After Breaking Up, Filling in the Blanks with the Singer's Wife

I like the setting, but I wish there was less emphasis on the family. In fact, I feel that deleting the family plot won't have much impact (because I skipped it, so if there is any foreshadowing, treat it as if I didn't mention it), it would be better to focus on the career and the pull between the two male protagonists.

It's pretty good. I like watching it. The only drawback is that it's not enough to watch. It's very interesting to watch. I personally suggest that you skip the part where the eldest brother gets married. I feel like it has no impact on the plot. I really don't understand why this part of the plot is necessary. Is the marriage a must? I almost gave up because of this episode.

The writing is not particularly good at the beginning, but it becomes smoother and smoother at the end. I really like this subject matter and the characters of the two male protagonists. The author's writing style will get better if he practices more, so he must keep writing [shy][shy][shy]

Now I have read all the updated ones, and the total score is 8.8 Out of 10. It is still very interesting. It has not reached the stage of spreading sugar, but the writing is very delicate, because there is not too much nonsense, and the rhythm is also very good. The whole reading is only one or two points. It was a little strange when I read it, but it is not a big problem. Also, the protagonist has had two lives, and I feel a bit too dull in terms of emotions, but his setting is like this, which means that we should not go too far later. Cheers to the author! ! !

I have never had time before, so I took the time to look at the comment area today, and by the way, I gave my book a five-star rating. I found that the ratings were out. Thank you all readers for your support [love] [love] [love] Dear readers, if you have any suggestions or ideas about this book, you can leave a message in the book review area. The author generally does not read paragraph reviews [I understand] The data of this book is not very good. It is basically enough for the author to work full time. Currently, the plan is to update 6,000 words per day. I will keep up with the updates. Readers who have read the latest chapters can help to remind me of updates and add a bookshelf. Of course, the author will be happier if there are small gifts. The author will add updates appropriately according to the situation of the update request. Your support is the motivation for the author to write down the text [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] The book is planned to be about one million words in length (if there are no surprises along the way) [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] In order to avoid misunderstandings among you Yifei fans, I would like to state here that the author is a boy, so the writing style is biased toward male porn, so please do not call the author Mrs. [Punch Out] [Punch Out]. The author is currently preparing a new book, which still focuses on writing, high martial arts background, and pure male porn style. I don't know if there is a market for it (it doesn't actually matter). The main reason is that I want to read it but can't find anything similar, so I decided to do it myself. Readers who like this kind of book can leave a message to the author, and I will take a look at the situation and then decide whether to publish a new book. Off-topic: The author is currently single (you are welcome to introduce someone to the author), and he likes stew very much. There are a lot of manuscripts saved in the computer that I can only enjoy by myself (I mainly posted on Haitang before when I heard that an author was invited to drink tea. I was so scared that I quickly deleted my account) [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Those who like it can give the author a follow. I heard that you can create a fan group if you have one thousand followers [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]

Although I just started reading it, can the author try to describe as little as possible about his family? I was initially attracted by the music circle and the characters of the two male protagonists. The part about the family (the marriage of the eldest brother) really made me a little annoyed, but overall it is good, and it is a good read. I support it.

The two male protagonists are both good, but I prefer the one where both parents are dead, and there is no one with a short-lived parent, so goodbye

The author is an old foodie, I drove the car for you, how can this be hahahahahahaha, give it a try, write more, I would love to read [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Two men, slap in the face, music world, vest, 99, very cool, Da Shuang article [Adoration]

I always had a crush on one of them, but I had no feelings for the other, and then I suddenly realized that I liked them together. It felt a little bit awkward, but there were no bad points elsewhere. It was pretty good, and it was relatively good among similar novels.

Teacher (I don't know what to call it, let's just leave it like this), your article is really good. I have to say that I haven't seen an article like this in a long time. It makes my eyes light up. Moreover, I feel that your idea is also very good. It also incorporates our current songs in the article. Now every time I see a song published by Daybreak, not only the ordinary people in it are listening, but I am also listening. I searched for this song to listen to it. I actually , I am not a person who likes to listen to music very much, but the unique thoughts about the songs in your article aroused my enthusiasm to listen to it, and I feel that I have a deeper understanding of the song. Then when I listen to the teacher's song again, I will feel that it sounds good, which also makes me fall in love with listening to the song [Adoration] [Adoration]. Moreover, this article is very well written. I feel that each character has his own life, and the characters are written in a very three-dimensional way.

I can no longer look directly at the title. . Originally, I would be embarrassed to recommend most of the titles in Tomato, but until I saw this one, it was almost a slap in the face to me (yellow). Anyway, don't stop updating it, it's my favorite type, Shuangnan, the composer behind the scenes. (Also: There are a lot of emotional scenes in the second volume. Some people may find it boring, but it's just right for me now, haha. I'm such a green tea addict.)

It's okay, some highlights have been sorted out, and everyone's point of view is different. I also feel that the article describes a lot of songs, and then the songs have an immediate effect on xxx, which is not bad at all, but the frequency is so high!

The eccentric sex is really delicious. Don't let this couple go. It's also a quick slap in the face without any overnight feud. But one thing I don't like very much is that when the protagonist goes to participate in the competition, there are too many descriptions of the introduction of other players and their competition with each other. I felt that the protagonist didn't appear in one or two chapters. I felt like I could summarize the song selection and results of the PK between them in a few sentences. For someone like me who only pays attention to the protagonist, I tend to skip these parts directly. But I feel that the end of the game should describe the protagonist a little more.

It's very interesting to watch. Although some of the plots are cliche, I enjoyed watching it.

It's quite possible. When I first read this book, I generally feel it's very light, but the more I read, the better it becomes. Anyway, it becomes more exciting and more interesting as you go down. If you skip reading, it will be more or less unsatisfactory. If you skip the first few chapters, it's okay, because the first few chapters are not that exciting, but the later chapters become more interesting.

The teacher wrote very well! The plot is smooth, I like it👍It would be nice to have more emotional development between the two protagonists ヽ(*ﾟｰﾟ*)ﾉ

Follow updates every day, the plot is compact and beautiful!

I want to take out your manuscript box [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Damn it, Damn it, I really can't update 30 chapters in one go [face covering] [face covering] It's totally not enough [laughing and crying]

The writing was okay, but it was too short and I finished it in one breath.

I really can't bear to miss any chapter. I must decisively collect and follow up. It has been added to the bookshelf and is waiting for updates. I strongly support the author!

It's tied, the song selection is nostalgic, the plot is not procrastinating, the plot twists are unexpected but reasonable, the characters are full-bodied, you can watch it

A very emotional book, worth recommending

It looks good, the story is compact and not confusing! Great

The structure is clear, the plot is smooth, and the climax link is not abrupt and very vivid. It is very attractive and keeps digging for more content.

I like the characters of the two protagonists in big letters

It's super pretty, and the cp is pretty easy to beat.

It's beautiful, but I cried in some places. I don't know if it's because I'm tearful.

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