Warhammer: Erda, Atone for Your Sins

After careful consideration, I felt sincerely that this novel has a great look and feel. The most amazing thing is that Guan Yu fought hundreds of rounds with Nezha to fight for the Luoshen. However, Lin Daiyu's spells were outrageous. Fortunately, Yasuo counterattacked with the wind wall and steel flash, otherwise the AK fired continuously and wiped out everyone. What poked me the most was when Zhou Yu said to the small soldiers of the Dragon Tribe of the East China Sea: "If you are not very capable and have no arrogance, don't act arrogant in front of Governor Zhou." He was full of resentment after being flooded by the Dragon Prince's army camp. The overall story is logically logical, the foreshadowing is cleverly laid out, the passionate fighting scenes are full of tension, and the various characters are vivid and three-dimensional!

It's quite heartwarming in a certain sense. I've watched too many of the original version and Ningba fandoms. For a change, watching this one also soothed my twisted soul. I was like a mutant rat that had been living in the drainage pipes of the bottom nest of water warehouses all year round and was caught on the surface and exposed to the sun [laughs] [like] I'm convinced, I haven't been able to watch it since 63. Is it necessary to write an original plot for Prison 2? There is no original story. What I came to read is that the Empress and the Empress's family is not the original Prison 2. This plot made me feel that these chapters were transferred from the wrong book. It made me jump for the first time [laughing awkwardly]. I've seen the latest one, but I'm still impressed. This is what the author said you can skip to read, which means that the main text is mixed with a lot of original and awkward plots about the second original body, right? How to skip it? Please ask the author to change the title of the book to "I Got the Original Second Primarch of the Ancient Wind Dragon Aotian" [laughs]. I asked you to write it down even if GW didn't write it. It's so good and I like it [like]. I suggest sending the Eye of Terror troops to attack the subspace in five directions. The author who is invincible and has a pointed bald head and braids soaring into the sky is enough to suppress it with one hand [laugh] [like].

It's pretty good-looking, and you have to eat the yellow skin [face covering]

It is rare to see a Warhammer novel that has a good grasp of the scale and interweaving of small ideas and big stories. It does not deviate from the tone of Warhammer's human glory, nor does it portray the tone of the entire story of Warhammer through stereotypes, but some small ideas add a lot of charm to the novel, just like adding humanity to the emperor. The description of the official marriage between the Emperor and Erda is astonishing, especially when Erda realizes that she is "Married to the entire human race" A very brilliant description. The pull between the emperor's humanity and divinity is vividly described from the side. I give it full marks.

There is no reason, good reviews, although it is a bit sketchy but not unbearably humorous, Old Couple is simply a rare flavor of Warhammer. I tasted it. I am especially looking forward to the great mother who has to taste it, and the classic Oedipus link, so the author will update it quickly!

So far, the novel has not described grand events, preferring the warm daily life of a family. The family reunion is also quite good. Huang Pizi has a wife, the original body has a mother, and everyone is no longer so awkward. At least part of the time, they understand that the mouth is used to speak. I hope there will be a good result in the future. The author has not stated the original gender of the time traveler, so this article can be used as both a gender-translated article and a female protagonist article. It's a pleasure.

A good book, Erda is still Erda, but the character has been changed (this is actually closer to the same person but 2K). The writing style is very good, bit by bit, it makes the emperor more humane and strives to make the parent-child relationship better (Erda: 😩You are just like a super-large adult banana). There are few poisonous points and almost none for me. Of course, the naughty child should be smoked. Erda's description is actually not bad. In the early to middle stage, he can tell that he is married to a human being. The mother is here, the real mother is here 😋 (The parrot smokes, the son smokes, the emperor smokes even more, they all smoke 😈 My child, you are too young to smoke, so in this round, I will smoke first → Super large adult banana) (os: But I can only say, Emperor, your emotional intelligence is really not as good as an adult banana. I closed my eyes when I saw it. Fortunately, Erda is working hard to adjust it. Oh, by the way, there are still some poisonous spots → Original plot of the primarch's childhood Don't have any special expectations for this situation. The flavor of female videos has seriously increased. I am too idle and have no other ideas. I have not updated anything else. I can only watch it. You can skip it. If you are uncomfortable, just take a few bites to taste it. The author is ingenious, but it is unsuccessful. I really recommend that you make an exception in this case and open a side volume/original volume. If someone wants to read the childhood period or is curious about the character reasons, they will naturally read it. If you don't want to read it, you can just go to the next chapter. Author, you wrote this plot more to make up for the original character, and when publishing this extra chapter, you must have a main chapter. If you want to come up with extra chapters, you must have at least two chapters a day (one extra chapter + main chapter). Don't just think that the writing is good because too many people praise it. Sometimes, some people may not be able to stand it anymore and just leave and don't want to talk anymore.

I like this book. As for why, it's because I also had a fantasy story about the Primarchs growing up happily. The main reason was that I saw a picture on Douyin, where the Emperor and Erda were standing together with the Primarchs playing around them. The Adeptus Custodes were on alert, and the text was that the Primarchs loved them both. Even during the Great Crusade, messages were sent back and gifts from the Primarch himself were handed over to Erda and the Emperor, but the video on TikTok is gone. But I remember very clearly what a family looks like, parents and children. I was really, really happy when I saw this scene [I almost cried]. What made me happy the most was that the letters Angron wrote and the gifts he sent back were really disgusting. Erda even lamented to the emperor that Angron had become like this.

A delightful piece of work where you get to see real humanity rather than a boring and contrived story driven by stereotypes This is a fanfic with a very delicate style, which is very suitable for leisurely reading. After all, you are here, and you are definitely not eating fast food.

I have always had a question, is the time traveler a male or a female? The one next door, Makado, is a female.

In addition to the slow update rate, which is as efficient as the Imperial Ministry of Administrative Affairs, but the content is very good, I don't dare to support the book. It seems that the new author is afraid of support [face covering]

I have read more than a dozen chapters and found the writing to be quite good. The author's writing IQ is still online and the characterization is also quite good. The emperor is neither too unbearable nor too mythical. The description of Erda is also good. It is a very good book worth recommending.

It seems to be okay so far, and the description of Erda is also good, especially the interaction between Erda and the Emperor, which is quite interesting to watch.

The plot with Lorgar is definitely super fun. The rest of the characters are at most similar to the Emperor's personality. Lorgar's face is basically the same as the Emperor's, so it can be used as a contemporary meal [smirk]

I can't imagine what would happen if Serda was like this. Look what the emperor has been changed to. Hahaha [laughing] Gua, I won't tell you anything!

It's nice and warm, and the characters don't have OOC characters. I feel that the author's family should be quite harmonious. Many of the communications between husband and wife, mother and son are touching.

Old man Huang, it's better for you to be late.੧ᐛ੭

Gua, I won't tell you anything.

Just write it like this! I want to read the Warhammer Youth Love Emperor literature! Keep your style and I will reward you every month

This is the first time I have seen a Warhammer couple story based on the official original work. The character creation is also very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not be too superficial or unfinished.

Warhammer boutique, certified by the Emperor, if you don't believe it, go report it in front of the throne [laughing]

It's a very good fanfic in Warhammer, and it's eye-catching.

Hahahahahaha!

I'll take the throne! [Blowing kiss]

It's nice, warm, and beautiful.

Heishencan has seen too much, so let's change the taste.

Gua, I won't tell you anything! "You can come to me to treat your beautiful eyes.

Gua, I won't tell you anything!

Gua! Not a mouthy one who won't tell you anything! [Sinister smile]

Gua, I won't tell you anything [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]