[Light novel] [Conan fan] [System flow] [Better reading experience without thinking]
Ke Xue's wind finally reached Café Poirot.
Sitting behind the scenes?
Tang Yin looked at the main characters of Ming Ke who crowded the whole store, and fell into deep thought: It seems a bit crowded behind the scenes.
Reader comments
This is the first novel for a new author. I hope to gain writing experience and methods. If any readers can comment and correct the author's problems in the book, I would be very grateful.
The author recently checked through his trumpet and discovered that many readers have written great book reviews. However, since the author's terminal only displays book reviews with four stars or above (I don't know how to read those with three stars or less [face covering]), I can't see the great book reviews from these readers. Many of them have very pertinent suggestions. (The author saw a Baozi who wrote a very long book review in the afternoon and pointed out many problems of the author, such as my AI tastes too strong [face covering]). In this regard, the author here accepts all rational criticisms and corrections from everyone, and everyone is also urging me to complete this novel better.
Regarding the issue of AI, the author has consciously reduced the use of it. In most cases, he writes it first and then lets AI help polish it. Please bear with me.
Nice. One star is deducted because of the use of AI. There are too many repeated paragraphs and descriptions. I hope to reduce the sentence structure of not, not, but.
The overall pace of the content is slow, and I hope that the pace can be speeded up in the future. The usefulness of the system is not well demonstrated at the moment [scrolls], but as a first novel, its flaws are not concealed, and it deserves encouragement [get it]
No cp, travel through non-aboriginals, join the winery, the plot is slow, daily life is more, and the five people from the police academy are rescued. The protagonist is the coffee shop manager. Bourbon appears more often than others. It feels like everyone is a Riddler and there are many metaphors. I like the daily life in the coffee shop, it has a warm and happy feeling.
Not bad, not bad. It's pretty good to watch. The plot progresses slowly and the character descriptions are pretty good. However, I personally think some of the characters are a bit OOC (but not serious), so it's a work that can be read [Chigua][Please update]
Okay, it looks better. It's a better narrative. Like heavy rain, the thunder always comes first~After the rain is the soft land~The gentle sky~After the storm, the sun rises~The gentleness of the water~Moisturizing and silent
Praise
It's okay, but it's a bit overly repetitive.
Super beautiful, not brainless, [loving][loving][loving] can be watched
Good-looking [send heartfelt]ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ (The author must keep up the good work!)
The logic is clear and the story is compact, worth watching
Good-looking, relatively smooth and flowing
Oh my god, it's so beautiful. The author will update it soon (ºº) I love it!
It's quite good-looking. Although the character descriptions can seem lengthy in most cases, this book has a very good grasp of it, making the characters full-bodied without being wordy. It's very concise.
It's good to watch. I'm still unsatisfied after reading it [Like] I didn't expect it to end so quickly. I think the ending is a bit rushed, but the rest is pretty good [Blow kiss]
It's really beautiful, I really recommend it ((*^∀^))👍🏻
Nice! ! ! ! ! The logic is very clear and the plot is also very interesting. I hope it will continue to be updated [Top post][Top post][Top post]
This is the first novel for a new author. I hope to gain writing experience and methods. If any readers can comment and correct the author's problems in the book, I would be very grateful. The author recently checked through his trumpet and discovered that many readers have written great book reviews. However, since the author's terminal only displays book reviews with four stars or above (I don't know how to read those with three stars or less [face covering]), I can't see the great book reviews from these readers. Many of them have very pertinent suggestions. (The author saw a Baozi who wrote a very long book review in the afternoon and pointed out many problems of the author, such as my AI tastes too strong [face covering]). In this regard, the author here accepts all rational criticisms and corrections from everyone, and everyone is also urging me to complete this novel better. Regarding the issue of AI, the author has consciously reduced the use of it. In most cases, he writes it first and then lets AI help polish it. Please bear with me.
Nice. One star is deducted because of the use of AI. There are too many repeated paragraphs and descriptions. I hope to reduce the sentence structure of not, not, but.
The overall pace of the content is slow, and I hope that the pace can be speeded up in the future. The usefulness of the system is not well demonstrated at the moment [scrolls], but as a first novel, its flaws are not concealed, and it deserves encouragement [get it]
No cp, travel through non-aboriginals, join the winery, the plot is slow, daily life is more, and the five people from the police academy are rescued. The protagonist is the coffee shop manager. Bourbon appears more often than others. It feels like everyone is a Riddler and there are many metaphors. I like the daily life in the coffee shop, it has a warm and happy feeling.
Not bad, not bad. It's pretty good to watch. The plot progresses slowly and the character descriptions are pretty good. However, I personally think some of the characters are a bit OOC (but not serious), so it's a work that can be read [Chigua][Please update]
Okay, it looks better. It's a better narrative. Like heavy rain, the thunder always comes first~After the rain is the soft land~The gentle sky~After the storm, the sun rises~The gentleness of the water~Moisturizing and silent
Praise
It's okay, but it's a bit overly repetitive.
Super beautiful, not brainless, [loving][loving][loving] can be watched
Good-looking [send heartfelt]ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ (The author must keep up the good work!)
The logic is clear and the story is compact, worth watching
Good-looking, relatively smooth and flowing
Oh my god, it's so beautiful. The author will update it soon (ºº) I love it!
It's quite good-looking. Although the character descriptions can seem lengthy in most cases, this book has a very good grasp of it, making the characters full-bodied without being wordy. It's very concise.
It's good to watch. I'm still unsatisfied after reading it [Like] I didn't expect it to end so quickly. I think the ending is a bit rushed, but the rest is pretty good [Blow kiss]
It's really beautiful, I really recommend it ((*^∀^))👍🏻
Nice! ! ! ! ! The logic is very clear and the plot is also very interesting. I hope it will continue to be updated [Top post][Top post][Top post]