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Explore more →I Am in a Period of Aesthetic Fatigue and I Am Looking for Novel and Eye-Catching Novels.
Looking for Daddy-Level Male Protagonists! ! It's so Cool to Watch It! ! !
Want to watch something like "Wild Dogs Are Hard to Train?" It doesn't matter, the boss knows it very well" book. Don't be! ! !
A Daddy + Gentle + a Guiding Lover + Long-Planned and Well-Written
I want to read a book similar to "Heat and Kiss". Be the same as Pei Zhihe! Teacher Pei really killed me, my long-planned secret love came true, super sweet!
The Male Protagonist Is a Foreigner and Has a Transnational Relationship.
I Want to Read It. My Family, Please Recommend Some Good Books!
I don't choose any subject matter. I want to save the children with something that shines in front of my eyes. I'm going to vomit when I read the book during the bottleneck period😭
It's Sweet from the Beginning, or It's Smooth from Beginning to End.
It's sweet from the beginning, or it's smooth from beginning to end😀😀
A Male Protagonist with Strict Family Rules
Being punished for the heroine
I've Read Most of Tomato's Two Guys. There's a Shortage of Books Now. Is There Anyone Who Knows Them?
I Beg for a Book That Comes Back After Escaping from Death. It Doesn't Matter Whether It's a Quick Time Travel or Not. It's About Shuang Nan.
I want to read a book like "After seducing my master and escaping to death, I became a ferret". Books like this
There Is No Longer a Shuangnan Main Article That Makes My Eyes Shine.
Dad Type, Possessive, Creepy and Dark
Ahhhhhhhh! ! Books come, books come, books come... It must be good-looking. I'm too picky. I often stop reading halfway through! It's awesome ଲ
Have You Ever Raised a Cub on Your Mobile Phone? in the End, the Cub Will Still Appear in the Real Text?
The kind with CP
A Shuangnan Novel That Wants to Progress Quickly
Baby-Raising Games, Sweet Pet Stories, and Paranoid Redemption Stories Installed on Your Mobile Phone
No Novel with Two Male Protagonists Can Arouse My Interest in Reading... [Smoking. JPG]
I want to read a book similar to "On How Straight Men Survive in the Cracks in the Pornography (One-Way Bidding)". I've been coming to Red Persimmon for a long time. I've seen everything I should see and a lot of good stuff. I'm so bored now... When I look through Red Persimmon, I can't get into any of the books.
Is There Any Article That Is so Interesting That People Won't Put It Down? Bisexual
Is there any kind of interesting article that people won't want to abandon? Don't want the kind of article that suddenly loses interest halfway through reading, bisexual, kneel down! ! !
Please Shuangnan! ! ! the Kind You Won't Want to Skip! ! !
A Delicate and Beautiful Kitten Needs to Be Pampered, Kissed and Coaxed.
Who doesn't understand cat sculpture? Beautiful and cute kittens are the cutest! !
I Want to Be Yandere, Clingy, Controlling, and Possessive.
Don't wear it quickly, please don't promote articles like quick wear and rebirth.
The Bottleneck Period Is Here, Let's Have a Good-Looking Shuangnan
I'm so Irritable Because of the Book Shortage😖 I'm Really Bored. Please Recommend Me😘
I couldn't find a book that was fresh and attractive. I found a few books at random. The plots were either cliche or I felt frustrated!! It was really annoying. Please recommend books that are fresh and interesting. I don't want to read books where the heroine is stupid and sweet and makes me feel frustrated. I don't want entertainment.


































































































It's so cool. Men are menstruating and women are going insane. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so beautiful that the five-guaranteed households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. Beautiful, God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which makes me realize that God does exist. I am so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.
