(Swordsman fan + Invincible flow + make up for regrets + cool article)
(Purely written for fun, updates will not be interrupted, some martial arts, age and other settings will be modified)
After traveling to the Huashan Sword Qi Battle, there was a senior brother named Yue Buqun above his head. Zhuo Bufan looked at the dilapidated mountain gate, looked at the golden finger in his mind, and then looked at his upright senior brother, silently clenching his sword: Set a small goal first, don't let the senior brother go on the road of no return, and make Huashan the first among the five mountains. Twenty years later, when Dongfang Bubai looked down at the world from the Blackwood Cliff, he suddenly saw a Huashan Sword Immortal descending from the sky, followed by a huge army of righteous allies behind him.
Reader comments
Not bad, not bad! It doesn't stick to most of the past forms, and the storyline is nice and attractive! There's no falsehood or exaggeration! There's no arrogance! There's no arrogance! This kind of story is really good!
Interesting, very interesting. First of all, it is concluded that this is not AI. It may be purely hand-made. At most, AI has polished the outline. It doesn't get airy at the beginning, and the protagonist is not the Dragon King with a crooked mouth. Martial arts is difficult to write, but this eloquent style is very refreshing and engaging.
No, buddy, write your book carefully for me. I said earlier that it doesn't have the flavor of AI. The boomerang came too fast. After a while, Junior Brother Zhuo became Junior Brother Zhuo when he climbed Hengshan Mountain. It affects the readers' senses very much, okay?
There are many fans of Huashan. The protagonist's plan for Huashan is unconventional, integrating the official line, with plug-ins and innovations, and he blends in naturally with the characters he set.
Disadvantages: The book is still a bit lacking. The main character at the beginning is a doctor. After traveling to the past, this setting is not used.
It's good to read. I like it as much as the previous one with the main character named Jiang Ning. So far
I feel like the writing is very good and has a Jianghu flavor.
The organization is still clear.
Not bad, worth a look
So far, so good
Very tasty, worth a visit
Don't take it too seriously, you can see.
Well written and detailed.
The sections are like a physical book. It's too long. It's OK to listen to but inconvenient to read.
Is it even more immobile? That's it
There are flaws, but you can still watch it. Please encourage me!
The plot is developing very well so far and the characters are very solid. Keep up the good work!
Inserting new stories within the framework of the original book is very good, keep up the hard work
The content is true, objectively consistent with the original work, and relatively beautiful.
It's very good. It not only respects the original work, but also uses it well. It's very skillful.
Not bad, not bad! It doesn't stick to most of the past forms, and the storyline is nice and attractive! There's no falsehood or exaggeration! There's no arrogance! There's no arrogance! This kind of story is really good!
Interesting, very interesting. First of all, it is concluded that this is not AI. It may be purely hand-made. At most, AI has polished the outline. It doesn't get airy at the beginning, and the protagonist is not the Dragon King with a crooked mouth. Martial arts is difficult to write, but this eloquent style is very refreshing and engaging. No, buddy, write your book carefully for me. I said earlier that it doesn't have the flavor of AI. The boomerang came too fast. After a while, Junior Brother Zhuo became Junior Brother Zhuo when he climbed Hengshan Mountain. It affects the readers' senses very much, okay?
There are many fans of Huashan. The protagonist's plan for Huashan is unconventional, integrating the official line, with plug-ins and innovations, and he blends in naturally with the characters he set. Disadvantages: The book is still a bit lacking. The main character at the beginning is a doctor. After traveling to the past, this setting is not used.
It's good to read. I like it as much as the previous one with the main character named Jiang Ning. So far
I feel like the writing is very good and has a Jianghu flavor.
The organization is still clear.
Not bad, worth a look
So far, so good
Very tasty, worth a visit
Don't take it too seriously, you can see.
Well written and detailed.
The sections are like a physical book. It's too long. It's OK to listen to but inconvenient to read.
Is it even more immobile? That's it
There are flaws, but you can still watch it. Please encourage me!
The plot is developing very well so far and the characters are very solid. Keep up the good work!
Inserting new stories within the framework of the original book is very good, keep up the hard work
The content is true, objectively consistent with the original work, and relatively beautiful.
It's very good. It not only respects the original work, but also uses it well. It's very skillful.
Why did Zhuo Bufan call Liu Zhengfeng his uncle?