After traveling into the dragon world and becoming Lu Mingfei's Bai Yueguang Chen Wenwen, what will happen next? Will there still be that divine rescue scene at graduation?
What, Chen Wenwen has blood and is still A➕? Why is her speech spirit the Bronze Throne? Why would a quiet girl like her awaken the Bronze Throne?
"Do you think I can pursue Chen Wenwen?" "Can you withstand her punch? If not, please don't dream."
Reader comments
Not bad. It is considered to be a novel novel among Dragon Clan fans. The writing style of the characters is not bad either. The characters are not made OOC into Jiahao or OOC into Ruozhi. The characters other than the protagonist have their own characteristics. It is very comfortable to watch. It just seems like it's going to be officially added to Daxia. It's best not to add too many originals, otherwise the focus won't be on Kassel.
Give Lao Lu a good meal [cry] [cry], give me more candy, Lao Lu is really pitiful [Chigua] [Chigua] Also, I feel that 2,000 words per page is enough. If there are too many words per page, the total chapters will be too few [Chigua] [Chigua]
The writing is too bland, there is no sweetness [Chigua][Chigua]
Okay, okay, this is Bai Yueguang [crying] [admiration]
I'm going to have a good time with Lu Mingfei and Chen Wenwen. My aunt laughed hahaha the whole time, and the writing was so good that it made me cry😭😭[Admiration][Admiration]
I hope it's not a remarriage. Please don't marry Lu Mingfei.
Give Lu Mingfei more candy
It's okay, not too sweet, and has some original settings
There are many mistakes in the article of Shennong Is Coming: the little red dragon on the train became 1.5 Meters long, and the bronze throne became o18, but the emotional description of the two people in the article is good. On top of the tomatoes.
I really like the author's writing style. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but it does not affect the reading. It is generally good. As for the label, I actually feel that the protagonist is not a male at all. I suggest that the previous plot about the male in the previous life can be changed to a female. It will not affect the plot at all. Of course, it depends on the author.
This novel must change marriage [Adoration]
The writing is very good, with a hint of Jiangnan flavor. The psychological description of the characters and the choice of perspective are also very good. While the description is delicate, it also pays attention to the promotion and development of the plot, and it will not be too slow to start (generally the Dragon Clan fandom that is written in detail is always slow to start), but the title and cover of the novel are not very good. My suggestion is: optimize the cover and change the title to something more literary (to make people want to come in)
It looks good. Lu Mingfei still doesn't dare to confess. If you don't confess, why don't you wait for others to confess? [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully]
It's very beautiful and novel. Is the author Lu Tui?
Hundred, married, single? Tell me in advance
It's okay. I don't know if there will be any emotional drama. I hope I don't get married.
Changed marriage and ran away
The original plot is really good
I can't explain it, but I feel like I'm at ease with things.
It's great. It's very comfortable for people watching. Cheers (ง•̀_•́)ง
There is nothing wrong with the writing and plot so far. The protagonist Chen Wenwen and Bai Yueguang are too much for Lu Mingfei. It is generally in line with my taste. I hope there will be more sugar in the future and the author will update it soon [Note]
Good-looking, very delicate and very good, very feeling
It's okay, it's pretty_(:з∠)_
It's so well written and beautiful (。・ω・。)ノ♡
Warm and interesting, very stable and gentle
I wish there were more emotional scenes
It's better to be with the little monster
Come on! I hope the author can write to the end
The article may not be precise enough in handling some small details. But the author has a lot of his own ideas and plot designs, and he often makes them sweet, flawless and delicious.
Lu Mingfei eats so well that Bai Yueguang even comes [laughs evilly]
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, the author will give you five stars for quick updates
Well, the emotional line of this book is quite good.
Not bad. It is considered to be a novel novel among Dragon Clan fans. The writing style of the characters is not bad either. The characters are not made OOC into Jiahao or OOC into Ruozhi. The characters other than the protagonist have their own characteristics. It is very comfortable to watch. It just seems like it's going to be officially added to Daxia. It's best not to add too many originals, otherwise the focus won't be on Kassel.
Give Lao Lu a good meal [cry] [cry], give me more candy, Lao Lu is really pitiful [Chigua] [Chigua] Also, I feel that 2,000 words per page is enough. If there are too many words per page, the total chapters will be too few [Chigua] [Chigua] The writing is too bland, there is no sweetness [Chigua][Chigua]
Okay, okay, this is Bai Yueguang [crying] [admiration] I'm going to have a good time with Lu Mingfei and Chen Wenwen. My aunt laughed hahaha the whole time, and the writing was so good that it made me cry😭😭[Admiration][Admiration]
I hope it's not a remarriage. Please don't marry Lu Mingfei.
Give Lu Mingfei more candy
It's okay, not too sweet, and has some original settings
There are many mistakes in the article of Shennong Is Coming: the little red dragon on the train became 1.5 Meters long, and the bronze throne became o18, but the emotional description of the two people in the article is good. On top of the tomatoes.
I really like the author's writing style. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but it does not affect the reading. It is generally good. As for the label, I actually feel that the protagonist is not a male at all. I suggest that the previous plot about the male in the previous life can be changed to a female. It will not affect the plot at all. Of course, it depends on the author.
This novel must change marriage [Adoration]
The writing is very good, with a hint of Jiangnan flavor. The psychological description of the characters and the choice of perspective are also very good. While the description is delicate, it also pays attention to the promotion and development of the plot, and it will not be too slow to start (generally the Dragon Clan fandom that is written in detail is always slow to start), but the title and cover of the novel are not very good. My suggestion is: optimize the cover and change the title to something more literary (to make people want to come in)
It looks good. Lu Mingfei still doesn't dare to confess. If you don't confess, why don't you wait for others to confess? [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully] [You taste it carefully]
It's very beautiful and novel. Is the author Lu Tui?
Hundred, married, single? Tell me in advance
It's okay. I don't know if there will be any emotional drama. I hope I don't get married. Changed marriage and ran away
The original plot is really good
I can't explain it, but I feel like I'm at ease with things.
It's great. It's very comfortable for people watching. Cheers (ง•̀_•́)ง
There is nothing wrong with the writing and plot so far. The protagonist Chen Wenwen and Bai Yueguang are too much for Lu Mingfei. It is generally in line with my taste. I hope there will be more sugar in the future and the author will update it soon [Note]
Good-looking, very delicate and very good, very feeling
It's okay, it's pretty_(:з∠)_
It's so well written and beautiful (。・ω・。)ノ♡
Warm and interesting, very stable and gentle
I wish there were more emotional scenes
It's better to be with the little monster
Come on! I hope the author can write to the end
The article may not be precise enough in handling some small details. But the author has a lot of his own ideas and plot designs, and he often makes them sweet, flawless and delicious.
Lu Mingfei eats so well that Bai Yueguang even comes [laughs evilly]
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, the author will give you five stars for quick updates
Well, the emotional line of this book is quite good.
Wow, wow, it totally fits my dragon fantasy.