It tastes so good. I feel that the author has a good outlook on things. "Love system, love game, love is never just for the other person." If you like it fast, you can join without thinking. Personally, I think the development is a little fast, but it is also very delicious. Now it is tied. "Happiness is always on thin ice, so be careful, and be careful again." I hope you can introduce or supplement the system. I hope the system is not just a tool to promote the development of the plot. Finally a frank explanation! I feel so happy when I see it. It is not possible to fall in love only by one person's accommodation. Xiao Shu chose to tolerate Chi's control and some shortcomings. In fact, Xiao Shu doesn't like this. If there is no system, Xiao Shu and Chi may not be as sweet as they are now. But it's great to be in the new year. Chi will not blame Xiao Shu for leaving him. He will only think about what he did wrong. Guess the reason for Xiao Shu's departure. Secretly test Xiao Shu and secretly pave the way for Xiao Shu. The road in the future will be smoother. The shortcoming is that I didn't ask Xiao Shu what he thought, and later he was transferred back to the technical department that Xiao Shu liked (os: The young couple is so sweet)
"Chi Zhong Zhi Shu" gave me a good and systematic response. Both of them are pitiful. After meeting each other, they realized that they were cared about and loved. They gave me the feeling that they were lonely and longed to be loved and cared about, so much so that they closed themselves off. The relationship between the two people is equal. The young couple made me cry to death. The teacher will be a good hand at writing sadistic articles, right? It can make countless people cry. When it's sweet, it's like being soaked in a honey pot 🍯 and the whole body is filled with sweetness.
It looks very good, the characters are also very good, and the setting is also very good. I have only seen this kind of setting in fast travel. Lightning protection point: 1 Two little bitter gourds, Shoubao doesn't know what love is, so the system's guidance is a bit like pua 2. Mrs. Gong is so obsessed with love. I understand that the basic role of a boss is to handle his own work well, because Shou Bao has pushed too many jobs, which is very uncomfortable. If the changes are not good, there is no need to write about the work. I have seen the original male protagonist in Chuan Shuwen always pushing work for Shou Bao, etc., And then the protagonist of Chuan Shu complained that the original male protagonist was not dedicated to his job. Just like the copywriter Bai Yueguang returned to China on the Internet. If the meeting is suspended, I will pick it up. The operation is suspended, I will pick it up. The shooting is paused, I'll pick it up... (I personally like love-minded people, but I also have a career-oriented mind) 3The names of the two protagonists don't work. The above are the highlights that I saw. If you are just mindless and like super love-minded people and have no ambition, it would be very sweet (I just saw Meng Bao leave and change the flight to return to China) Will add more after reading.
The writing is very good. I stayed up late to tie it. It can be seen that although the number of words is not particularly large, it has made great progress. There are a lot of feelings to describe below. At first it was obvious that it was an "industrial saccharin"? I can't say it, but the purpose is very obvious. The author just wanted to write a story where the protagonist travels to a mobile phone software as a love game character. The sense of purpose is very strong. Although there are reasons for the tense speed of getting along, it is still too fast (for me). There is no explanation of the development of science and technology from the side, and it is directly arranged so that the story (the protagonist) can be realistically projected, and one party can have feelings while the other party does not wait. It can be seen that the author really likes this XP (it is not an AI at least), and it does not require much thinking, in terms of describing the world view (although it is a modern world). But the handling of emotions (albeit very quickly) is very sympathetic and very consistent with the author... As soon as he writes about redemption and abuse, he forgets about love and becomes obsessed with it, which is called smooth. The progress is obvious. Later on, the "industrial saccharine" feeling of disobedience is basically gone (although the progress is still very fast). There is no longer the feeling that I wrote so long just to write this, and it becomes much smoother. There are a few spoilers below. Especially the part that has been updated so far, I like it very much. Although Gong was very shady in the early stage (I don't mean to say that it won't happen later), their relationship with each other is very normal and is changing. In the early stage, the protagonist never felt worthy and had no future. He became confident and stepped out of his own shadow. In the later stage, Gong began to recognize himself and learned to respect the protagonist. The process is well written and smooth, with no glitches. I am also giving you a reminder. Those who simply want to see those wet and coercive things should pay attention. They are not so perverted. Although I think it's very fast, it's still pretty good. It can be seen that it's an XP product. It probably doesn't have too many words, so it should be finished soon, right? The process is going very fast, so I guess there won't be many words. Even if it's finished, I think it will only be enough words to read in one day. I am looking forward to the author's next book. I hope that I can expand on the progress of the emotional plot and write a full-length novel. I flipped through the homepage and saw that it wasn't my first novel? I thought it was the first novel for a newbie, and the progress is really obvious. Unfortunately, the others are basically not my favorite type. It may be that I prefer long, emotionally tense and slower articles. The other ones I read are basically fast-paced and short stories, and the emotional development of this book is more in line with my appetite, so I feel that there is progress.
