The Father of the Soul Who Started as a Pirate

The author is good, the writing is very good, I hope you can stick to it Why did you go to other worlds when you were developing so well? I don't want to see them anymore.

This is the first time I read a novel about Lingling's sexual transformation. It's more of a light-hearted genre. It's so well written that I hope it will be updated more frequently.

The writing style is light and humorous. Although the main character is very disdainful and likes to make bad jokes, the image of a fat boy is very good at reducing the bad feeling. A character who would appear greasy and vulgar when placed on a handsome adult would only be funny when placed on a chubby boy.

It looks very good so far. I really like the character design of the main character who likes to complain. It is similar to Gintama. It doesn't seem to be like an AI novel. I hope it can be updated continuously.

It's good to watch. I like it. I hope it's better without cp.

It seems to be okay so far. It feels very relaxing. Although there is a plug-in that allows you to go to other worlds. To be honest, this plug-in makes me want to give up. But in the end, I can still feel the super relaxation of the protagonist. Anyway, it looks quite comfortable to me.

Chapter 47, for me, I haven't found any bad points so far. It's very boring. It's just that there are too few updates. By the way, 8,000 words a day is not too much, right? [Thinking] Let me have a taste of the 180 chapters first, and give me more updates! ! ! Looking forward to the follow-up development of the protagonist. Since the protagonist will become "Big Daddy" in the future, I wonder how he got the child? Directly convince people with force and let the defeated general call him daddy? Convince people with virtue, give fatherly love and accept sons just like Whitebeard? Or some other way? The Harry Potter volume is a bit boring, and it contains too many private goods and settings. It looks very bad. Maybe the author also noticed the problem with this volume, so he quickly finished it.

The story is interesting, and although it is humorous, it does not destroy the entire world view. It can be seen that the author's skills are indeed powerful, and this is the first time I have seen this kind of writing. It should be the old author, The Demon from Outside the Territory. The writing is really good.

The Pirates part was okay, but I don't know what the author was thinking. He was afraid that his grades would be too good. After 40 chapters, he wrote 30 chapters of Fairy Tail. Not all readers are interested in both works [awkward laugh]

This book has many advantages, such as a lot of laughs, a relatively normal outlook on life, and the ability to make up for regrets. There are certain poisonous points. For example, the name, I like to make jokes about hell, and travel across the world. The potential is good, and it is expected to be above 9.6 Points. If the combat power is reduced by a million words, it can be better. There is also a very important thing. I suggest the author to update it five times a day [you take a closer look] This book will be good to read. There are time-travel elements, time-travel elements, and time-travel elements. The important things are mentioned three times, but the author will introduce the world view and the writing is very simple. The writing style is not bad. It has the strength of an average author, but it is still recommended to reduce the combat power. I have read a few chapters recently and I feel that if I can write better, I can get a rating of 9.0 Or above.

Looking at the comments section, it says that a lot of people are here for the single pirate. Don't those people read the introduction? The author said it was a comprehensive comic from the beginning. They also use this as an excuse to give me a low score. I feel that the writing is very good, the setting is very novel, and the cheating is very normal. It's just that the Gate of All Realms inserted into the system is too rigid. But it doesn't affect the look and feel.

Originally, I would not read novels with less than 300,000 words, but this setting really attracted me. I also saw the author saying in a certain chapter that he had saved the manuscript. That's pretty good [Chigua] Back to the novel itself, maybe because of the newbie, the plot is a bit slow and a bit like a running story, and there is no climax until the latest chapter, but overall it's okay. Come on. Also, I read that the author said there is no cp, so who can help me make up for the Katakuri I'm missing [smile]?

If you only like to listen to books or read slowly, choose carefully, because it will amplify the awkward feeling that certain sentences bring to you. Of course, if you are more tolerant or read quickly, you can still read this article. After all, the subject matter is relatively new. Although Pirates is written badly, this is the first time I have seen the male version of Aunt.

It's okay. It's quite interesting to write about pirates. I'm really looking forward to his interactions with Rocks, Kaido, and Whitebeard. But Fairy Tail was inserted too early. It feels like I changed the story halfway through. I hope the main perspective is still the world of pirates. In short, the author will continue to work hard. If the follow-up is good, I will review it with five stars.

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Didn't you even read the introduction? This is unlimited streaming. I see that there is no big problem now. Others have opinions. Basically, they are traveling through different worlds. Just update more. After all, every novel cannot satisfy everyone's appetite. All problems depend on updates [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good, I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished (this guy No. 1 Is Loki, there's nothing wrong with adding No. 2 And No. 3, Teacher Kai and Barrett, right? [Sneaky laugh] No. 4 Can be Jhin and give him a fruit. If he still joins the Rocks Pirates, and doesn't disturb the plot of the Valley of Gods, No. 5 And No. 6 Bear and Blackbeard [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh])

Another book called Soul Soul Fruit, which is pretty good. I hope I can stick with it. Other Soul Soul Fruit and Auntie's protagonist books can't even last a hundred chapters.

It's ok. It looks pretty good so far. Come on💪 But you can change the introduction. Otherwise, if some people don't like it, the rating will be lowered.

It's very interesting, maybe because I've also watched Naruto and Harry Potter, so I felt that many of the characters were poorly written. Especially the characters of Pirates are written very vividly, come on, keep updating [punch out][punch out][punch out]

At first, I felt that the part of Fairy Tail Crossing was average. The main reason was that I had not read the original work, so I couldn't get into it. But the later part of traveling through Harry Potter is much better. Although I haven't read Harry Potter, this part is quite interesting. It gets even better when you go back to the original timeline, and the more you look at it, the more you get hooked. Five-star praise.

Was it a little too late for the first world to travel through? And he actually went to a world like Fairy Tail, which is not very popular. Overall not bad [like]

At present, I can give five stars, but Fairy Tail came too early, which is equivalent to taking a shower in the middle of a meal. It is too awkward. Everyone is watching your development in the pirate world. The small world is a transition time after development. I will deduct one star. I will change the review after I finish writing.

The writing is quite good, but the data is not very good. Maybe the word count is a little short, but I'd better stick to it.

Good idea. The writing style is average, the logic is smooth, the rhythm is perfect, the characters have enough emotions, and the explanations are clear enough. There are no obvious shortcomings. The advantage is that it flows easily, but the sudden transition to the heavens is a bit stiff and abrupt. The subsequent plot of One Piece can only be proud or collapse. Most likely it's still invincible. Nothing to see.

When will I finish writing Harry Potter? I've been waiting to skip this and start the next one.

Within a month, this book has been read at least 300,000 times and the rating should be above 8.5.

Although, has the protagonist been assimilated? The part about picking your nose...

If I were to use Soul Fruit to create Pokémon or Monster Hunters, I would first create a Thunder Cloud or Ghost-type to play around with.

Let me give you 5 points first, it's quite fun. The two-level rating is just to complain about the multi-dimensional world. In fact, it is not bad. From One Piece to the plot for decades, it is better to travel around and play. It depends on personal acceptance [Thoughts]