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It's a very good article, but I'm too young, so I decided to update it. I feel that if I have a wife, I can write about stealing the pen and watching the movie Ghost Blows Out the Lantern. I'm also very curious about the heroine's experience in the world of ghost blowing out the lantern. [Like] [Like] [Like] (My wife can write whatever she wants, don't be burdened)

Although it is short, it is beautiful. Although it is about daily life, the writing is very exciting and has a sense of picture. It does not have the earthy smell of tomb robbing, but it is the heroine who sees the other side of the world. Can really feel that the heroine is a very good person

The setting is very new and the writing is very good. It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first book. Please, it must be no cp orz! ! I can do it myself, or I can put it in the extras! ! ! ! Please 🙇 There's nothing I can do, it's really AI...[Awkward laugh]

It is a very novel setting. The heroine travels from being a ghost to stealing a pen. From being confused at the beginning to gradually adapting to the new environment, Fatty Wang, Blind Man, and the little brother gradually come into contact with the protagonist group. Then I picked up my old job and went to the grave. The more I watched, the more I looked forward to it. Come on [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] (I hope the cp is a little brother who can let two confused people rely on each other)

The writing is pretty good. At first I thought it was coming in without CP, but when I looked at it, I felt something was wrong. Then I turned over and looked at the introduction and found that the author himself had not made a decision. It is recommended that the author decide on the CP situation as soon as possible. Personally, I prefer no CP. We are all friends, and only friendship lasts forever [Thoughts]

I like the background setting of the heroine very much. The daily life in the front is also quite interesting and warm, but it is a bit complicated. After entering the main plot, it feels basically the same as in the original work. The heroine's abilities are not reflected very well, and the jade must be touched to be absorbed. It doesn't feel very good, haha, and a bit aggrieved. I hope that the heroine can use her abilities and identity to overturn expectations and not be plotted into the game.

It's very beautiful, very natural, and has a sense of life, and it doesn't feel out of place if you insert it into it. He has his own ideas, and the writing is very good and vivid. It's completely a world of stolen pens, and there won't be much sense of escape. It's completely from the heroine's perspective. Very good sense of immersion

The setting is very new. The heroine has traveled from ghosts blowing out lanterns to tomb robbing notes. She can also connect with people in the original world through the family heirloom jade pendant. The remaining functions can also nourish the body and ward off evil spirits. I am looking forward to the following stories.

Like it, want to see 1v2, please update

The topic choice is very good, really, they are both in the tomb robbery series, and I have been looking forward to the collaboration between the two of them for a long time, but this writing has a bit of a third-person perspective feel. It's just told in a straightforward manner, without any sense of involvement.

I really like the heroine's attitude towards life and her favorite career. It's also good for the friends around you. He is a very gentle and transparent person. It's nice to live a warm life like this. I hope the cp is single. The little brother has been secretly taking care of the heroine, which is very good. Hei Ye can always be a bad friend, and it is good to always live next to a young couple. Lively and bustling. But forget about the two male protagonists, love is selfish after all. I always feel like the two male protagonists are just compromising. On the contrary, they are not really good friends. In a fast-paced article, this really feels like a narration. Those who watch it feel warm in their hearts. I really like the daily life of traveling to Yangzhou and Suzhou, haha. It made me ready to take a quick trip. The route will follow theirs,

Very warm writing style, with a sense of life flowing smoothly, I like it! The three of us in the longevity group will be together forever [sending my heart] So much love! Author, please update! Ps: In the extra story, I want to watch a movie about stealing a pen and watching the ghost blowing out the lantern! It will feel like fun!

It's tied. The first part was quite bland. The heroine is calm and smart. It wouldn't be weird to lead a tomb robbing operation with the purpose of going back. It seems that the Qixing Lu Palace has deleted some things? For example, the blue-eyed fox corpse and Qilin Jie, I'm pretty good. What will happen if Qi Wu Xie doesn't have Qilin Jie in the follow-up, and it's best to have no CP, so you can hit whatever CP you want. The heroine has more of a bond of her own, so it's better not to mix the two together. It will feel very strange, so I'll give it a four-star rating first.

It is a very humane article, with a flowing writing style. It has a sense of solidity as if long johns are tucked into socks in winter. The protagonist's daily life is very interesting. [Heartfelt] The main reason is that the ghost blowing out the lamp is more humane than the stolen pen. There are too many calculations in the stolen pen.

