What Do You Mean My Organs Are Grinding Monsters to Level Up?

Has Jiang Chen's influence broken through the dimensional wall? Why is this book so bumpy 🤦

It's a very interesting book. The shortcoming is that you are still the school beauty, you are still the rich second-generation villain, and you are still the school beauty. Damn, the idea is good, but the plot is too old. If it didn't write those cliche things, many more people would read this book.

I am also a long-time reader of Yuzhu. This book, which follows Jiang Chen's reincarnation of Pujie, feels a little better than Dayun in terms of setting. It is more novel and more attractive. But now that I have read more than thirty chapters, I feel a little too anxious. The plot is too tight and there is no relaxation. Maybe it is because I was a little anxious when I last read Pujie. I hope it can be improved after stabilization, and I will definitely achieve great results again.

So-so, a bit too formulaic, but still watchable. At the beginning, the protagonist unlocks the plug-in, and then a school beauty who is not familiar with the protagonist gives the protagonist a bracelet for protection. Then he suddenly fell into a nightmare. Even if he is the first dungeon here, the protagonist fights monsters and explodes. The senior sister found that the protagonist had a monster and went to save him. The result was that I blew myself up. The senior sister was full of food as soon as she came. She was blown up and fell into the protagonist's arms. After exiting the dungeon, it was not unlocked at all. Why did the senior sister give the bracelet as soon as she came up and save the protagonist. Later, I went to the second dungeon to level up and encountered a bunch of monsters. Then everyone was unable to defeat them and they were about to die. The protagonist exploded again, and his heart just broke through level 5. Mei Mei won. Then came the third dungeon. Before entering the dungeon, there was a birthday party for one of the protagonist's roommates. Then another roommate said that the senior sister was his sister-in-law, and then the protagonist said that he was the eldest brother. Anyway, I couldn't see why the relationship between the two was so good. It was too sudden. Then the dungeon suddenly changed its form and turned into some kind of nightmare invading reality. This setting seems not to have been mentioned before, and then still encountered monsters that no one could defeat. Then the protagonist exploded again, his eyes were upgraded to five levels and his blood was awakened, and then he was taken flying. It was a pure routine. I haven't read the rest yet, I only read Chapter 26, and I continue to taste and appreciate it. Okay, okay, the author made changes very quickly. Basically everything mentioned above has been changed except for the formulaic routines. The relationship between the seniors has been changed from strangers to one that has sparks every day, and a lot of ambiguous actions have also been changed. There is also chapter 29 where the organ swallows the dream soul. It changes from directly swallowing the dream soul without the protagonist's knowledge to cleaning up the virus. The repair is not bad. In this case, there is nothing wrong with swallowing the dream soul directly. But after all, it's still a formulaic text, and a routine is used several times. It doesn't feel good if you read it too much.

Nod yes and shake no, certified fish porridge gogogo The third book, or should I count it as the fourth book? The reputation is guaranteed and the writing is getting better and better. Read it with confidence.

Lao Chen finally won the resurrection match, let's stabilize the scoring first

Evaluation: The plot is very close to the gods, very close to the gods. The early stage of the plot is mainly about organ development. KING of Thunder, I pay tribute to your roaring imperial engine. I am the uncle of your heart... Pretending to be Tang Yin's opponent, once the level 5 skill is activated, Kazuto dares to surpass him. Unfortunately, the level of the opponent is too high, and the plane will crash. My eyes have become unclean since that battle (literally). Is your skill a probability skill? Sorry, there is a 1% chance of immune failure, and up to 90% of the effects are ignored. The left eye does high damage, and the right eye does high damage. Don't ask how it happened. The blood of the Party that is redder than your own color, an organ that always calls you comrade, no need to say more about its intensity A final tribute to the legendary skill set: heart failure, cataracts, hypertension...

Emmm... The book Fish Porridge is very imaginative (in all senses, including physics), the setting is relatively new and interesting, and there are many jokes. It completely lets you go, and it also has a completely different early world view. However, the creation of Jiang Chen and other characters is a bit flat and blank. They don't have the distinct personality and charm of the protagonists in the previous two (or three) films, and their characters lack heart and big eyes. Maybe the plot hasn't unfolded yet, so I'll write Hi Yuzhu first. The number of words is short now, so I need to keep reading well. For example: in the early stage, Xiong Xiang will curse in front of the Inspection Department (that should be the name), which reflects his stubbornness as a gangster; he threatens Xiao Xi but is actually caring and kind; he will have the enthusiasm and courage of a patriotic youth when fighting against the thread of illusion. His choices and actions make the image of Bearing more vivid and three-dimensional. In this book, Jiang Chen's choices, actions, emotions and emotions are not particularly reflected. It is events that push him forward. He has fewer active choices in events He does not have many special habits in life, responsibilities and strategies in major events to enrich his image; his reactions to daily life and events are a bit too bland, or there are too few descriptions. If Jiang Chen had a fuller image, he might consider whether to finish his roommate's Coke in one gulp and become dazed or show a wilted smile. After the fight, he might be greedy for money, lustful, or be a gentleman (this is impossible, the protagonist in the fish porridge book does not have such a thing) The above paragraph is put in human language: The protagonist and supporting characters have a bit of a human-machine feel. More action, daily life and emotions should be written to make the characters fuller. The main plot and settings are quite good, so there is no problem.

As always, it's very imaginative. It's great and I'd love to see more.

Yuzhu said that the character design of the protagonist in this book will be quite different from the previous two books, so I will wait and see.