Lin Zhao delivers takeout, owes 900,000 yuan, got dumped by his ex-girlfriend, and still has to pay for a wedding gift.
His mother forces him to go on a blind date. The woman immediately demands 188,000 yuan in bride price, her name on a fully paid-off house, a 200,000-yuan car, and 8,000 yuan in monthly spending money...
Lin Zhao is about to say, “I don’t think we’re right for each other,” when a flash of light suddenly erupts in his mind.
[Ding! Blind Date Cashback System activated!]
[She asks for 188,000 yuan in bride price → System refunds 188,000 yuan. Deposited.]
[She asks for a fully paid-off home → System refunds a 90-square-meter, three-bedroom, one-living-room apartment. Title transferred.]
[She asks for a Tesla → System refunds a new Model 3, parked right across from you.]
Lin Zhao is stunned.
Across from him, the heavily made-up nightclub manager keeps rattling off her demands. She has no idea that every word she says puts more money in Lin Zhao’s bank account. Then she suddenly clutches her stomach, and blood spills across the floor.
“You’re pregnant? Three months along?” Lin Zhao looks at the System in horror. Could it be about to refund him a baby, too?
System: [...There really isn’t a refund for that.]
Later, his ex-girlfriend Lin Wei cuddles up to her new husband and shows off her diamond ring in their class group chat.
Lin Zhao quietly posts a photo of his property deed. “Sorry, just got it as a blind-date gift.”
Lin Wei sneers. “A delivery guy thinks he can turn his life around?”
The next moment, Lin Zhao’s blind date changes from a nightclub girl to a wealthy heiress.
The heiress says, “My dad says the bride price is 100 million yuan, and the dowry will be double that. What do you think?”
Before Lin Zhao can answer, the System starts blaring alarms.
[Warning! The cashback amount for this transaction is too large. Host, prepare yourself!]
The world is cold, it is a common feeling in the world, and the social reality is really bone-chilling.
The writing is very good. So far, the author's layout is very stable. He does not rely heavily on the system, but uses the system as a tool. He has a strong sense of autonomy. The plot is also very logical, especially if you are the one. There is no pretentiousness, but you can feel the calmness of the protagonist. The heroine has not been decided yet, and I don't know who the protagonist will choose. I am still looking forward to it. The career of the protagonist is still developing steadily and there is a lot of room. I hope the author can stay steady. Come on.
Some people say it's off topic, but I don't think it's off topic. Normally, if you have money, you can start a career or something, and you won't go anywhere.
Well written, keep it up!
I think it looks pretty
Although the subject matter is an old one, I still have some expectations.
So far, it's pretty good