The author's views are extremely upright! Xiao Shu was also very cute when she was still on Shen's phone~ The system is really great! He would comfort and give warm words to Xiao Shu, and he really loved this system. Then Shen also gradually fell in love with Xiao Shu during daily chats. He did not hesitate to spend a lot of money to buy a machine, just so that Xiao Shu and he could meet together. It was really heartbreaking to learn about Xiaosu's previous experience, but we, Xiaosu, are very strong and have come out of it a long time ago. Later, when Xiao Shu appeared in reality, Shen saw it at first sight, and then respected him after seeing Xiao Shu pretending not to know him. After that, he also reflected, respected and learned. The hard work was not in vain. They confessed [Love] that this book is really good! I missed one point, Xiao Shu is really good at coding!
The writing is good and the content is good, but the name feels like a spelling of names, Shen Weichi, Chi Shu, which reminds me of the Golden Triangle (I have sensitive skin) Li Shu, Chi Jiahan, He Wei, Gu Yunchi
Personally, I think it's okay, and I also think it's xp. It's just that the progress of the love line is a bit fast, and it always feels a bit weird. Anyway, just don't read it with your brain. . . What a sweet article (don't scold, don't scold)
I give you the most direct, the most naked, the harshest, the sharpest, the most unadorned, the least roundabout, the least roundabout, the least tortuous, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the neatest, the most straightforward, the most decisive, and the least inked, The least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most poignant, the least merciless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about face, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the most direct, the most direct to the core, the most Tearing away the appearance, the least pretense, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least greeting, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least sensational, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least internal friction, the least nonsense, the least elaboration, the least redundant, the least The words that are the least empty, the least detoured, the least detoured, the least grindy, the least coy, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, and the least pretentious are words that tell you: This is a very nice book! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! !
Five stars will be filled directly! Who knows! This book really suits my taste! Double cleansing + time travel + Daddy attack with a ten-year age difference, the setting directly hit all my favorite points! The rhythm of the plot is super comfortable, the emotional line is sweet but not greasy, and there is no industrial saccharine at all. The more you watch it, the more you get addicted! The author has a very upright outlook on things, and the setting of the love system and paper lovers is also very thoughtful. It can be seen that he has polished it carefully! The updates are also very stable. Every time I wait for an update, I feel anxious. Please keep writing! Sisters who didn't watch it, close your eyes and rush, you won't lose money if you invest!
It's so good-looking, it's a story about two people who are clean and their first love. It's the same year. There are no surprises, and the emotional line is not a bit sad. The wedding part in the finale is very well written. Sometimes Xiaochi is really a dank male ghost. Xiaochi and Xiaoshu should be happy in the parallel world [Sending Hearts]
It's great. I'm a very picky person, but this novel is so well written. It's extremely clean, without any angry points. The plot is smooth and the intention is high. The author is so awesome. This is the novel that should really become popular. It's much better than a certain boy band series.
