Simulator: An Abyssal Insect Egg from the Start

The content is okay, but some sentences keep repeating. Maybe the author wants to emphasize that thing, but he can try to change the expression instead of pasting and copying the sentences that have been written before. It seems to affect the perception a bit, so I specially leave a comment to avoid making mistakes again next time.

It looks good and suits my taste very well, and it is good-looking. There is just a small problem. There are a lot of "No" in the article. . No. . Neither. . Yes. . There are too many such sentence patterns, each chapter has 2-3 paragraphs, which greatly affects the viewing experience. If it would be better to try another way of saying it.

During the book shortage period, this book is a love story, with a bit of human flavor (such as some modern jokes, compared with other pure love stories). There are more repeated sentences in the early stage, but it decreases later, but I am still interested in its story. There are currently 146 chapters, and there is no villain targeting the protagonist (I feel like some people will complain about this, but people who know how to complain will basically not see this), so it's good to pick the one you like and read it [Thinking]

It looks good and the author must not stop updating it. As long as your combat power doesn't collapse in the later stages, it's a good book

Good looking and good food. Good cheers to the author. I hope it won't be cut in half.

This looks good, but how to solve the identity of Zhang Yuan? [Thinking] Add more

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