flying sword can even be integrated into the capital formation.

Good-looking, kind to others but not in a world of mindless immortality

It's very good, the setting is also good, it's a good novel. The plot is relatively relaxed, there is not much fighting and killing, but the daily plot is good. For example, the descriptions of the protagonist's interactions with Luo and Liu and his classmates are very good.

Currently on August 21st, I have watched half of it, and the content is very good. It's just that those who can't stand the details (physical) development of relationships shouldn't watch this. I don't like color and physical contact (not fighting). It's not that you will feel disgusted after watching it and want to beat him to death with a stick (I personally don't like it). He is the kind of person who knows that he is good, but just hates it. Overall, this book is very good so far.

It's very slow, but very peaceful. There's no drama or violence. That's pretty good for me

I found another good-looking novel. The realm design, economy, and plot are all good so far. Some things that I can't grasp are also blurred. The rhythm of the plot is very good. The protagonist's school is a group of the best people. The pace of realm improvement is reasonable.

Oh, it's a masterpiece. I guess it's been maliciously given 1 star by a lot of movies that don't have a female protagonist/have many female protagonists.

Not bad, not bad, that is to say, I am a stubborn person. In fact, I always encounter gods and men, which makes me unable to be stubborn. This is poisonous. I hope it can be solved in the future.

It's not a brainless novel. The protagonist's personality is pretty peaceful, but he's just not happy about accepting a girl. You can read it.

Not bad, well written, a rare good book.

It's well written and seems to come naturally

Hmm~~Xiuxian Siheyuan looks strange, but it is better than its novelty.

It's beautiful, I especially like the protagonist's character

It's pretty good. Although it's a slow-paced Golden Finger, it's also a bit late, but overall it's pretty good. It's not like those AI articles. I feel like vomiting after reading them recently.

The rhythm of the story is very good, and it is very comfortable to watch overall. Highly recommended👍👍👍

You can still take a look

Strengthen the protagonist's waist, otherwise what will happen next?

I like this kind of protagonist character