Just Came Out of the World and Was Raised by Fairy Qing Leng

In the early stage, you spend some time grinding on the mountain, and then turn on the road text mode after descending the mountain. The multiple heroines will definitely accept them all and won't cause any mess. Lou Yao definitely doesn't know how to eat, nor does he pretend to be a pig to eat feed. If you have any comments, please leave a message, thank you. I was also convinced. I was originally writing about the youthful spirit, but why does everyone want to write about your lifeless character? Must it be boring, must it be forbearing, must it be cold? I originally came from Wudi Liushuang, so I have to pay attention to the character's personality, story, transformation and other things. I tried to avoid lightning by all the tags I put in my profile, but I also got into a lot of trouble. I used the harem tag. Some people said that it would be better to give a negative review if it was a single female protagonist, but I didn't say anything because it was okay if he really thought so. I used someone as the background, and I didn't say anything when I gave it four stars because of the facts. But I can't help but write a female-channeled novel. My protagonist's personality is obviously biased towards the young Yang Guo, okay? Yes, yes, you have to kill decisively, you have to be cold-faced, you have to have everyone surrounding you... My evaluation is that The Dragon is a female-channeled novel and the protagonist is too cowardly. The Condor is a female-channeled novel. The protagonist has a strange scent and was bullied in the early stage. Moreover, he is a lonely kind of person. Has my protagonist ever been deflated so far? Didn't even eat it! He often recites female-channeled novels, making it seem like he has read many books. Have you actually read a girl's video, and how many books have you read?

The book is relatively slow to pick up at the moment. I have read about half of it. The elder sister of Qing Leng Nian Shang [Adoration] is still Bingjia➕arrogant and possessive. She will get angry whenever she is next to the protagonist [laughing] But judging from the label, there are many female protagonists. I look forward to the plot of Shura Field in the future. It is so exciting. Master is a woman who can be my mother [shy]

Finally, Shili has made a fortune, as long as he keeps updating😋 Also, pay attention to whether the number of female protagonists in harem novels is good or not, it will be better It feels like it's seeping through ai

The rough reading feels good, the plot is coherent and not jerky, and it is not toxic at the moment. One problem is that some parts are too delicate, which is reflected in the first three chapters (many descriptions of appearance) and the modifiers in the dialogue parts of other chapters, such as the tone is light, the tone is light, and the tone is flat. In fact, words that have no effect on the character and plot can be omitted. The language is still a little more feminine, the corners of the mouth are often "curved", and the male protagonist's ears are red more often than other female characters.

It's pretty good [laughs evilly], it's not a cliche story. Each character has his or her own fate and calamity, and the daily life is well written. I just don't know how the harem line will develop, but I hope it won't become a repetitive plot like "robbing-imprisonment-robbing-imprisonment" in the heroine novel hh. However, the male protagonist has a good character. At least he is frank in his actions and will not make big mistakes like "concealing things". It feels like there is a lack of process and details in some places. Just like the relationship in the article, it is just mentioned as "gentle and humorous". However, judging from the personality of the male protagonist in the front, it is really hard to see where the humor comes from... The same goes for the subsequent conversations, which are often silent and never a dialogue maker.

Come on, big brother who writes about Huang Shu

Immortal, I would like to call you the strongest among the martial arts. Even now, the world view is quite large, and there are probably many female protagonists. The writing is too slow! Not enough! I also hope that the writing will not collapse later. If there is an outline, the probability of collapse is still quite small.

Overall, it's well written. Some people may think it's a little bit toxic in some places, but it's harmless. The main reason is that I feel that writing Ke Jie as the prototype of the protagonist would be a bit disrespectful to Ke Jie, and it always feels weird when I read it. (I am a very, very amateur Go fan)

So far, it seems to be a good martial arts novel, and it follows a refreshing flow. However, I feel that the realm rises too quickly, and the martial arts may collapse a bit later, and it turns into boring daily life, resulting in a hasty ending [plus one on the bookshelf]

It's pretty good. After reading the first few dozen chapters, it feels like it will be a one-woman master-disciple novel with about 300 chapters. I don't know how there will be more women in the back. It may be that the protagonist is injured and rescued. The plot between me and the master is pretty good now. It's okay to give it a 5-star rating now. There are occasional minor flaws, and there's no need to go into details about the combat power. I've been reading love stories about cultivating immortals on Tomato. Unless the combat power collapses, it's not a big deal.