Oops, I'll go, it's so good-looking. When I first read the introduction, I didn't particularly want to watch it, but then I looked at it and I felt that they have a pretty upright outlook on things, and I'm particularly good-looking. Hey, I'll go. The man named Shen is too kind to himself. This one is really nice, but the rating is a bit low. The author's thoughts are really good. He teaches us that to love others, we must love ourselves first. And I also like this sentence when I read novels. In the novels I read before, for example, those people give up everything for their lovers, I can't accept it.
Super pretty! It's a theme I've never seen before, super novel! ! I hope you can publish more books in the future! Shen Weichi changed himself for Chi Shu, Xiao Shu will also get rid of his inferiority complex because of him, and the system baby is also awesome! Xiaochi and Xiaoshu should always be happy...
It's tied in one breath, it's very good-looking, there are no outstanding points for me at the moment, and what's rare is that almost all of them are normal people, the protagonist is normal, the system is normal (the system does not give random opinions, makes the subject lose his own judgment, and can even guide the subject in a positive direction, which is great), and the assistant is normal. It's very smooth and not procrastinating. Basically what you want to do one second is done the next second. It's very fast, and it's also a confirmation of feelings. You've already taken action before you even start to confirm that you like it. Then there are some people who don't understand why both parties are pretending not to know each other. I support this behavior very much. Love should not force the other party to become what you like (but then again, love will make people accommodating, so both parties need to make concessions, give up something that can be transferred, and keep some bottom lines). When accepting love, you need to confirm what you really need, so when both parties are immature and irrational, it is not suitable to be together impulsively, so I think in fact, they both Both parties are giving each other and themselves space to think, and they even know that the other party knows that it is just not suitable to take this step before truly recognizing themselves. Let the person who is accustomed to dependence be independent, and let the person who is accustomed to possessiveness let go. This is a more important thing before getting together, and it can also make the subsequent love very stable. It also solves some of the hidden dangers and risks of entering into an intimate relationship too quickly in the early stage. All in all, so far, it's very interesting, and the author is great! ! ! !
I like it so much. Chi Shu is so cute. It really pokes fun at my setting. It warms my heart when I see it. The two little bitter gourds please redeem each other and stay together forever. Today is still 5.21. Hey, Shen Wei and Chi Shu will always be happy.
It's so beautiful. It's finally tied. Both of them have long mouths! The baby Xiaoshu is so cute. He is just a very strong and thin little raccoon cat. His life experience is so distressing that I really want to take her to be my wife😡😡😡😡😡😡😡But I am not as gentle as his husband, not as rich as his husband, and not as enlightened as his husband. OK, I agree to this marriage😭😭
Oh My God is so good. At first, I just fell in love with the author's character description and the novel setting of the paper man. The more I read, the better it gets. I didn't expect that the subsequent development will be the growth of the novel and Shen Weichi's "growing up". It's so well written! ! ! Love your neighbor first and love yourself first [Sending Hearts] I hope we can all try bravely and be ourselves! ! ! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] The last thing is the last, Chi Shu 99 [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]
After reading it, I think this novel is a combination of sweet love stories and redemption. It feels like Dada has been developing the characters, and the emotions are great. This novel is really no exception! ! ! Looking forward to Dada's new works [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
This is the only one that I can listen to to the end. The author's writing is very good, and he is not as brainless as other authors. The love between the two CPs is pure mutual understanding and mutual change. In the end, it is not as bad as other novels. According to me, the writing is getting better and better. I will make myself think that the writing is getting worse and worse. I don't read many novels because they are unfinished, and they become less and less interesting as they go to the end. This is the only novel that I have been able to finish in almost two years since Tomato Novels. I wish 99 these two CPs, come on, the author, I hope you can write better articles.
Oh my god, the writing is so awesome. I was attracted by the introduction and read it straight away. I couldn't stop reading it. To be honest, the three views of this article are really upright. When you love someone, you must give him enough respect and you cannot force the other person for your own desires. Also, if you love your lover, you must love yourself first. You must give it a thumbs up. What's more, my favorite is This system, he gives me the feeling that he is like Xiao Shu's parents, teaching Xiao Shu to achieve his own goals, and also promoting the relationship between Xiao Shu and Shen. I think he is the "person" who hopes for Xiao Shu's happiness the most. The unbinding of the system in the last chapter has a slightly sad feeling. No matter what, the young lovers must be happy for a long time.