The daily part is written in a warm and heart-warming way. The fat man is like a traveling frog, taking specialties everywhere, hahaha. Entering the main plot is not too stiff, and the logic is self-consistent. I am looking forward to how the combat power of the ghost blowing the lamp and stealing the pen will be balanced. The theories related to Feng Shui on both sides are completely opposite.

It's so beautiful, it's written in a warm and everyday style. The author's writing has her own unique style, just like reading prose. The wind is gentle and the heart is slow. It's very comfortable to read. The emotional relationship between Shirley Yang and the others and their fat neighbor was very delicately portrayed, and the scene of going to the grave was also very professionally described. The author must have checked the books to prove it. I especially love the slightly cute characters of Brother and Qingqing. I was very hesitant to read the book after reading about seventy chapters, but I got into it as soon as I opened it. It was a joy to read!

Although I have only read about 20 chapters, I will mark it first, but it is very interesting, and the characters' appearances are not abrupt. There is no OOC, and I have a feeling of peace and tranquility in daily life, but there are too few, ah ah ah, I feel like I will be tied in a while [almost crying] and I am looking forward to the next plot!

This is my first time to write a comment after following the update for so long. I really like the teacher's delicate writing style and eloquent narrative. It made me gradually realize a three-dimensional Xiao Shen, a vivid Xiao Shen, and a warm Xiao Shen like the sun. I hope the teacher can continue to write, come on, teacher!

Wow, the author's writing is really good! Moreover, the writing is natural and smooth, the storyline is logically complete, and the creation of the original heroine is also very distinctive! I really like this kind of independent and reliable person... I thought it was a long article, but I didn't expect it to be equal. It's really a breath of fresh air in Tomato.

So pretty! ! ! The dialogue has a unique charm, the gestures are beautifully described, and the characters are portrayed very well. In some places, it feels like reading is like prose. Go check it out! !

It's very interesting, and there is no excessive exaggeration of the heroine's strength. The connection between the two books is very natural. I like it. It is suitable for those who like a slow pace. I hope the author will stick to it and don't give up, otherwise it will be really sad. There is currently no meal replacement.

The author's narrative is full of fireworks, and the interactions between the heroine and the little characters are very human. However, the paragraphs are too long and make it tiring to read, and some details are described in too detail, making the focus vague and not detailed. Can anyone tell me which chapter normal segmentation starts from or whether there is normal segmentation later orz? If it's cp, I'll vote for 1v2

It looks very good, the setting is very novel, the writing is very good, and it is very comfortable to read on a daily basis. I just have a small suggestion. Can the description of the original plot be reduced appropriately? After all, Tomb Raiders has been around for a long time, and the main plot is already familiar to me. If possible, I would like to see an original plot or a description of the heroine. It would be better if there is an innovative plot [shy]

The details of life, decoration, food, housing, transportation... It's just daily life. It's suitable for those who don't want to follow the main plot and watch it slowly. But when it comes to adopting children, everyone has their own interests. After all, I often read books about time-travel girls adopting children, as if not raising a few children wouldn't reflect the kindness of the heroine.

Just reading the first few chapters, I feel that this kind of writing style is light and life-oriented, especially like the prose I have seen before, it is very good, I like it very much! I can't help but leave a comment right away [sending my heart] Please keep writing!

There is a sense of ordinary happiness in daily life. Can you write Qingqing more powerfully? I obviously feel that the background is very awesome. Let's add some pretense to the plot. The article needs to be both daily and refreshing to make it interesting. Now I have made some progress with my little brother. Can I let the blind man serve it? Woohoo, the blind man would like it very much. Come on, author! More points

This is the first article I saw on 🍅 that can write such a good article about daily life. It is plain and heart-warming and makes people relax when reading it. I personally think it is better than the plot! I even skim the plot and then quickly watch the daily routine

So far it's pretty good, the writing is fluent, and the most satisfying thing is that the protagonist is a normal person with a sense of boundaries, so the interactions with other characters are gradual, and the plot progresses more naturally and doesn't make me feel inexplicable. The interaction between the heroine and the little brother is also very cute. Both of them have cold faces and cuteness. They are so cute to me. This pair is delicious whether they are CP or CB!

It's good. I feel like the author is getting better. Although the writing was very warm and fun in the beginning, sometimes the writing is a bit redundant and the plot is a bit repetitive, which looks a bit strange. It's getting better and better. I look forward to the future.

Thank you for the author's writing. I found the first few chapters very interesting. It has a light sense of daily life, but it is also very funny and relaxing. I am looking forward to his cp plot. I haven't read the last few chapters, but I still like it very much. Come on, come on, I will continue to read.