What a good book. I haven't seen any serious points so far. The plot is quite coherent. The author has literary talent, but he should talk about it or not. The master should be telegraphed. He is so dazzling at the age of 14.

Hehe, what should I say? When I saw the rating, my first reaction was a very poisonous expression. But after reading the title of the book, I clicked in out of curiosity. Let me take a look at what's going on (when the child is Shennong), and it turns out that it's not bad. The first few chapters will feel weird, but after the master and the master accept each other, it becomes better. It's sweet (Master is still a fairy in the sky ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა) The emotional line of the story with multiple female protagonists is not bad😄😄😄The female protagonist is not treated as a tool

This book is very delicious. The important thing is that the young man is wise, can distinguish the deliberate expressions of women when faced with them, and has a strong sense of responsibility. That kind of quaint and ethereal atmosphere is enough to write about. It's full of literary youth, but I hope the author will work harder and update it.

In fact, I think this book is perfect if it is written with a single female protagonist. Having multiple female protagonists is a bit of a fly in the ointment. But after all, the protagonist is going down the mountain to travel around the world, and he will definitely have to meet multiple confidants. I can only say that the writing is pretty good so far, and I hope it will continue to be maintained. The emotional handling between multiple female protagonists will not collapse.

This is a very good martial arts novel. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is described very delicately. I see that there is nothing toxic about it now. I look forward to the Shura Field in the future, but there are too few. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

I am an old reader. From Lu Yuchuan to now, I feel that the first one I have written is not as good as the first one. It is a pity that I have not updated it. OK, I hope this one will not be eunuch. So far, the writing is quite good, but a bit bland. I want to see blood flowing like a river [angry], when will Shura Field [sneaky laugh]

If you are reading qcqs, please give me a five-star review to encourage the author. I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this book after reading it. I hope the author will not be affected by the high sequence of martial arts and continue to maintain a lightning-proof attitude for sensitive skin. There should be no thunder and no green.

It turns out that he is a fan of Hexue, no wonder. This male protagonist is written as if it is difficult to brew, and there is a high probability that he will have sex later.

Cultivation novels covered in martial arts skins, apart from the realm of martial arts, the other aspects, whether it is the world view, the sect structure, the secret realm, etc., Are completely the world of cultivating immortals.

Where can you run away from the thunder? ! Jiutian Xuanlei gives me electricity!

[Smile] The State Grid had a power outage for one day because of Master and Feng Qiuhuang.

Master's writing is so tempting, male lead, why do you still have a harem?

Kids, I found gold in shit [licking screen]

It's so cool, it's completely the ultimate goblin fantasy [laughing and crying]

It's pretty good, the storyline is well rendered.

Hao Chi [Love] is considered a masterpiece in Tomato

Looks great as always, please update me more soon! ! ! The first volume is more daily, and the details are well written. Personally, I still prefer the male and female protagonists, a bit like Xiao Longnu and Yang Guo. The author also said so. The second volume is about wandering the world, I think it's pretty good, mainly because the author is good at writing about emotions... Hmm... To be honest, it's not good to have too many female protagonists. I don't know how to deal with it later.

What do the last two tags mean?

Haji's emotions are so well written, and the characters are not rigid. There are some poisonous points found in other books of the same type. This book also avoids lightning. Moreover, because Haji's writing is so good, I always have a feeling of substitution. No, no, no, it feels like the author is following me to write this novel.

Invincible, okay, come on, author, I will follow [sending my heart]