All I can say is, nb, you've earned enough to make me shed tears... It's really good, good for Chi Shu, good for Shen Weichi, good for the system, good for everyone. The precedent for loving others is to love yourself, young lovers should have a good time [crying]
I think the plot is pretty good and quite novel. I originally planned to give it a four-star rating because I thought it was really good, but it didn't have that very good feeling. But the monologue on the last page really touched my little heart. I think the role of this system in the whole process is the sublimation part of this book, which is equivalent to the author's soul and the author's thoughts, which can be fully reflected. I think this is a nice finishing touch. Hope to see more good books in the future.
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The focus of this article in the early stage is the process of two people falling in love. The character background is a bit one-sided, because he needs to be raised by Shen. After breaking away from the game, he stood up and his character became clear and three-dimensional. Xiao Shu is capable and ideal, and he is perseverant. Shen didn't know how to love someone because of lack of love, but he learned, grew, and listened. He learned to let go and how to truly love. How to use your own abilities to lift your loved ones instead of imprisoning them. Xiaoshu also seized every help in time to learn and grow. Every main character in the author's writing is three-dimensional and vivid. The assistant's character is no longer just an assistant. They break away from the one-sided, reliable, money-loving or contrast established by many novels. They have their own thoughts. They will tell the president within the scope of their position because they can clearly see what the novel likes. They will stop in time when the president does not listen. They know how to measure and reflect their own thoughts.
The introduction is not deceiving, and the author's writing style is also okay. The system is really good, and Shen Chi is really in love with each other. Because it is a short story, the pace is very fast, but it is very comfortable and there is no jumping feeling. But even though it is he, there will still be a little bit of tears, such as Chi's previous life, Shen's behavior just after he left the game, and how he and Shen changed when they couldn't recognize each other later. The subject matter is considered novel. I haven't seen anything similar to the plot direction so far. It's very good. However, the ending may be a little brief, but I still look forward to some of their life fragments in the future. Because it just finished, I don't know if there will be any extras, so I'm looking forward to it [laughs]
It's so beautiful. The author's views are very upright, and the character setting is also very good. Baby Chi Shu is so cute (*/∇\*) It feels a little distressing at first, but later they can confess, stand side by side, and get married. I wish them happiness 99 [Sending Hearts]
Why is it that I am so good-looking? The author has a very positive view on love. You can feel full of love for the characters he writes. Little by little, he teaches Xiao Shu how to love himself, and teaches Mr. Shen how to respect his lover [crying] Watching two people redeem each other and respect each other, I am really touched [almost crying]
Nice. Paranoid possessiveness, super low self-esteem, x-genius and petite kitten (whose later dog training skills are top-notch) It should be the pinnacle of the 🍅completed articles I have read in the past three months. Delicate feelings flow like water, and the beginning of the relationship between the two is accelerated by the use of nook and corner to ignite love, and it also ignites the passion for reading. From the perspective of the protagonist's psychological journey, both parties are extremely complete. Loving people is like raising flowers. Shen You loves Xiaochi very well. I even have a nurturing feeling when looking at Xiaochi's growth process.
What I see now is 7.5, Which is too low and completely inconsistent with the content. I skipped through it, reading the previous part to get a general background of the story, and then jumped directly to the first few chapters where Xiao Shu and Lao Shen reunited. The author's three senses are very upright. The prerequisite for loving others is to love yourself well. Xiaoshu Baobao did it right, and the system is also very good. It will always guide Xiaoshu Baobao in the right direction. Lao Shen has also made changes and learned to respect his lover. There seems to be a catch in the early stage, which is the message in the comment area that I read. It is probably that Lao Shen is very possessive and controlling. There was an unequal relationship in the early love, but Lao Shen later made changes, and the two have been getting along and respecting each other.