Beng Tie: We Promised Plenty, but What Are You Doing with Nothingness?

What a delicious book. It's the first time I've seen the subject matter, but it's really interesting. I've also thought about writing this type of book before. My main recommendation is Jing Liu and my second recommendation is Huang Quan. Both characters in this book have a deep relationship with each other, so it's really good to read. I just couldn't find a book of this type before. I originally planned to write one myself, but when I saw this one, I didn't want to work hard anymore.

A book that is good-looking and can make people look forward to the follow-up plot is good-looking and comfortable to read. Come on, author, don't run away. In fact, I feel that there is still a lot to write. Bengtie is still updating. If you write too fast, you will easily get stabbed in the back [Like]

The subject matter is super interesting! [Laughs] The protagonist is super strong! [Punch] The writing is super comfortable! [Blowing kiss] A super knife with love! [Crying] Finally...[Thinking] The author will update soon! Not enough~~[Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates]

So pretty, so sweet

It's a good book, but there are not many people. There are many about Izumo Kingdom in the early stage. I hope to get over it soon. There are too few people. I don't dare to read books now for fear of dying [crying] [crying] The author will update quickly and finish the early transitional chapter of Izumo Country. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Five stars for support. I haven't seen a book about Huangquan for a long time. It actually has two heroines. I really want to take a bite [Adoration][Adoration]

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The best Bengtie fanfic I've seen recently

The theme is novel and the plot is not poisonous in my opinion

Look! I also successfully saw the knife link [cool][cool][cool]

It's nice to see it for me [Send Heart] Generally speaking, there are no flaws.

The book that saved me is in ruins.

Luofu feels like it's all about the main plot, and the protagonist basically doesn't have a role, and the rest is okay.

I don't know when the two of them will meet.

Haokan, clicked with this number [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Good books don't need more evaluation

A novel of quite good quality

It looks good, I like it [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] I hope it gets to the end [laugh] [laugh] [OK]

In fact, the author can make some parts simpler like the game. The protagonist's sense of presence is too low. Don't add so many scenes and supporting roles to the narrative that are the same as the original work. Many places can be simplified. This is because I want to portray the protagonist and describe the details, but I can't do either of them well. "March 7 put away his bow and arrows panting, looking at the corpses of empty soldiers on the ground, and his face turned pale." This kind of sentence really gives people a strong AI flavor.

It's very beautiful, the author's writing style is very good (personal opinion)

OK A little bit AI

Good-looking, the plot is compact and not draggy

Hao Chi is Hao Shu Miao [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

Come on, great author

One by one, beautiful

The main problem is that there are too few roles for the protagonist. So far, there are not even many roles for the protagonist. Most of the time, the existence of the protagonist is almost forgotten. There are no other big problems.

It's OK to skip to the end of the first volume.

Feel free to comment and the author will listen to suggestions for future plots.

This book is also very delicious!

Good looking, good looking, author, author, when will Huang Quan and Li Shang recognize each other?

Let all sentient beings get everything they ask for