Losing Heroine: Mai and I Have a Daughter

Today I wanted to read the Lost Dog fanfic, and this was the first place I clicked on as recommended by a book friend. It was in front of Toyohashi. I thought it had been famous for a long time, but I didn't expect it to be a new book. I highly recommend it to Wen Ba Dang. The author sprinkled enough sugar in two chapters to write half a volume of Yu Sen. I don't think it's OOC. The timeline is very late. The relationship between the two and the catalyst of their daughter make it very reasonable. I like this setting of dreaming about the future very much. It advances the progress and the writing is very realistic. If the two of them don't get together after graduating from high school, I can accept the ending given by the author. Anyway, I enjoyed reading Wenba Interactive. While I was reading it, I was curious as to why there were no comments. It turned out to be a new book, and many of the jokes in it were Chinese, such as Gu Gu Gu Ga Ga Dong Feng 51, I raised you, it was pretty good, and more in line with the physique of Chinese babies. I really look forward to the author continuing to write. There is a shortage of this kind of works right now. I am bored by many comprehensive comics, or they label them as single works and mix them into other works, causing trouble in the harem. I quite like it. Come on, it's well written.

A must-see for Wenba! This is really a sweet book that Wen Ba must read. Wen Shui and Nanami's daughter traveled from the future to give them assists! Xiao hope is very cute, she is not just a tool, but a cute little girl with flesh and blood. The plot of the little boy Wen Shui and the little girl Banami falling in love is so sweet to watch. The emotional line is delicate and gentle, without any abruptness or surprise. Also, the author really likes to play jokes, and what's even more amazing is that the jokes he plays are just right every time. The interplay between dreams and reality is the most beautiful structural design of this work. The future setting in dreams does not just exist as a background, it has its own narrative function - it is not only a key driving force to promote the development of the current plot, but also a catalyst for the characters' emotions. Every time Wen Shui and Nanami get close to each other in reality, they can almost find reflections or echoes in their dreams. The regret of being apart in the next four years actually prompted the two of them to confirm their feelings earlier in reality; the long wait in the future made "not wanting to wait any longer" become the most determined choice at the moment. Of course, the work is not perfect, and a few early plots are a bit imperfect in the handling of details, but it doesn't hurt. But the flaws do not hide the virtues. In recent chapters, it can be clearly felt that the rhythm control is becoming more and more comfortable, and the emotion is more delicate and accurate.

Very good writing style. I have not read "The Lost Dog" but there is a similar explanation. I only have a little understanding of it. I read it more as a love light novel. You can also try it for your senses. It feels good. As for the plot, I hope the author will write more about the process of the male and female protagonists getting along, such as what? Acting like a spoiled child, etc., I have read a lot of high-scoring articles like this, and the high-scoring ones generally describe this kind of thing very well, and if possible, you can shorten it appropriately to the scenes of dreaming and returning to the past. After all, it has some relationship with the original main line, but not much, so you can shorten it a little, and most importantly, more, it is not enough [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

It's great, the writing style is natural, and the author understands some of the bad dog's oral habits, and the characters are not OOC, but I would like to remind those who have only watched the animation, you may not recognize some characters in this novel, it is probably around the seventh volume of the novel, the author also needs to work hard, the writing is very good!

Self-recommendation

Is there no Shura Field? I want to see Xiaoju and Shaoyan's daughter appear too.

It's very sweet. The gluttonous sea otter is still so cute. Although the Japanese Asashi is also good, I hope Wen Shui can be more willing to express himself more proactively than the original. Xiaoxi is also super cute. There are too few words and the author should update it soon.

It's very warm and delicate, and reminds me of a picture I saw before. I hope all good children in this world will be treated with kindness.

Although it is this kind of plot, the details of the content are consistent with the original work, and the character of Xiaoxi is also very well portrayed. I also like it very much. I can only say that the author is very good, but I want to give some writing suggestions to the author. For example, some plots are not described deliberately but passed through in a few strokes. However, I can understand the author and hope that the author will continue to update.

Nice little sweet article